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@Spydorking Unanimous Approval. Get them in the CHAR section. ^^
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@TopGrail, Approval One given.
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@TheRealGhost, Approval One given.
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New CS uploaded.
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@TopGrail Your "Decades later" paragraph is an incomplete sentence, (setting up an "after" but ending the sentence only after having described what the "after" is after) which I only mention in case you forgot to add something.

I'm gonna note that Digimon can talk from the moment they reach Baby II stage, so Black Guilmon (along with Loogamon) should be capable of holding conversations but are choosing not to, perhaps because of their immaturity.

I'm also assuming she was "born as a 'saint'" in the metaphorical sense of a saintly personality, which no longer applies (and is a bit misleading to ascribe to her modern self) given that her behavior isn't saintly any longer.

Anyway, approval 2/3

@TheRealGhost Approval 2/3

@Mike Dracopyra Approval 2/3, but as Letter Bee has said, please reupload the images to imgur or something so you can embed them on RPGuild.
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Anyone know how to do that? Otherwise I cane probably just hunt down an alternative image in a hour or so
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Ignore this, accidentally quoted myself somehow
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Massive thanks to the jest for helping me with my pictures, everything is fully ready to go now
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Just one thing of note to Ghost: The Personality section applies to Digimon as well. ^^;

Other than that, Approval 3/3. All three of you have Green Light. You may put your CSes in the CHAR section now. ^^ (And we'd appreciate it if Ghost gives Elizamon a personality section.)
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@Ryik fixed that paragraph, or at least moved it a bit.

Loogamon and Black Guilmon are fully able to talk. Loogamon talks regularly, but his intellect is more on the level of a little kid and is prone to act on his own curiosity rather impulsively. Black Guilmon, meanwhile, can talk but prefers using fewer words than most to express himself. In short, one is an extrovert and the other an introvert, but this will of course change as they gain experience and bond with their partners.

And yes, it is more of a metaphorical meaning for both Dante and Beatrice. Dante was born lacking certain things in himself, while Beatrice has had an unusual sense of empathy and a kind predisposition since childhood. Their current personalities are a result of an incident in which they were both involved, but with them being different people, it affected them differently. Dante took it as a somewhat positive experience that encouraged him to change and become the person that he is now, while Beatrice took it as a negative experience, if not outright a traumatic one that made her personality take a sharp turn into what it is now, becoming cold and cruel, as well as holding a hatred for Dante.
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@ReksewTrebla, I am wary about your sheets as they might be the wrong kind of 'edgy', but Danny gets Approval One but Tinkermon doesn't.

Unless both are part of The Jest's team of antagonists?
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Man. I didn't even make it a week without a communication issue.

Let me explain. I'm on the Autism Spectrum Disorder, specifically Asperger Syndrome. I wasn't going for edgy at all, and am now confused. I thought what I put fit in with the troubled pasts I was reading in the other CS's here, just with a little more confirmation on what the events of the troubled pasts were.

Also... I'm more confused on what you mean by team of antagonists. I didn't see anything about that in this thread. I'm really new to this site, like I said, only a week here, but maybe I'm looking in the wrong area?

Anyways, I would greatly appreciate any clarification you can give so I can fix my characters. I'm terribly sorry for the inconvenience.
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@Letter Bee

Man. I didn't even make it a week without a communication issue.

Let me explain. I'm on the Autism Spectrum Disorder, specifically Asperger Syndrome. I wasn't going for edgy at all, and am now confused. I thought what I put fit in with the troubled pasts I was reading in the other CS's here, just with a little more confirmation on what the events of the troubled pasts were.

Also... I'm more confused on what you mean by team of antagonists. I didn't see anything about that in this thread. I'm really new to this site, like I said, only a week here, but maybe I'm looking in the wrong area?

Anyways, I would greatly appreciate any clarification you can give so I can fix my characters. I'm terribly sorry for the inconvenience.


It's fine, I'm autistic too.

And the antagonist team is meant to be a few PCs led by an NPC used by one of the other GMs; more data on the Discord Server.
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@ReksewTrebla, Double-post:

Ah, I re-read your Character Sheet again; when I read it the first time I was just waking up and digesting breakfast and coffee.

Yeah, it's not super-edgy at all, although I'll remind you that the art for Danny does not look 17 (this is just me) and does not look like someone from Earth/The Real World (unless he's in cosplay).

Other than that, both your Human and Digimon get Approval One.
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@ReksewTrebla I know that feeling bud, I've got Aspergers as well and it does makes things a little more difficult for us then most
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@ReksewTrebla Be sure to update your picture to the one you're going with. (The one on the discord)
Your app is fine, though there are some balancing caveats:
Tinkermon, as a rookie-level digimon, will be presumed to have skills on the rookie-level, which is honestly rather weak, roughly on the level of knowing one good fireball attack. While none of your skills are inherently unacceptable, the devil's in the details:

Dragging the opponent into a nightmare with the fast-acting "Speed Nightmare" hallucinogen from her poisoned spear.
I'm assuming this hallucinogen isn't effective enough that it constitutes a knockout by itself, doesn't last long enough that the free attacks Tinkermon would get off of a successful Speed Nightmare would invariably result in her victory against other rookie-level digimon, and isn't reliable against digimon of a higher level than Tinkermon.

"Nightmare Pandemic" uses the poisonous nails from her gloved hands to paralyze the foe. The more fingers used, the worse the effect. She is able to control the paralyzing effect from just a section to the whole body by increasing the number of nails she stings with.
For a rookie level digimon, the ability to render limbs temporarily useless would be fine, and the ability to render the whole body numb and clumsy would be fine, but the ability to render the whole body completely immobile from a single attack is not fine. Since you mentioned "whole body", I'm assuming the paralyzing effect is more akin to pokémon where it's not guaranteed to be crippling. Once again, it would also be unreliable against digimon of a higher level than Tinkermon.

Also, the "Fairy Powder" scattered from her wings has the ability to temporarily change about half of those it covers into babies.
Based on the wiki's description of this skill, this effect only lasts for a short time, (seconds, perhaps) and you've given it a valid limitation, albeit a poorly described one. "Half of those it covers" is a bad descriptor I'd recommend you to change for clarity. I recommend putting in, "it doesn't always succeed even against digimon of the same level, and its success rate declines against stronger digimon or digimon that have been affected by it recently." While the difference in digivolution power varies greatly from context to context in the franchise, we're basing this on adventures where the difference between each stage is almost completely insurmountable after champion level. For that matter, I'm also gonna caution that Danny (or any human) likely won't be able to sword fight any digimon beyond rookie level, and even among rookie levels it'd be unlikely for him to win or come out unscathed if he tried.

Approval 2/3 if you have no objections to the above.
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@ReksewTrebla

Beyond what Ryik's already said, I have no objections either. Approval 3/3. Unanimous.

Please make the edits Ryik suggested, then get it on the CHAR section. ^^
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