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Wheee I know there's alot of bad juju around posting a WIP but I'm gonna do it anyway.

Alli is my peppy young hiker photographer chick. I need to finish her inventories and flesh some stuff out but hopefully it's a good guideline of where I'm going with her

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@Mae Alli's looking good so far! Just a couple notes as you continue working:


  • The bracelet, watch, and even the camera and backpack should end up in the Accessories section if she's wearing them
  • With the canonically large hoodie with extra pockets, I'll allow Alli to have up to 14 hand/pocket slots unless she's wearing skinny jeans or some other pants with shallow pockets (though it seems like she'd probably wear baggy pants too?)
  • You don't have to label which pocket each item is in, but if you don't mind doing it, it's a lot of fun to know! :)
  • The same goes for the flavor text for each item, but I definitely like it, so don't change/remove it unless you want to!
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@Alamantus Made a few edits before posting (inventory additions, last name, requested edits), hope everything's still okay with you!
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@Dusksong Looks perfect!
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@Alamantus Is there an estimated start time on this? Like when will an intro post go up?
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@Dusksong The intro post has been up since I created this thread in the 0th post in the IC tab, actually.

I've been waiting for the others to post their characters because this game can't really introduce characters later on without some significant changes...
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@Mae and @rush99999 how are the character sheets coming, or are you still interested in playing?
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I don't think I'll be able to do this after all. Sorry for any trouble this may cause.
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@Alamantus Right, totally forgot about that. Would IC posts be allowed now?
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@Dusksong Let's wait just another day to see if @Mae replies. They have most of their character sheet done, so we'll see.

I don't think I'll be able to do this after all. Sorry for any trouble this may cause.


No problem! Thanks for letting me know!
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@Alamantus@Dusksong sorry for the wait, got so swept up in some things I blanked. I've just become aware of the fact I might be holding progress back because of it ><

Will have a finished sheet together by tommorrow at the latest. If I am holding people back, feel free to get started. I can have my character either unconscious for a bit longer in the corner so she's less noticeable (if she gets accepted) to account for possible discrepancies

This is likely the second time I've slowed the thread down a bit and I'm aware of that, I'll try to be more conscious going forward. I think once I have an IC post up it'll be more cemented in my mind that I need to keep better track of this thread :D

Still very much looking forward to exploring a modern character in a new interesting system.
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sorry for the wait, got so swept up in some things I blanked. I've just become aware of the fact I might be holding progress back because of it ><


That's alright! I've been trying not to rush anyone, but it definitely has almost been a month since the thread started, so I think we're all a little antsy. :)

Will have a finished sheet together by tommorrow at the latest. If I am holding people back, feel free to get started. I can have my character either unconscious for a bit longer in the corner so she's less noticeable (if she gets accepted) to account for possible discrepancies


That's a good idea; I'll roll with that if you're ok with it! I'm sure the character sheet will end up being fine either way.

This is likely the second time I've slowed the thread down a bit and I'm aware of that, I'll try to be more conscious going forward. I think once I have an IC post up it'll be more cemented in my mind that I need to keep better track of this thread :D

Still very much looking forward to exploring a modern character in a new interesting system.


No huge pressure, but we'd appreciate that if you're able to! I'm glad you're still up for playing!

@Vertigo are you still on board? I think I'm gonna go ahead and start/let your characters start playing! @Dusksong, if you wanna start interacting with what's in the room, you can go ahead!
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Still here, yeah! I'll see about getting a post in either tomorrow (Mondays are super hectic for me though, so no promises) or at the very least Tuesday.
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Posted! Hope I did that right.

Duncan does have a lighter, but in his current state, didn't think to use it yet. Once he hears something to indicate there are other people in the room, he'll whip it out for at least a little bit of extra light.

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Posted! Hope I did that right.

Duncan does have a lighter, but in his current state, didn't think to use it yet. Once he hears something to indicate there are other people in the room, he'll whip it out for at least a little bit of extra light.


Looks great! :D
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@Alamantus Are the characters in the same room?

//edit: Also, should we attach an updated CS to each post, or keep editing the one in the CS tab?
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@Alamantus Are the characters in the same room?

Yeah, all of them are there against that same wall but spread far enough apart that you'd have to reach to feel anyone.

//edit: Also, should we attach an updated CS to each post, or keep editing the one in the CS tab?


Just edit the one in the CS tab unless you really want to keep a history of what your items/stats previously were, in which case I'd say make new posts in the Characters tab.
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Hmm, for my next post-- should I end it with Duncan turning on the lights, or ask for a description of what he will see when flicking the switch in advance? Then I could incorporate him doing that and his reaction in my next post already.

I'm mostly asking because I think logically he would turn the switch on before/while replying to Pebs, so if I should end my post with that, I need to keep it pretty short.
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Hmm, for my next post-- should I end it with Duncan turning on the lights, or ask for a description of what he will see when flicking the switch in advance? Then I could incorporate him doing that and his reaction in my next post already.


I'd say go with the second one just to keep the flow going. It makes sense for Duncan to reply to what Pebs is saying before seeing the room.
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Ok, I'll go with that. I'll just say he hadn't yet reached the switch when he heard her, so it'll make sense for him to not jump for it.

I won't be able to post until Saturday (got a whole day work event tomorrow), but I'll be around more on the weekend. Sorry for the delay!
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