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6 mos ago
Current NaNoWriMo winner! Ended with 62k words and a completed story. Back to RP's now, usual posting habit.
7 mos ago
I'm participating in NaNoWriMo this year, so I might be slower with my replies than usual. My apologies to my RP partners, but I am getting these 50k words done!
2 yrs ago
Expect weekly replies, anything I post more is a bonus!
2 yrs ago
I'm on a quest to bring a locally used forgotten weapon back under the attention of people. How? I'll write a story about it.
2 yrs ago
Birch and grass can stop producing pollen now >_<


Hello everyone. I'm Dutch, a mother of a 4-year old boy and I love both rp-ing and writing.

I started with writing Dutch stories in 2002, I was already 19 at that time. I joined a writing competition and that got me started. Soon I started to write down all the stories my over-active imagination came up with. I had my first forum rp experience in 2003 on a Dutch fantasy forum. While I continued to write, I stopped rp-ing when the particular rp and forum slowly died. In 2011 my love for rp's rekindled when I joined a site with a forum and I started to RP solely in English since that is the language of the site. This is also when I wrote my first story in English.

I've got a few 1x1 rp's going on this site and a couple more an another site. And I love the writing competitions here, I try to join them whenever I can.

I have a bachelor degree in nutrition and dietetics and I have worked as a dietitian / kitchen administrator in a nursing home until I decided to quit to become a full-time mother + writer.

When you come here to check if I'm online, know that even when I show as online I might not be able to respond to PM's or RP's. I open this site so that when I have time I can spend some time here, but I don't always end up with the time to do so.

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Michael, male, early 20's
Andy, male, early 40's
Mindy, female, early 20's

Michael's Pokémon
Lytse - Cyndaquil, male (Rainbow Cyndaquil)
Saruya - Arcanine, female (Entei's descendant)
Missy - Poochyena, female (Raikou's descendant)
Anthony - Fletchling, male

Andy's Pokémon
Benny - Butterfree, male
Bear - Primeape, male
Kim - Furret, female
Merlin - Noctowl, male
Varina - Spiritomb, female

Mindy's Pokémon
Charizard, male
Dunsparce, female
Decidueye, male
Onix, male
Lapras, female
Dragonite, female

Benjamin looked at Sara and frowned. "The first suggestion wasn't dumb, why would this one be? It's a good idea, but I think records are shared among doctors and not send to a patient or his family." He leaned back, looking at the ceiling. "Do you think Marc is the kind of guy that would help others when they screwed up?" He glanced at Sara after he asked his question. "Because if he is that kind of guy, maybe you could pretend to be worried that you wrote something inaccurate in Simon's file. And maybe, if Marc really is your friend, he won't mind to correct the mistake for you. And when he's back you can ask him about other things he might have seen in the file." He looked around. "Could that work?"
He was running out of ideas himself.
Benjamins file

Name: Wilkens
First name: Benjamin
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Height: 185 cm
Weight: 76 kg
Race: Caucasian
Diagnosis: Delusions/hallucinations: he thinks he can see 'ghosts'
Medication: none, patient refused to take any.
Medical relevant information:
-patient refuses to acknowledge his 'ghosts' aren't real, is still in state of denial
-patient seems to be prone to claustrophobic attacks
-patient is in good physical shape, practiced long-distance ice-skating 1-3 times a week
Family history: father, mother, younger sister. Nothing special to report. Delusions or other psychiatric problems do not run in the family

Marc: a nurse at the asylum

Vivian: the head psychiatrist
Vantursh and Benjamin are not going to get along. Benjamin likes jazz XD

Revival of the Dragon Riders

Past Events

Meria looked at Noble and nodded. "Indeed, I am a sorceress," she said to him and examined him. "We will talk about that later, let's sit with the Hermit first. She chose a place near the fire and decided to wait for the soup and listen to the others. She had found these people and helped them, but the hermit never was her goal. She glanced aside, to the lake where the small dragon floated on the surface and curiously looked at all the humans and dragons. She needed to bring her to the sea.
She turned her attention to Duncan when he began to explain his reasons for being here.

Mikhal smiled when Gnol doubted his ability to drink Dwarven ale, but didn't feel the need to defend himself. He looked at the Wyvern and stretched his arm out so it could rest there. "You will like my friend too," he said to it. "Shall we go sit by the fire?"
He was curious to what everyone else wanted to discuss with the hermit and maybe he could even help them as well.
"That is a noble quest," he said as he sat down, looking at Duncan. "The best I heard are rumours of questionable origin, but I'm more than willing to join you in your quest."

The Hermit laughed and started coughing. "Very noble quest indeed," he said between coughs and giggled some more. He stirred in the soup as he allowed the people to talk amongst themselves, he would share his knowledge in time.
He looked at the gathered people, if he could get them all working together, he glanced at Trevor specifically when the thought came to mind, the world had a fighting chance. Of course some people needed to be honest about their origin too.

Trevor stayed with Gnol, not giving any indication he wanted to join the others at the fire. "He may not look like it, but he can hold his beer surprisingly well," he said, but gave his words another thought. "I've rarely seen him drink more than one pint of heavy beer though."
He noticed the hermit looking at him and he glared back. Whatever the old man had in mind, he would have no part in it. The last thing he wanted was to join some kind of wild goose chase that would get them all killed in the end. And he wanted it even less if those bloody dragons were involved.

Rachel looked at Duncan when he talked. "You did find some dragon riders, that's true. And with some proper trainer we might be able to let our ranks grow." She looked at Ricki now, the girl had a dragon, but was far from being a Dragon Rider. If that was something she wanted to be. She was glad Damien was here too. If he had survived, others may have survived too. Hopefully they would find more, because rookie dragon riders were not going to be much help if it came to war.
Revival of the Dragon Riders

Past Events

I'm still editing the document to remove all the images to make it easier to load, but our 42 pages on PFQ are 340 pages in the google doc XD It will be a few pages less when I'm done, but I don't think it will be much shorter.

Life was good. But the mornings not so much. Waking up and having to get up was a daily agony he could do without. In that aspect Andy would rather have a late or a night shift. The first major decision of the day was the method of transportation. Would he take his car or a motorcycle?

Decisions, decisions, decisions.

But it was nice to start the day with a decision that would have no real consequences. The moment he'd step into the hospital that would be different. For the simple reason putting on his motorcycle suit was an effort he didn't feel for doing right now, he chose for the car. With the roof down it would be an enjoyable drive, especially since there were few clouds in the sky and the sun was already up. He whistled, enjoying the feeling of wind blowing over his head. A few strands of hair escaped the elastic band that kept them together.

After he parked in front of the hospital, he entered the emergency department. "Good morning everyone!" he said as he walked through the department. The enthusiasm in his voice showed nothing of his trouble with getting up in the morning, but he went straight to the coffee pot. Of course he had had some coffee at home, but before he started working he liked to drink a cup as well and talk a bit with his fellow doctors and the nurses. Unless of course there was an emergency.

It wasn't possible to predict what would happen, it could be anything ranging from stitching a cut, or dealing with a victim of a car crash. And the diversity was what appealed to him. But he was grateful that he could start the day with a cup of coffee as his colleague of the previous shift finished up her last patient of the night.
Here is my feedback on the stories. I didn't look for grammar mistakes, but I did point out those I found. Some feedback is plot-related. I'm more of an alpha reader than a beta reader and I'm better at finding possible plotholes or inconsistencies than grammar mistakes.

I hope you find my feedback useful.

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