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I've updated the OOC basically stating to stay on the path of the four main classes that you've chosen until you hit the level in which you unlock subclasses!
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@Avemelle Maybe you buy skills with skill points and you get abilities by doing other stuff?
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AIGHT SURE LET'S DO THIS!



Your character is very interesting, I suggest putting hiders on your character images as they are a bit large! On the other hand your skills seem a bit 'high-level', meaning they are described in a very powerful manner. Remember that you are starting off as a beginner warrior so don't expect black flames emitting from your sword, think of skills that use up a lot of stamina than your used to our a special backflip that leads into a striking attack. A majority of these skills are good for a high-level warrior but does not fit a low-level warrior! ^^ Also I forgot a very vital part of the character sheet which is the background! I'm so sorry about that! >.<
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@Lord of Evil Define abilities?
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@CelesteEste A martial artist would fall under warrior. And as for a, "bow using ranger type" would fall under Archer and the subclass would be Ranger to focus on its bow ability while a warrior with a bow would be possible as a warrior subclass. I'll fix up the OOC more to better explain the mechanics! ^^


Archer is not one of the four classes on the OP, so I guess it's unavailable? Or was it a typo and you meant Rogue/Gunner?
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@CelesteEste Oh my god! I misquoted myself a bow user would fall under rogue and would evolve into archer and/or ranger! I'm so sorry about that! The rogue class can use both light-melee weapons and ranged weapons at the same time!
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<Snipped quote by Firestorm>

Your character is very interesting, I suggest putting hiders on your character images as they are a bit large! On the other hand your skills seem a bit 'high-level', meaning they are described in a very powerful manner. Remember that you are starting off as a beginner warrior so don't expect black flames emitting from your sword, think of skills that use up a lot of stamina than your used to our a special backflip that leads into a striking attack. A majority of these skills are good for a high-level warrior but does not fit a low-level warrior! ^^ Also I forgot a very vital part of the character sheet which is the background! I'm so sorry about that! >.<


Also he forgot the secret password
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@Phantomlink959 Yes he did :eyes:
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@Lord of Evil Define abilities?


I was referring to your discussion on skills and abilities, so I guess I'd ask you that.
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I was referring to your discussion on skills and abilities, so I guess I'd ask you that.


Abilities are unlearned skills that you see in public and can only turn into skills once you meet the requirement for the abilities class and skill-point requirement.
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@Avemelle - NOTED! Howzabout now?
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I've updated the class and skill section! Hopefully I've cleared some things up for you all!
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Here we are, I think it's a solid first draft. Going for a fish out of water team dad sort of thing with a fun cowboy spin.

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@Firestorm I'm liking your character so far! I'm hoping to see him? Her? Become more developed as the story goes on, your skills are properly fixed now and I'm loving how flashy the names are! Though your character is technically accepted I won't be accepting any Character Card's until I see other people's character cards! I'd like to accept peoples applications in bulk! >:O I hope you don't mind ^^
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@Phantomlink959 Your character sheet is going good so far! ^^
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@Avemelle - No sweat! Totally get wanting to get things in bulk, makes things whole lot easier! Oshiro Yuudai is the future evil emperor, and a dork, expect even flashier names in the future. Him/her is ah, touchy subject, for them. Getting on Yuudai's good side would basically just be "Yes Emperor of All Darkness" and things like that!
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@Avemelle
Any specific notes for improvements to be made?
If not I think I'll leave him as is for now.
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@CelesteEste

Also! Lucky for you I do play FFXIV and I am familiar with the red mage in the MMO! So I suggest if you want to do something similar have a vessel similar to a crystal to apply your magic to and then become a magician that focuses on offensive and support capabilities! ^^

And if you'd like to be a martial artist then you'd want to focus and speed and strength which aligns more towards rogue, so you should definitely be a warrior or rogue (depends on how you'd like to play with your martial-artist ) with gauntlets as weapons and then have skills relating to gauntlet-based attacks! ^^
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@Phantomlink959It's a bit plain and bare but gets straight to the point! But since it's a draft its understandable.
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Alright, here's my dude. I don't know what you think about illusion spells but I figured it would be useful in an adventure. At any rate, tell me if you have issues with it.

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