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New Dawn of Civilizations




Civilization is the cornerstone of humanity, and without it, we would be nothing but primitive tribes living in wooden or stone huts. Though starting as pockets in select parts of the world. Others would form and ensure that humanity advanced and would thrive into the coming ages as cities formed and grew. Giving way to nations and even despite the thousands of wars and deaths. Civilization continued on and has advanced to what we know today.

But what if the civilizations that would develop, like the Egyptians or the people of Mesopotamia, changed, and instead of them, new civilizations would form in their place? A new dawn for the world as we know it, and it would happen far in the past.

That is where you come in, as you and others in the present, for some unknown reason. Have been sent back in time to 2700 B.C. in different areas of the world as immortals. An Author and these Authors would, after getting their bearings and settling in. They would, with their knowledge, take charge and forge their own civilizations and change history for better or worse.

What civilization would you make if you had the chance? Time to find out.

Rules:
1. Expected to follow standard site rules
2. No godmodding or powergaming or etc...
3. No OP characters
4. A max of one character
5. Minimum of two paragraphs
6. No psychopath or sociopath characters.


Overview

Hello and welcome to the rp. So in this rp, you will be playing as an Author or a term for an immortal. Which the rp will always be open. But, I should say three things before I continue.

One, this idea is not mine but an old idea on another rp site I am on, and based on the latest version of it that got traction and I wondered if the idea would interest people here.

Two, this rp is largely sandbox, and you will be rping by yourself for the most part. Unless you choose to start somewhere near people or start with someone. Though I will give events for people sometimes, and there will be NPC nations that will spring up. Just keep that in mind when making a cs since, again, you will be rping by yourself for the most part.

The third thing is that in the original idea for this rp, you are expected to play yourself or a character close to yourself. Now, while I like that aspect, I understand why people would not, so instead of forcing it. I will give people an option to make a custom character or play themselves if they desire. Which if you do choose to play yourself, you do not have to put up your own picture of your face or put up your real name or anything like that. Since I never did in these rps, and when I mean play yourself, I mean personality-wise and what you personally know. So you can change details as long as you keep what skills and knowledge you know along with your personality.

Now, with that out of the way and those still interested in the rp, here are some things.

How it works being an Author, it means your character is an immortal and is immune to aging, and cannot die due to age. Along with being immune to diseases and automatically knows and speaks any language they come across. Though your character can still die by other means, such as violence so, do not try to act like your character is invincible. Also, your character would not know any of this off the bat, so they have to learn that for themselves.

So, how your character is sent into the past is this. They go to bed, and when they wake up, it is in the past with nothing. I mean nothing, your character is completely naked and has nothing tied to the present except for their memory. Which if your character goes the playing myself route, then your character only knows what you know. If you do not know it, then they do not know it. Also, there will be greater scrutiny if I see a character that seems unusual or perfect to be sent to the past.

Also, for how the rp will work pacing-wise. The rp will be divided into five-year long periods that are followed by a ten-year skip. So you can post what you want up to the fifth year mark, and once everyone is caught up to the five-year mark, then I will do a ten-year time skip and then repeat. Now, how long it takes to get to the five-year mark is up to you.

Plus, you can start anywhere in the world. Just make sure you know about your starting location before picking. Like knowing the environment, what people would be there, and what resources you have access to.

Along with this, you are free to write the ancient people as you see fit, but remember. While the people of 2700 B.C are primitive, it does not mean they are stupid or act like idiots. They are as logical and reasonable as modern-day people and do not expect to become the leader of a group simply because you made a shovel and whatnot.

One last thing, when it comes to what your character skills are. You should not use anything that is too broad, and you should clarify what their skill is. Like if you used historical knowledge as a skill, that would not work and is too broad. More so about the skills that would be too beneficial for a character to have unless your character really knows about one or two of them. The following skills are not allowed unless your character really knows it based on the cs. Historical knowledge, oration, charisma, leadership, and military tactics.

That is it, and if anyone has any questions, then feel free to ask.


Author/Immortal Character Locations:

William Westrik(Theyra) - Gorno-Altai, Russia
Astrid Palmkvist(Wernher) - Oristano, Sardigna, Italy
Olliver Ainsley(TruckKun) - Knossos, Crete
Philip Beaulieu(Gunther) - Western New York State - USA


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Jamie Muggridge


Gender
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Age
40

Appearance
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Personality
Jamie studies and works often, is seen as charismatic occasionally and strives to be respectful of the world around him at all times. Sometimes he talks too much, and that annoys other people to no end.

Nationality
He was born in Arizona, and is an American citizen though his mother was born in the UK.

Education
Jamie was taught at Arizona State University for years, earning degrees in Architecture, dabbled in archaeology for a few years and was taught how to survive in the wild. Though he was a decent enough student in all these fields he really wanted to build most of all.

Later he spent a short but productive time period in Michigan State University, learning Naval architecture, where he also excelled.

Former Occupation
Architect

Skills
He had five years in college in the US, and has been an architect for ten years. He knows how to build, and knows first AID.

Architecture and Naval Architecture
First Aid
Archaeology
Survival

What you were doing last before falling asleep
He was going over his schematics for a new building.

Where you wake up at
The Great Lakes Region (Or whatever it's called in 2700 BC)

Background
Jamie was born in 1985 in Phoenix, Arizona, and for the first twenty years or so he was happy. This man had good grades in school, was noticeably an "over achiever" for most of that time. At twenty two, he began to experience bad times. He lost most of his living from bogus law suits and his relationship with his fiance, Maria, failed. For the next five years he struggled to keep a roof over his head and for the next five years after that he only managed to scrimp and save a little bit more for himself.

By his mid thirties though he was very successful and a new fiance, Donna. He hobnobbed with the social elite and upper class for years for a while, managing to establish himself as a well respected member of his community, making friends with high class lawyers, socialites, and philanthropists. Life was good until he suddenly appeared in the past, all those millenia ago.

Goals/Plans
To create a long lasting civilization. Maybe by first establishing trade routes through the rest of Europe.

Why you picked your location
There is a lot of mineral and agricultural wealth there.

Character Motivations
First things first, he just needs to survive and make some friends before he's suddenly their leader.

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So, how are people's character sheets coming along?
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So, how are people's character sheets coming along?


assuming how bare bones you want it, I only want a little bit more done, if not, I'll work until you approve.
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Well, I was waiting for you to finish your cs before I said anything, and waiting to see the others' character sheets.
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Well, I was waiting for you to finish your cs before I said anything, and waiting to see the others' character sheets.


Done, I hope.
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Jamie Muggridge


Gender
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Age
40

Appearance
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Personality
Jamie studies and works often, is seen as charismatic occasionally and strives to be respectful of the world around him at all times. Sometimes he talks too much, and that annoys other people to no end.

Nationality
He was born in Arizona, and is an American citizen though his mother was born in the UK.

Education
education here

Former Occupation
Architect

Skills
He had five years in college in the US, and has been an architect for ten years. He knows how to build, and knows first AID.

What you were doing last before falling asleep
He was going over his schematics for a new building.

Where you wake up at
London, England (Or whatever it's called in 2700 BC)

Background
Jamie was born in 1985 in Phoenix, Arizona, and for the first twenty years or so he was happy. This man had good grades in school, was noticeably an "over achiever" for most of that time. At twenty two, he began to experience bad times. He lost most of his living from bogus law suits and his relationship with his fiance, Maria, failed. For the next five years he struggled to keep a roof over his head and for the next five years after that he only managed to scrimp and save a little bit more for himself.

By his mid thirties though he was very successful and a new fiance, Donna. Life was good until he suddenly appeared in the past, all those millenia ago.

Goals/Plans
To create a long lasting civilization. Maybe by first establishing trade routes through the rest of Europe.

Why you picked your location
There is a lot of mineral and agricultural wealth there.

Character Motivations
First things first, he just needs to survive and make some friends before he's suddenly their leader.

Playing Yourself or Custom Char
Custom


So, the education part needs to be filled in, and for skills. I would like it if you could actually list the skills he has, rather than say he went to college, and what his job was. As for the background, I would like a bit more to it, like one more paragraph at least.

So fix these, and I will review it again.
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So, how are people's character sheets coming along?


@Theyra Should be done now! Finally. Fingers crossed, but naturally I will fix anything I need to of course.



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@Theyra Should be done now! Finally. Fingers crossed, but naturally I will fix anything I need to of course.



After thinking about it, accepted
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@Dpmoc, @ImagineTheStars Still interested? If so, how are your character sheets coming along?
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SOrry I haven't updated yet, Things are weird irl.
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SOrry I haven't updated yet, Things are weird irl.


That is fine, IRl stuff takes priority, and there is no rush. Though I should probably start working on my character sheet in the meantime.
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Olliver Peirce


Gender
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Age
30


Appearance
Olliver Peirce is a short 4ft 9in man. He has a thin wiry build, that doesn't show muscles really, though he has strong arms from years in the forge, and what he lacks in strength he makes up for in speed and precision. He has black hair, and red eyes


Personality
He is a high functioning autist, with a fixation on War history, he appears outgoing and is a natural leader, but likes solitude, and enjoys the darkness and calm. He loves to help others as it brings him great joy, knowing he does the best he can to improve the lives of others. You might become his 'friend' rather quickly, but he is slow to fully trust, but when he does he will risk life and limb for them, as he has proven, by risking his life to drag a friend out of a forge, after oil from a quench spilled and hit a propane tank.


Nationality
Irish American


Education
an associates degree in blacksmithing, and masters in war/military history and strategy.


Former Occupation
Functioning Historical Weapons Re-Creator specialist.


Skills
Good leader/organizer, good blacksmith (can forge with modern and traditional techniques. can forge knives/swords and such and flintlocks/matchlocks. and plate armor) knows the premise of casting but has no experience. Knows a fair bit about ship construction due to its strategic importance in military engagements and logistics. Good night vision. knows a bit about wilderness survival (but not that much, he basically knows not to trust shrooms, and thats it.), and can hunt.


What you were doing last before falling asleep
sketching a new blade design


Where your awakes up at
Japan


Background
Olliver emigrated to America from Ireland when he was 8, so he still remembers it, and the music. His dad emigrated and brought him due to the increased freedom and the promise of a high paying job as a blacksmith. Olliver Grew up watching, and helping, his dad in the forge, and that is where he picked up the trade. He found that he had a love for military history and strategy, and as such decided that he could combine the 2 things he loved and become a highly respected Historical Weapons Recreation specialist, who specialized in making pieces that could function not just sit on the mantle. What he lacks in formal education in terms of blacksmithing is more than made up for his 2 decades practicing the trade, more than anyone else in the field can boast of at such a young age, there is even video proof of him pounding metal at the age of 10.


Goals/Plans
Establish quality weapons, military tactics and training, possibly establish naval supremacy


Why you picked your location
Because I think it would be interesting to see what would happen if Japan had expanded, and had access to western/modern forging techniques


Character Motivations
Improve the lives of others every way he can, and help guide them. Even if it means he doesn't get to live a life of peace, it is his duty too help who - and where he can.


Playing Yourself or Custom Char
Custom Character


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how is this?
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how is this?


Okay, there are problems with your character sheet that need to be addressed.

First, having red eyes is not natural, and you would need a good medical reason to have them. Like being albino, though that comes with its own issues.

I am hesitant to allow an autistic person, even a high-functioning one, since I am not sure you can rp that correctly since I do not know you.

After checking, there is no degree for strategy. It is too vague, so just say military strategy. Which comes from specialized colleges.

Functioning Historical Weapons Re-Creator specialist as a job/occupation is not a real thing. The closest thing I can find to what you want is being a worker at a historical weapons reproduction shop. Which, even then, you would have to specialize in a field of weapons/armor you make. No knowing how to make both flintlocks and swords.

For skills, good night vision and hunting are skills that do not seem to make sense for your character. Since good night vision I do not think works and the hunting skills your character has. How does he know how to hunt if he knows barely anything about wilderness survival?

Just so you know, if you did not already. There is already someone going for Japan. I am not saying you can't, but you would have an immortal character sharing Japan with you. So you should think, or at least talk to that player(Crusader Lord) who is in Japan with you, if you wish to stay or pick another location.

As for the background, it feels unfinished to me, and I would like to see one or two more paragraphs about your character. Like, where or what happened to his mother? You do not need to have an interest in military history or strategy to want to make weapons or armor. I am saying this since you want to have at least three of the six not allowed skills that your character has. You can try to have them but, right now. I do not think leadership is one I will allow right now for your character. Since military tactics(military history) and historical knowledge(historical weapons) is stress enough for your character, I may allow it. But, I want to see a character sheet that fixes or addresses the problems I have with your character sheet. So work on it, and I will see if the character sheet can work after being edited.
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I'm thinking of changing my chosen location.
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I'm thinking of changing my chosen location.


Any idea where?
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Any idea where?


Great Lakes Region of America. Michigan, etcetera.
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Great Lakes Region of America. Michigan, etcetera.


I say that is doable, I know there is copper in the Upper Peninsula, but that is all the knowledge I have off the top of my head.
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@Theyra Understood. Also, i meant military strategy, but just said strategy so thats on me
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Olliver Peirce


Gender
Male


Age
30


Appearance
Olliver Peirce is a short 4ft 9in man. He has a thin wiry build, that doesn't show muscles really, though he has strong arms from years in the forge, and what he lacks in strength he makes up for in speed and precision. He has black hair, and steel-grey color eyes


Personality
Olliver appears outgoing and is a natural leader, but likes solitude, and enjoys the darkness and calm. He loves to help others as it brings him great joy, knowing he does the best he can to improve the lives of others. You might become his 'friend' rather quickly, but he is slow to fully trust, but when he does he will risk life and limb for them, as he has proven, by risking his life to drag a friend out of a forge, after oil from a quench spilled and hit a propane tank.


Nationality
Irish American


Education
an associates degree in blacksmithing, and masters in war/military history and Military strategy.


Former Occupation
Historical Weapons Recreator


Skills
Good blacksmith (can forge with modern and traditional techniques. Can make flintlocks/matchlocks, and forges knives in his spare time.) knows the premise of casting but has no experience. Knows a fair bit about ship construction due to its strategic importance in military engagements and logistics.


What you were doing last before falling asleep
sketching a new blade design


Where your awakes up at
Japan (Will have to check with Crusader Lord )


Background
Olliver emigrated to America from Ireland when he was 8, so he still remembers it, and the music. His dad emigrated and brought him due to the increased freedom and the promise of a high paying job as a blacksmith. Olliver Grew up watching, and helping, his dad in the forge, and that is where he picked up the trade. He found that he had a love for military history and strategy, and as such decided that he could combine the 2 things he loved and become a highly respected Historical Weapons Recreation specialist, who specialized in making pieces that could function not just sit on the mantle. What he lacks in formal education in terms of blacksmithing is more than made up for his 2 decades practicing the trade, more than anyone else in the field can boast of at such a young age, there is even video proof of him pounding metal at the age of 10. Before she got pregnant, Olliver's mother used to work in the forge with his father, but soon after Olliver was born she fell ill with rabies. After being bit by a rabid badger and, despite their best efforts, she died. Leaving his father alone to raise him. Olliver now lives alone in Worcester MA. He doesn't really have a social life, he doesn't really drink, and mostly just talks about military history and tactics online in his spare time, and occasionally plays nation strategy games and such. He only has a few real friends, 2 guys and a gal. He met Henry in college, and they hit it right off, talking about different military tactics, and how if this or that tactic had been used, how it could've changed the outcome of this battle, and that war. He met in Joey in some blacksmithing lessons/workshops, and they both loved learning about the traditional techniques more than the modern ones. Olliver helped Joey set up his home forge, and in one blacksmithing session, where Joey was trying to make a particularly fancy shortsword, he put too much oil in the quench-tube and it overflowed, carrying the flames on top of the oil to a propane tank, starting a fire that Olliver saved him from. Miraculously the blade survived the fire in the quench tube, and was given to Olliver as a thank you. He met Ophelia when he was but a lad. She was the first person he met at school and would stand up for him when others would bully him, and they stayed friends through highschool and college, and when she was married, he was the ring bearer, and made the proposal ring for them (because Ophelia proposed).


Goals/Plans
Establish quality weapons, military tactics and training, possibly establish naval supremacy


Why you picked your location
Because I think it would be interesting to see what would happen if Japan had expanded, and had access to western/modern forging techniques


Character Motivations
Improve the lives of others every way he can, and help guide them. Even if it means he doesn't get to live a life of peace, it is his duty too help who - and where he can.


Playing Yourself or Custom Char
Custom Character


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