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Well, first kaiju sheet.


Hey Clanjos! So, for your Kaiju, the only concerns I have are the deadlifting and the Greek martial arts. As far as those go, I like that you specified most kaiju, but about what size? Just anything smaller than him? And as for the Greek Martial Arts, I'm fine with him knowing some forms of grappling and other strategic moves based on the kaiju he's fighting, but full-on martial arts probably isn't the best idea. You'd definitely have to explain how he knows the martial arts if you're adamant about keeping it in.
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Well, I was figuring his deadlift caps out on anything at least 10 meters bigger than him- larger stuff can still be lifted, but he can only barely move while holding it up.

As for the martial art and grappling, I was going for an angle where he was interacting with the ancestors of the ancient Greeks and learned their fighting style to defend himself against other monsters, and might have taught them something or other in exchange, leading to the depiction of titans as givers of knowledge and secrets in Greek myth.
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Putting in yet another provisional post.
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Can someone approve this please?


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@RisingSun I did not give you permission for you to post into the IC. Please have your character accepted before posting it in the CS and going forward.

On that note, I do apologize for not reviewing this sooner. I'm discussing this with my fellow GM as we speak.
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@RisingSun I did not give you permission for you to post into the IC. Please have your character accepted before posting it in the CS and going forward.

On that note, I do apologize for not reviewing this sooner. I'm discussing this with my fellow GM as we speak.


That’s fine. It’s up to you if you want me to delete it or not or if you want me to just edit the profile in general. I did make several attempts including PMing you in particular to no avail, thus I figured that it was fine.
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@RisingSun

Hey dude! Well, you've got to wait until you're accepted to get into the IC. Other than that, there are a few issues I've noticed with your sheet.

The first being the plasma: I'd nerf that just a little, making it capable of blasting through about ten feet of steel rather than annihilating total mountains. I think that's a pretty fair nerf. Other than that, I'd take out one of your manipulations, either electricity or earth.

If you do those, that seems like an acceptable character in my mind. Wait for Lmp's two cents though!
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@MsMorningstar I agree with her recommendations for the most part.

Other than that, he looks fine. Just change those powers and you'll be good to go. You can keep the profile and post, but for the future, please let GMs review your profile first before doing your thing. That's the standard you'll see in all RPs here on the guild.
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@RisingSun

Hey dude! Well, you've got to wait until you're accepted to get into the IC. Other than that, there are a few issues I've noticed with your sheet.

The first being the plasma: I'd nerf that just a little, making it capable of blasting through about ten feet of steel rather than annihilating total mountains. I think that's a pretty fair nerf. Other than that, I'd take out one of your manipulations, either electricity or earth.

If you do those, that seems like an acceptable character in my mind. Wait for Lmp's two cents though!


Gotcha. Anyways, I’ll change what you stated about plasma. While I’m fine with removing one of the two manipulations, would you be fine with instead of manipulating electricity, that my beast simply is able to conduct it. As he’s able to exert it through its body but defensive purposes only but not really use it offensively.
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<Snipped quote by MsMorningstar>

Gotcha. Anyways, I’ll change what you stated about plasma. While I’m fine with removing one of the two manipulations, would you be fine with instead of manipulating electricity, that my beast simply is able to conduct it. As he’s able to exert it through its body but defensive purposes only but not really use it offensively.


That's alright. You can have him utilize this.
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@lmpkio @Msmorningstar it’s done. I assume we’re fine now? I posted the final in the character’s section
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Are you guys still accepting? I see you're still considering someone else just above, but obviously don't want to go ahead and start a CS if you're going to be full with his acceptance. It's cool either way
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@RisingSun You're fine now. If you'd like, consider joining the discord! You should find it on the first intro post in the OCC.

@CaptainSully Still a good amount of room!
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Ok cool

Below is a firmly WiP CS for my Kaiju but feel free to comment on what is there already. I'll repost it when i get it completed. I'm flexible with pretty much everything so just be open and honest.

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@CaptainSully Well we definitely lack in the traditional dragons category - so having one would be nice for a change of pace.

Looks fine so far. We will await the finished product.
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Replaced my provisional post with a collaborative update.
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I’m done.

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@CaptainSully Looks good! I don't see any problems with it.

Let my other GM @MsMorningstar take a look to make sure I didn't overlook anything and if she's fine with it, you may post it in the CS.
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