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Welcome to the Voting and Feedback round for MFP#14!


Voting and Feedback guidelines

  • Please take your time to read through all the entries before voting for your favourite work. The reasons you base your vote on are up to you, as long the vote isn’t based on whether or not you like the author.
    It would be nice if you could share why you voted for a specific work.
  • Giving feedback is optional but highly encouraged. When giving feedback you should be respectful and constructive. It’s good to point out any flaws or the things you feel could be improved or why you didn't like something, but don’t be mean.
    Make sure to point out what you liked or what appreciated in the entry too.
  • Contestants may (and are encouraged to) vote and/or give feedback for the other entries but shouldn’t vote for their own entry. If contestants wish to withhold a vote and only give feedback, that is good too.
  • The entries are anonymous unless the writer asked for having their name added. That being said, writers may claim their work at any time during or after the voting period.
  • The entry with the most votes will win, but in case of a tie a Contest Mod will cast the tie-breaker vote.
  • You can vote for entries and post your feedback in this thread, but if you rather have your vote and/or feedback be anonymous you can PM it to @Loksfjoer.
  • The voting period deadline is May 25th, 9:00 CET, which is 7:00 server time (both times are in a.m.).





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Hidden 23 days ago 23 days ago Post by Mole
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Congratulations to everyone who entered. It takes courage to put your work on display for criticism and judgement. Many writers on Guild are skilled but lack the bravery to enter this small but fun competition.

With that said and the repetitive mention of how I’m a simple stay-at-home mother with a useless International Business Degree:

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This was such fun! Congrats to everyone who participated! I was stuck between a couple here but…


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Hidden 22 days ago Post by Byte
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Good luck to everyone who entered! So many good entries to choose from that have so much creativity and work put into them. I love that there's a variety of interpretations based on the theme.

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Hidden 20 days ago Post by SleepingSilence
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SleepingSilence OC, Plz No Stealz.

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Vote: Nameless
Reason: Felt like a complete story idea in half the words you could've used. (And while unnecessary. I do think using the forum code for writing should be utilized more often than it is.) Feels like a prologue to a story that I'd want to read. (And wanting to read more of someone's writing feels like the best compliment one could give.)

Close 2nd: A first bud
Reason: Probably has some of my favorite sentences in it. Think it uses the right amount of 'purple prose' that makes sentences artful and not something that makes your eyes glaze over the page. (Or compels you to whip out the same thesaurus the writer used.) Also, points given for not just using "New Beginning" (the exact wording of the theme) directly in your story.
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Hidden 19 days ago 19 days ago Post by Deadline
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"Brief Tryst" for:

"But shrewd time waltzes in an endless ring,"

It's a really nice line that reads extraordinarily well.
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The demon is my casted vote. The reason is I can relate that very poem to my childhood, so i was connected to it, in a way.
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Eve.

With conflagration tree as a second.

Talk about a tough to decide contest!
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That's it for this round. Voting has ended. Everyone of you had your own interpration of the theme and style, and I loved that.

There was a well-earned tie between The Conflagration Tree and Brief Tryst. Because we had a lot of entries this round, I will be happy to declare both as winners of this competition!

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