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Welcome to the Voting and Feedback round for RPGC#36!


Voting and Feedback guidelines
  • Please take your time to read through all the entries before voting for your favourite work. The reasons you base your vote on are up to you, as long the vote isn’t based on whether or not you like the author.
    It would be nice if you could share why you voted for a specific work.
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  • The entries are anonymous unless the writer asked for having their name added. That being said, writers may claim their work at any time during the voting period.
  • The entry with the most votes will win, but in case of a tie a Contest Mod will cast the tie-breaker vote.
  • You can vote for entries and post your feedback in this thread, but if you rather have your vote and/or feedback be anonymous you can PM it to @Calle.
  • The voting period deadline is January 19th, 9:00 CET, which is 8:00 server time (both times are in a.m.).





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Received 1 anonymous vote for The Doom Blade.
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I’d also like to vote for the Doom Blade, please!

I really enjoyed it. It was well written, and even though we had such a short time with Gaul, it being a short story, his characterization was still done wonderfully. The transformation was timely and by the time he interacts with the tax collector, things start sinking in. His killing of the thugs in town made sense, there was obviously something magical about the sword, but it wasn’t clear to what extent yet, and his reaction was understandable. When he moves forward with killing the tax collector, it becomes more obvious that something is wrong, and the chilling scene with his wife asking him to put it down was just the right touch of unnerving. I thought it was a nice touch that the sword itself changed too, and I was not expecting Gaul’s physical appearance to change so that was a fun twist. I’m glad we were spared Trinity’s reaction and that she didn’t witness what happened. The ending was nice and ominous.

Thanks for the fun read!
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I received an anonymous vote for The Doom blade. Thank you!
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The voting period has ended and the result is clear: the winner is The Doom Blade, by @POOHEAD189.

Congratulations! I will add your entry to the Trophy Case.
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