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@Shiny Keldeo It's fine, it's really fine. I understand completely! I'm just trying to be clear, I'm not like...offended, or anything, lol.

Okay, so you're saying that her backstory should be longer? Because she's already been on many adventures with Sonic and friends? I was keeping that vague so we could plot it out later if we wanted since I wasn't sure if this was a totally new timeline or not. So, the Amy here is a very experienced bot-smasher, then, because she's been on lots of adventures with Sonic and friends. Cool, cool.

Do I have to...go into detail about it...though? Lol? Because there's like a million Sonic games between SA1 and Forces. And I haven't even come close to playing all of them.

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Do I have to...go into detail about it...though? Lol? Because there's like a million Sonic games between SA1 and Forces. And I haven't even come close to playing all of them.


I figured a lot of older stuff was kind of a given that didn't need to be said, which is why the events of Heroes is a throwaway joke in Vector's CS instead of actually being in his history lol
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@Shiny Keldeo So, I was thinking that maybe Julian would have the same background as he did in the comics, but, instead of sticking around for Sonic like he did in the comics after he got his free will back, he goes to fight a war on another planet, which he was able to access through rings (like Sonic did in the 2020 movie), and at the end of said war, he returns back to Mobius, feeling something off about Eggman being gone for so long.

I don't know if that's a good description, but if you can help me make changes to fit the storyline better, let me know!
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@Shiny Keldeo Refined the two non-joking sheets a bit. Debating on working on a third.


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@Zoey Boey
Basically what Potemking said. Just that any events that would have happened in the games by now have happened. Don't need to include them in the CS if you don't feel the need to, just remember that they have happened.

Timeline wise, it's the modern timeline for the most part but with lots of adapted parts and a bit of custom stuff. So not too many worries there.

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Both look good to me!

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I will be honest, I've never been the most keen on the Archie Parents. Like obviously the characters have some kind of heritage, they had to have families at some point. And while they have their moments, they never really fully clicked for me.

That aside though, the backstory just wouldn't work too well as it is. There wasn't any great war between Mobians and Humans before Robotnik took over the world in the classic era, at least in this timeline. And the whole off-planet war seems... just a bit far fetched. It's definitely not a no, but would definitely need a bit of work to make it work.
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@Shiny Keldeo Great!

Okay. So. Is weirdo Amy here good to go? Can I put her in the characters section? Just want to make sure it's all cool
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Gonna have at least 1 sheet up for consideration soon.
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@Zoey Boey Yeah, should be good. One other thing, just makin' for sure, feel free to give some outfit changes if you see fit and it makes sense, that kinda thing. Since I remembered it was Boom Amy for the pic. Assuming you like that style a bit more?

@Mistress Dizzy Definitely an interesting character take, though I'm curious now what other characters you had in mind.

Also sorry for lack of replies in general, hectic week but thankfully it's almost over so things should be getting back on track.
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@Shiny Keldeo Awesome! Yes, I like Sonic Boom's Amy design, I hope you don't mind. The proportions are easier for me to imagine than the more traditional Sonic look. Plus, I like the outfit. I had that fanart redesigned picked out but I don't think that fits a kid Amy. So, I'm good to go! Thanks for working this out with me.
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Does that mean she's accepted?

Also it's either going to be a mechanic or a psychologist. Still deciding.
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I'd love to show interest in this, but I'm in what one might call 'college hell'. If this thing is still going and I find a way to manage my time enough to allow myself to join, I'd love to if there's still space. As it is right now, I'll be lurking. Hope you guys have fun!
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Don't see anything wrong that pops out at me right away. She'll definitely be an interesting character to see people interact with. Will be fun to see what she'd decide to do as the war progresses.




We should be just about ready to start, I've just gotta get my characters rounded out. Will take a canon or two myself for full use, but at the moment any canon characters that aren't taken fall under my control unless anyone else wants 'em.
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Oh boy, should be a fun one. What a time to be alive!

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Just a heads' up, I'm still very interested but around the end of this month I'll be moving to another state. So I'll probably be fairly inactive, but hopefully can jump in once I'm more situated in my new home.
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This is one that... I'm definitely gonna have to sit on for a minute... so may take a bit.
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Yikes. That bad, huh?

You already look like you've got plenty of characters to work with, so if you don't think it's a good fit, I'll just sit this one out. Your call, always open to notes but if you think the concept is fundamentally flawed then I'll just bow out gracefully.
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Wouldn't say it's inherently flawed, just definitely a lot more... unorthodox than I'm used to. It's an interesting concept, but I had to dig into some old notes I had revolving around Professor Gerald and the Space Colony ARK that were worked out for the RP.

Myself and a friend of mine worked quite a bit on what could work the best. The concept we came up with was this:

Taking into account when SA2 was released, and placing the events on the ARK around fifty years prior, the time period would line up fairly close to the Cold War. The United Federation likely brought Gerald Robotnik in to create a super weapon, that eventually being the Eclipse Cannon, and in return they promised to fund his research for a cure for his granddaughter's condition.

Biolizard was the first prototype, but ultimately failed to deliver the results he was looking for and required extensive life support to function on its own. It was after this that he encountered the Black Arms, and their leader Black Doom, who offered his aid and DNA in exchange for the professor's assistance in conquering Mobius. He agreed, though planned to betray him and alert the U.F. after his experiments bore fruit.

Then came Shadow, his ultimate success. He was on the brink of achieving his goal. Though the U.F. had other ideas, learning about the 'true' nature of his research and growing concerned that he was plotting to use these 'Ultimate Lifeforms' for his own gain. So they sent in G.U.N. Forces to scrub the facility, killing all associated with his projects. Gerald and Shadow escaped, during which time the professor overwrote Shadow's memories in a bid for revenge against the U.F. before both were captured. Gerald was later executed for treason, and Shadow was sealed away for further study.


So with that in mind... there is a little wiggle room for your concept to work. It could definitely be safe to assume Gerald would first test the DNA before proceeding into a full blown experiment with it.

I do like the idea of a machine developing self sentience, something which I'm even somewhat working with in one of my characters for this. They dwell in the area of neutral antagonist, not inherently evil but also not inherently good. Would be interesting to see any kind of interaction with them and other characters.

So if it can adjust to fit the backstory, I... don't see a reason why it couldn't work. Definitely an out of the box concept that just threw me for a loop XD
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Thanks for the consideration, but I think I'll pass on this one (I always think I have more free time than I do). Best of luck to you guys moving forward.
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@Shiny Keldeo I sent you a private message with a question I had.
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