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Since this is likely the last time I come over here today, let me say that the IC will be going up no later than this weekend. Those who are still doing characters don't need to worry, though, since the first few posts will be most likely just exposition to prepare everyone for the quest.
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@Parallel Hearts

Sorry this is clearly a fault on my part. This is the 'blackened' version of medusa lancer your referring which is technicallly a altered form (The kind we see in the OVa) Regular medusa lancer does exist (one of her varients being lily (But the ova proves the adult form doee exist)) I was just a bit strangled for good medusa art outside of her rider self.

This one is unblackened and thus her alignment remains unchanged.

If it makes it easier I can change her art to that of her rider self. I simply liked the different in spirit dress for telling them apart.

That said the presence of gorgon breaker makes this one a bit further from her monstrous self, (Its mostly there to avoid insta gimping the other PC's by accident, Cybele is one hell of a op mystic eyes
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@Parallel Hearts I posted Hagen/Saber of Betrayal into the character section with the luck check added into Dainsleif's description.
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Removed BFA due to bulk.
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Sorry this is clearly a fault on my part. This is the 'blackened' version of medusa lancer your referring which is technicallly a altered form (The kind we see in the OVa) Regular medusa lancer does exist (one of her varients being lily (But the ova proves the adult form doee exist)) I was just a bit strangled for good medusa art outside of her rider self.

This one is unblackened and thus her alignment remains unchanged.

If it makes it easier I can change her art to that of her rider self. I simply liked the different in spirit dress for telling them apart.

That said the presence of gorgon breaker makes this one a bit further from her monstrous self, (Its mostly there to avoid insta gimping the other PC's by accident, Cybele is one hell of a op mystic eyes


No problem, it was just a misinterpretation issue.

Like I said before, she's ok. You can move her to the CS tab.
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Been a bit busy as of late, will be getting up a Rider sheet soon hopefully
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Gonna be preparing an Assassin related to a Argentinean folkloric figure, Martin Fierro
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@floodtalon

Well, almost everything there is alright. I just have a couple questions:

1st, why is it that he has Clairvoyance when he's neither an Archer, nor a Caster, and (as far as I remember Siegfried's backstory in Fate) he's a very short-sighted individual who takes bad decisions at the drop of a hat if he thinks that he's doing good? In its place, he probably could have Disengage, or maybe something else in its place. Unless of course you have a reason behind it.

2nd, the Luck rank down on his last Noble Phantasm is too harsh. Perhaps something like "Two-Three ranks down to a minimum of E" would be a little bit more fair, I think. After all, there are some Servants that are born just so lucky that even the greatest curse of them all wouldn't be that much of an issue to them.
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Alright, Constantine's complete. His power's mostly in his skills, but he does have a nice church to throw at people...

I also don't like Imperial Privilege, so having it mutated was honestly the best way I could deal with it. >w<

EDIT: Image rescaled~


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@Cu Chulainn

Like I said before, I think that Constantine is alright. You can add him to the Characters tab.
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Ok, for the (probable) last update of today, I'll give you all a glimpse of one of the enemies that'll appear in the 1st chapter of the story. Hopefully, this will be a fun game, since this cast is giving me some interesting ideas:



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Class: Alterego
True Name: Alterego W
Origin: North American Folklore
Height/Weight: 230cm/157kg
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Description: A cruel and violent beast that's the combination of a number of beings spoken of in stories told by the Natives of the land of North America. It's a fiercely cannibalistic creature with the power of consuming and stealing the very flesh and essence of its victims in order to pose as them. Certainly, an alien existence whose sole purpose is to spread malice and contempt.

— Parameters —
STR: ??? | END: ??? | AGI: ??? | MAG: ??? | LCK: ??? | NP: ???

— Class Skills —
Territory Creation (Forest) A
Presence Concealment A+
Magic Resistance B

— Personal Skills —
Cannibalism A
Shamanism B
Skinwalker A++
Battle Continuation A

— Armaments —
???

— Noble Phantasms —
True Name: ???
Type: ???
Rank: ???
Range: ???
Maximum number of targets: ???
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@Red Alice

I hope this helps with your questions from the interest check.
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@Parallel Hearts

While I'll move medusa into the cs tab as is, I might app a couple skills seperately for you to review in order to better distinguishify her kit, Mostly because the base is done, I think I can attempt to add a few creative replacements,

Namely replacing IA, and MS with slightly differing forms, having decided this medusa is closer to gorgon then rider medusa

(Also her alignments Chaotic neutral now)
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Here it is, conveniently I was mulling over this idea for the past few months and this helped me make the character faster than expected. Tell me what's there to fix, whether they're concept and balance issues or errors in grammar, syntax or format.

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@floodtalon

Well, almost everything there is alright. I just have a couple questions:

1st, why is it that he has Clairvoyance when he's neither an Archer, nor a Caster, and (as far as I remember Siegfried's backstory in Fate) he's a very short-sighted individual who takes bad decisions at the drop of a hat if he thinks that he's doing good? In its place, he probably could have Disengage, or maybe something else in its place. Unless of course you have a reason behind it.

2nd, the Luck rank down on his last Noble Phantasm is too harsh. Perhaps something like "Two-Three ranks down to a minimum of E" would be a little bit more fair, I think. After all, there are some Servants that are born just so lucky that even the greatest curse of them all wouldn't be that much of an issue to them.


I honestly don't quite remember why I gave him Clairvoyance, I feel like I had a good reason but I was also super tired last night. Will figure out something to replace it with.
Edit: Yeah I remember why I did it I think, Kriemhilde had lots of visions and my sleep addled brain attributed her visions to Siegfried. I'm a dumb.

And I can change the luck down thing, does three ranks sound good to you? Rheingold is a powerful curse in the end, pretty much everyone who has interacted with it has fallen prey to its curse after all.
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That moment everyone on the allied team, bar Scathach is vulnerable to Cybele so far.

Seems like medusa might actually end up killing her allies by accident.
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I'm gonna take some more time on Siegfried, I feel like Grani could use some work
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@1Charak2 I'm sure magic resistance is gonna help out for Sabers and Riders. Though our Labyrinth Caster is probably toast.
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