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Okay then does this mean i have to make a few more adjustments for my sheet before he is accepted?


That's up to Old Amsterdam I am not necessarily a CO-GM nor do I have the authority to say that. But OA did give me permission to write my analysis. I would Advise you take in some of my criticism and edit the sheet before asking for acceptance, but that's honestly up to you whether or not you want to. I feel the sheet lacks any focus, it needs to be more acnhored in its ideas, but I have no power to say whether or not you are accepted or not. Or if what I have to say is even dependent on that.
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Okay i will do my best to change it around.
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Okay i will do my best to change it around.


Thanks so much. I appreciate the fact you took the time to listen to what I have to say despite not being a GM or CO-GM. Look forward to see the polished version. :)
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Well he's hoping the GM will like it.
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Naturally. And I don't think it's about dislike. But always about polishing ourselves and challenging ourselves mentally. Going beyond what we're use to and going higher than before. Going beyond our comfort zone. It's not necessarily about like or dislike, simply polishing up ideas and the way they are executed. I have to do that myself sometimes. Don't take it as me disliking the sheet, but there were some core story structure issues.
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Right of course and thanks for that. Construct criticism is always needed for writing and what not.
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Go ahead and repost the updated CS and we'll go from there.
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I never enjoy doing this, but:
I'm going to have to decline the CS. It's very choppy, and I'm not sure it would hold up anywhere close to the level I expect my players to post at. While this RP is in Casual, because I'm extremely lenient on a lot of things, it really has ended up turning more into a Low Advanced / High Casual RP thanks to the wonderful active players I've got hanging around.

Beyond that, I'm not entirely sure you're informed on the source material or understand what I've added to the OOC OP. I do mean that in the kindest way I can through text and text alone.

And finally, and this ties back into the level I'm looking for in my players, but going through your style of RPs and posts and such, I'm just not comfortable in accepting you.

Again, I'm terribly sorry. But I do have a duty to my players to keep things at the level they've come to expect from not just me, but their fellow players as well.
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-moved to accepted-
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I don't have the net right now. Expected to get it back sometime this week. Don't panic. I'm not dead or disappearing forever.
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