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Bleach: Neon Prodigy Genesis


Fifteen years after Yhwach the captain of 12th division has found a way to forcibly activate the prodigy gene in certain members of Soul Society. It is this gene which is responsible for the creation of the 'genius' that is born every so often within the seritei. This was done in an attempt to bolster the shinigami numbers after the destruction caused by Yhwach's attack. Upon the activation of the experiment, those who found their genes activated were searched out and drafted into the shinigami academy.




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so how do arcs work?

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so how do arcs work?

I'm not sure what you mean by this question, but I'll try to answer as best I can.

I'm planning on having them, for the most part, self contained, with small loose threads moving from one arc into others, slowly building in size.

If that's not what was asked, could you please elaborate a bit more ^.^;
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What I meant was how do villains work in your arcs, how do you transition from each arc, and what about time skips.
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What I meant was how do villains work in your arcs, how do you transition from each arc, and what about time skips.


The first part is still kind of odd, but I'll explain the best I can.
Villains will be used in a variety of ways. Sometimes they'll be straight forward, set antagonist for an arc. Other times they'll be characters who'll attempt to manipulate our characters, as well as others to meet a specific goal. There are some enemies who'll be friends or allies of our group but will have a change of heart, or oppose our characters over a certain subject. Other enemies we'll have to go out and either destroy, apprehend or neutralize in some form.

The transfer between arcs will be done with some slice of life.

That, I'm still thinking of. Currently, I'm leaning more towards a bunch of small time skips like months in between, but might do a few larger ones down the line.

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Most of this looks good, but how come he wasn't able to learn the name of his shikai?

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Also, Yes, you can add things later in her bio, but get with me before doing so.
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Most of this looks good, but how come he wasn't able to learn the name of his Shikai?


Long story short, he can't hear it when it tries to speak to him. He's never been in a serious fight and he's a slacker, kind of a womanizer, a little bit of a drunkard but his Zanpakuto is the complete opposite. Serious and honorable. Even tho it still tries he is too blinded to hear it. Besides the personality conflicts he has with his Zanpakuto, there's also the fact that it's a straight up long sword, he has no sword skill at all so he barely uses her and prefers to stick to hakudo. Although now that I think about it, I should probably add the appearance in.
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Long story short, he can't hear it when it tries to speak to him. He's never been in a serious fight and he's a slacker, kind of a womanizer, a little bit of a drunkard but his Zanpakuto is the complete opposite. Serious and honorable. Even tho it still tries he is too blinded to hear it. Besides the personality conflicts he has with his Zanpakuto, there's also the fact that it's a straight up long sword, he has no sword skill at all so he barely uses her and prefers to stick to hakudo. Although now that I think about it, I should probably add the appearance in.


For the most part I do like the character, and the reasons are understandable. The only issue I can think of is the fact everyone was drafted into the shinigami academy and were able to graduate. Which I"m not sure would happen if he wasn't at least able to use his Shikai. I'll have to think of this.

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Although, one way around it is that he lost his zanpakuto at some point, and just never got around to trying to find it as his fighting styles worked fine without it?
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For the most part I do like the character, and the reasons are understandable. The only issue I can think of is the fact everyone was drafted into the shinigami academy and were able to graduate. Which I"m not sure would happen if he wasn't at least able to use his Shikai. I'll have to think of this.

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Although, one way around it is that he lost his zanpakuto at some point, and just never got around to trying to find it as his fighting styles worked fine without it?


Well, there's that and many other prominent members were able to acquire seats without a need for shikai. Kenpachi himself didn't realize his until the end of the series. The special forces don't use their zanpakuto majority of the time. Neither does the Kido Corps. I'm not trying to be a Kenpachi or anything I just believe it would be more worthwhile to discover it IC.

As far as a technical reason for graduating, he is a member of a powerful clan. Cant we just say some strings were pulled?
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Well, there's that and many other prominent members were able to acquire seats without a need for shikai. Kenpachi himself didn't realize his until the end of the series. The special forces don't use their zanpakuto majority of the time. Neither does the Kido Corps. I'm not trying to be a Kenpachi or anything I just believe it would be more worthwhile to discover it IC.

As far as a technical reason for graduating, he is a member of a powerful clan. Cant we just say some strings were pulled?


Actually, there's many prominent members who've we've never seen use a shikai. Which doesn't necessarily mean they graduated without one.
I'm not sure if Kenpachi counts, because even though it's true he didn't have his shikai till the end of the series. He got where he was by defeating the previous squad eleven captain in combat. He never went to the shinigami academy.

Hmmm. The only way I can see that done in this rp, was if Savaris didn't have a prodigy gene activated, and his family became interested in the new squad and pulled strings to have him join after they finished classes?
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That actually may be even better. A young savaris among a group of geniuses, being pushed to exceed his limits to keep up with his rivals. Sounds amazing.
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That actually may be even better. A young savaris among a group of geniuses, being pushed to exceed his limits to keep up with his rivals. Sounds amazing.


Well if you're okay with your character having a slower rate of progression then the rest then we can do that.
Just add that to the back story, and put that he lacks the prodigy gene in the strengths/ weakness section. Then let me know so I can review it.

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-Is there a particular day you guys would like to start this
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Well if you're okay with your character having a slower rate of progression then the rest then we can do that.
Just add that to the back story, and put that he lacks the prodigy gene in the strengths/ weakness section. Then let me know so I can review it.

@Red Mage@Champion@crimson lion
-How do you guys feel about a discord for this rp?
-Is there a particular day you guys would like to start this


I don't have a discord but I'm ready to do the RP whenever.
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Edited to include the rest of the info. And I also dont have a discord.
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How is he a strategist if he has no battle sense?
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Strategy is creating a plan. Battle sense is pulling it off. In other words, he doesn't have enough combat experience to initiate a plan he creates. When it comes to chess, he has most beat. When it comes to a fight, it's the opposite.
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Oh okay. So it's more like inexperience?
Well other than that he looks good to go. Approved.
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Anyone know Jean from RWBY? He is an excellent strategist with no battle sense.
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@Red Mage Couldn't think of one but he is the perfect example.
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