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Just repoting my Gaian sheet to make it easier to find.
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@Eldritch Puppy

Approved. The way you wrote the history was very clever: you explain every strange or unique thing about the nation as the overcoming of an obstacle.

Why are they militant? Shards.
Why are they tall? Gravity.
Why do they have a big navy? Shards- but this time from space.
Why is their government unusual? All of the above.

I like it
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Don't think I didn't notice the title edit. I am so here for it.
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@Keyguyperson Welcome aboard!
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Been waiting for this to open up again. If there is an issue with History not having a specific tab, let me know, I spent several weeks trying to figure out a good way to make it fit into the NS style and was unsuccessful without it seeming forced. Instead, bits of history are sprinkled throughout other sections to create a more full picture of history.

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I'm interested in joining as well.
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ooh I'm not usually super into nations rps but I actually have my own setting half-written that thematically meshes pretty well with this one. I could very easily adapt one or two of the colonies from that for this, I think they would mesh very well. I would be very interested in joining if it opens up again.
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@The Goblin King Actually, it just reopened. You can join now if you wish.
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im so excited this is recruiting again.

Here is my sheet for scrutiny:


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@FrostedCaramel
Approved! I actually like the way you hid the history throughout, and the whole unusual feel of the NS makes it... immersive? Interesting? IDK, but it worked, and you're in :P

@The Goblin King@Knight Solaire
Due to having about 8 WIP sheets in my other RP to review today, I won't be able to get to y'all two at the moment. However, reviews will come soon, probably within the next two days or so. Sorry for the wait!
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@Knight Solaire
Aw, good bois.

Approved. Although, I should drop a note here that they seem almost too perfect. There's nothing wrong with a utopian society in theory, and I'm not requesting any changes to your sheet. But when it comes to posting IC, just keep in mind that governments are made of human beings who are naturally flawed. Anyway, feel free to drop it in the Char tab and start posing whenever :)

@The Goblin King
Also approved! I really, really like this sheet.

I also think you're the first robotic nation that didn't start as humans. We have the Gaians by @Sigma, who are humans that transferred their minds into robotic bodies, and the cyborg Enlightened (previously called Zetans) by @Irredeemable, but no "These are just robots who were never human" nations. Glad to have one on board!




If you haven't already, I also highly recommend that both of you join our Discord. Like 90% of the planning and conversation goes on there, so it is relevant to keeping up with the RP as a whole.

discord.gg/pW9KZzvc
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Haha I actually had three potential concepts to use, so I specifically glanced through all the others to see which would be the least redundant. I didn't look too closely, as I would like to get a better idea of other colonies as I go, but I did look at generals like species and governments. One was too close to the Lorne Administration, I think it was, and the other was originally going to be my colony but there were a lot of modified humans so I decided to save it for a potential second colony.

also, I just saw your new game and it's funny that that's also called Progeny lmao
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Posting my WIP sheet because I've spent too much damn time on it to not have posted anything already, and also so you don't all get lost in your new fantasy-land (lol). Most of the really necessary stuff is done already, I just have to flesh out my technological and military flavor and explain in detail how much of a gigantic disappointment my poor humans' planet was.

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