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Regardless, these are questions for after mortals start appearing in the setting. For now, I feel like y'all should be thinking more about how your characters would act upon emerging, and how you'd like for them to awaken into their domain. Shoot me with ideas!


I kinda have an idea for Yzechr. You see, when the gods first appeared there is a fog right? And I guess when the world get more and more define the fog would have less place to be. That's when my guy come in. They would take the fog and hide it or at least a part of it. I guess that would also explain why their symbol is the black mist/fog. Over time those remaining fog can have another effect too like literary eating people or make them prone to doing evil things.

Is that alright with you?
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@Cmmelody Sure, that sounds great :)
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damn, those rules must have taken a good chunk of work given how detailed they are.

Currently debating on 3 concepts:

either going for my namesake and making a god of knowledge and forge, a paragon if you will.

A two faced god of life and death with a kind merciful persona or an uncaring psychopath

A god of fate and luck, holding rein on both certain and uncertain, A divine trickster seeking nothing but his own enjoyment.
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I decided to do something else instead

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<Snipped quote by Lord Zee>

We'll be happy to have you regardless. If we don't fill in the requirement for players by Friday then I'll ping you.


Same here please Vec! I'm interested, but if other newer players wish to have a try then I'm happy to go on the waitlist.
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Ah, drat, I was hemming and hawing on whether to do a concept relating to darkness or light...Oh, well. With the number of applicants and interested parties, I think I'll just stick to lurking for now (unless another unexpected burst of inspiration strikes).
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@SilverPaw We're gonna be here, hopefully, for the foreseeable future so by all means take your time.

@Frettzo By all means we'll be happy to have you. If you want to be put on Santa's list, however, I'm not one to shy away from making that wish come true 👍
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Oi! You starting a God-RP and I ain't invited? Tsk, tsk, tsk.

Count me in!

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I decided to do something else instead



Your concept has a solid foundation with Arstus clearly being benevolent, and a coherent domain pairing. However, it needs significant development before approval (barring the all the strangeness regarding a god of light and stars dressing entirely in black). No, the biggest structural problem I see in your deity concept is his entirely passive motivation.

"Light shines where it is needed" gives you nothing to do IC beyond reacting to others' initiatives. What are Arstus' proactive goals for the world? Does he want to place constellations to encode knowledge, ensure no place remains in permanent darkness, oppose forces that would snuff out hope, or create star-paths for navigation?

Additionally, you've provided zero information about worshipers—who are his clergy, what do temples look like, what rituals exist, which professions favor him? Every other deity submission included some trace cultural footprint, but yours is absent.

Finally, define your divine intervention limits: the roleplay example shows Arstus creating blinding light that incapacitates armed men, but notes he "doesn't do this much" without explaining why not. What restricts his intervention? Besides the mechanical stuff, why would he intervene in such a manner beyond being just "helpful"?

I know I didn't ask for personality section, but I would at least like to have a better understanding of him opinions, quirks, and generally that thing which makes him distinct from "just another generic nice light god", aside from his clothes.
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Here is a tentative submission Vec. I would not want to claim one of the limited slots if many more people that might be more active than myself are clamoring to get in, but if you judge there to be enough room, this would be my first choice of character.

Edit: I went back, changed some wording and fixed a nonsensical typo in the RP example, but most importantly added a paragraph about the Mes under Motivation. This is a somewhat important part of how I imagined him doing things, but I realized I'd neglected to even allude to it in the first iteration of the sheet.

Handing out Mes like candy is probably the primary thing I would have him do IC. I link to the wikipedia that lists out what some of the Mes were in actual mythology, but I'd take some liberties with how they appear here and confine them almost exclusively to technologies that can be weaponized, e.g. horse-drawn chariots, horseback riding, bronze metalcasting to make weapons, etc. Sarhush is not especially interested in trivialities like medicine or sanitation, but such technologies would indirectly pop up as a consequence of him repeatedly teaching rulers better ways to make weapons and conquer things! And of course that saves plenty of things for other gods to offer to mortals too.

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Alright, since we have several interested parties and I have been asked by two people on whether I will make a Discord or not, I will put it to vote on whether it will happen or not.

https://strawpoll.gg/poll/create-a-discord-for-the-roleplay

Please vote.

As for the CSes that have been posted recently, I would like to give a chance to the people that signaled their interest earlier to post their sheet before considering the newer ones. Thanks for your attention to this matter.
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@Cyclone I suspect your god and mine would make excellent foils for each other, haha.
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Alright, since we have several interested parties and I have been asked by two people on whether I will make a Discord or not, I will put it to vote on whether it will happen or not.

https://strawpoll.gg/poll/create-a-discord-for-the-roleplay

Please vote.

As for the CSes that have been posted recently, I would like to give a chance to the people that signaled their interest earlier to post their sheet before considering the newer ones. Thanks for your attention to this matter.


I voted the wrong thing :/ I meant to Abstain but clicked on Yes instead
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Oi! You starting a God-RP and I ain't invited? Tsk, tsk, tsk.

Count me in!



wait.... isn't chaos not allowed?
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@Cyclone I suspect your god and mine would make excellent foils for each other, haha.


I like the addition of the Travel domain from the previous CS. The only potential narrative concern I can find is whether "rural revolts gather around his cults" makes him more of an interventionist god whose core function is to undermines other players' goals with respect to civ building etc.

Which I guess could be your goal in the end. Anyway, he is accepted. You are free to put him in the CS tab.

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<Snipped quote by Timemaster>

wait.... isn't chaos not allowed?


Indeed, Time, Order and Chaos are banned domains, and Creation does not exist. @Timemaster will have to find a different domain.
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@VecThe peasant sympathy thing is implied to be involuntary to some extent. He doesn’t view himself as actively stirring up dissent, but rather merely as responding to material situations. But in any case, he is supposed to be one of those gods that kinda fucks off into the wild and does his own thing for the most part 😆
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@VecThe peasant sympathy thing is implied to be involuntary to some extent. He doesn’t view himself as actively stirring up dissent, but rather merely as responding to material situations. But in any case, he is supposed to be one of those gods that kinda fucks off into the wild and does his own thing for the most part 😆


I hope he doesn't fuck off into the wild and ignores everyone!
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Sorry y'all! Don't know how I missed Chaos on the banned list. Remembered the other 2 quite well!

@Vec Fixed them up now. Merriment instead of Chaos :)
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Oh, man, I had another idea...for a kind, loving, motherly god(dess) of darkness and death. Sigh. If I end up making CSs, I'll send em in as a reserve.
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