AngelofOctober

Metal Gear Rising~Deadlocked (CANCELLED)

-While "AngelofOctober"'s departure was techinally on me, I grew tired of their empty words. First they promised to have their character ready on Tuesday, then Wednesday, and then this morning were still not prepared.
If I had continued to wait and postpone the Roleplay further, it would have been next Friday before we got this show on the road.

@Raging Ghost

And?

You want a shit rushed character sheet? I take my time. My "empty words" was because I didn't realize how long my own sheets for my own RP was going to take me.

I am detailed player. I write detailed sheets, and I try to keep them as short as I can. But when I design a character I ask myself

-Who they are
-What they are
-How they came to be in this world
-How did this affect
-Why did it affect him

All the fundamentals of good writing. I have RP'd for almost 16 years of my life. I have never rushed a sheet before and I wasn't going to start.

I have never in my life went from Interest Check to OCC so fast.

I rather a member take their time and give me their best damn work. Then someone who has to spit something out because of a deadline. I had! Been working on Agito. But! I did fall asleep at some point doing so. I also hadn't fully decided on a face claim.

I gave you the design of my powers. But if you don't want a broken mess of some powers. And you want someone to take the time and care of the RP. So what if I was going to give you the sheet by Friday?

Do you want the best from your members? Or some rushed out RP with some rushed out characters.

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Furthermore, I'd like to add. As said I like to work with the GMs when designing my characters. I ask questions. But you're rarely around and it's hard to get into contact with you.

I can only work as fast as the GM works.

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You have been seen in the last 7 hours and my message has been up for 8 hours. Sort of my point about your unavailability. But then want to rush your members.

Any Way to Get the 0th post

As far as I know this is not currently the case.

There's been discussion of adding an option to have the 0th post show up on each page, iirc, but it hasn't gotten past discussion right now.

@Ruby

All right thanks. It be a super useful tool, since I use the OTH page to update Arcs and conclusions of the RP.

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Furthermore that doesn't address my question;

For those who know their character will not participate for curiosity sake a Haunted House;

Do you want a slice of life section?

Or a Sub Arc 1?

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@BrokenWashing

Page 3

NPC section has been updated. I basically have an unidentified section. Depending on how the Arcs go and because I like a little mystery to people's motivations, the unidentified section keeps my plans of each character a little to myself, gives you guys a good mystery to chomp on. And consider who is friend and foe.

Depending, considering I have 10, maybe 12 people, and I can split the group up evenly, I make make a Sub Arc 1. But I am not entirely sure. Any thoughts is the time to bring them up.

I never worked with such a big cast, normally I keep my cast at 5 and 6, but everyone's sheets were so good that I had to. I like a little autonomy, as in characters do what they want as I like a little open worldedness to my RPs.

The way I have this planned in the IC, is not even being called to do a thing. The Arc starts because Serenity wants to see the weird German circus. Eh hem she could get costume design ideas for Halloween this year. [don't ask she's weird] and wants an excuse to go to conney island.

Your characters can choose whether or not to go to the circus. But I don't want those who sit out of the Arc to be bored. So;

Do you want a Sub 1 Arc? or do you want to do something fun, slice of life, bonding with the others who don't get roped up in an accidental arc?

^It's honestly the fact Serenity wanted to explore. You can't go wrong with a little curiosity now and then.

She had no real idea it would lead somewhere. As remember Rogue X isn't entirely like the group everyone tends to. They get their missions either by freak accident or its turned over to them because it's not in the X-men or Avenger's best interest.

Also I will give you a little thing for your character; There may be something demonic. Or you have heard rumors of something demonic about the four. ;)

@Tybalt Capulet

Hey! Serenity is not the Team Mom, okay she is The Team Leader

^she's totally the team mom

> hey don't betray me

Any Way to Get the 0th post

To show up on every page of the OCC?

It makes accessing it easier. And I had designed the section in the hopes it would be showed on all of the pages as some kind of pinned message.

Is this not the case?

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@Cassowarysaur
@Queentze
@GrizzTheMauler

Do not let the Full tag scare you. You 3 are the ones I have made an exception for. I am merely changing the OCC to Full because after you three, I will no longer be accepting any sheets. As said you guys came in at a window of opportunity as I hammer out details for the IC.

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Okay ladies and gentleman;

NPC section has been updated. I basically have an unidentified section. Depending on how the Arcs go and because I like a little mystery to people's motivations, the unidentified section keeps my plans of each character a little to myself, gives you guys a good mystery to chomp on. And consider who is friend and foe.

Depending, considering I have 10, maybe 12 people, and I can split the group up evenly, I make make a Sub Arc 1. But I am not entirely sure. Any thoughts is the time to bring them up.

I never worked with such a big cast, normally I keep my cast at 5 and 6, but everyone's sheets were so good that I had to. I like a little autonomy, as in characters do what they want as I like a little open worldedness to my RPs.

The way I have this planned in the IC, is not even being called to do a thing. The Arc starts because Serenity wants to see the weird German circus. Eh hem she could get costume design ideas for Halloween this year. [don't ask she's weird] and wants an excuse to go to conney island.

Your characters can choose whether or not to go to the circus. But I don't want those who sit out of the Arc to be bored. So;

Do you want a Sub 1 Arc? or do you want to do something fun, slice of life, bonding with the others who don't get roped up in an accidental arc?

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The News Hub

*Essentially this will be the post I use to write the current Arc, I will mark in a post with a URL link where they begin and where they respectively end for later viewer ship. And also include the conclusion of each Arc as they are completed.

The Current Date for the RP is January 25th, 2009

Arc 1

All that Slimes!

All that Slimes

Message from Q

TBA in IC

IC Begin: TBA

IC End: TBA

Conclusion: TBA

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-me sighs-

Here I go

@GrizzTheMauler

Personality Strengths:

Having lived most of his life being viewed as weaker by his society, Corinth has proven that he's rather hardy, both in body and in mind. He doesn't go down until the fight's over. He's incredibly loyal and is very generous with what he has. Corinth actively tries to disprove many stereotypes, especially the ones his race have against others and themselves.

Personality Flaws:

Corinth is rather brash and known for a temper that can cause a lot of damage to things and people around him. When angry he's not someone you want to be near, since he stops caring about consequences and acts on his instinct. This behavior causes him to have bouts of depression, as he's not exactly able to control himself since he's rather young.

I feel his personality could just be about anybody. It's rather vanilla and doesn't really make him stand out as a person. Fine, but at the same time I am not really feeling it.

Powers:

Ergokinesis: Corinth is able to manipulate nearly any form of energy like all of his race, however, due to his lux(gender) as a Loren, he is only able to generate and store up to 150kA of energy which he stores as electricity or light. The more he uses his powers, the higher the risk of losing control and causing an explosion. He generally uses his powers to set up precision strikes or aid in his melee attacks. In a fight against a Vulux, one's strategy is to slowly whittle down the amount of energy they have until they can no longer use their power and become little more than fodder... However Corinth refuses to reveal how strong the Vulux Gors really are, giving only a comment about "We'd have your energy problems completely solved." when he was introduced to Earth's energy grid.
"Light is my favorite. Some Gor can even manipulate hardlight. They dive deep into thermal vents that we have on Vulu."

Regeneration: Corinth has a high regeneration rate... So long as he's exposed to or is storing several Amperes of energy for a while. All Vulux possess this ability and Corinth has mentioned that yes, Vulux give each other energy to heal wounds.
"Band-Aids are very primitive... You seriously have a long way to go..."

Minor Gravity Manipulation: His specialization as a Vulux is in creating Gravitational Anomalies. So far he can only use this to fly, increase his strength and make things heavier.
"I generally up the gravity on me... We've got higher grav on my planet. And better weather. And Food."

Combat Body: His body is much more durable and s immune to Earth's toxins and diseases. Has higher strength as well.
"Haven't gotten sick once here. Guess its because of our different biology. Though it seems I'm just slightly stronger than you guys buy a thousand pounds. I think the Hulk or Juggernaut could be the only ones to go toe to toe with a mature Gor though... And I doubt even they could beat the Sages... They are like, actual monsters among the Vulux."

Your powers need to be tightened. Ergokinesis for example is too vague and wide. Energy can come from lots of things. Narrow it down to one and give it some real limitations, rather than the vague arbituary ones you have given it.

Most of the bodies like Regeneration and Gravity all need some kind of limit and you need expand on their detail of how they are used.

I feel at this current time they are too broken, too open ended, and too vague to be acceptable.

He right now is sort of coming as Wolverine, but what if energy and gravity. If you stalked the interest check, my sheet states that I do not like absolute powers nor omni powers. So I generally don't like when someone can just do anything and everything.

Otherwise the character itself is okay. It's not jumping out to me. He seems like a generic everyday super hero. Which again is fine, but I generally do like when people go for more creative. Especially when it's coming so close to the wire as I wait for two other people.

Your sheet is pending until the things I address are addressed, in a respectful manner please.

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@GrizzTheMauler

Still working on it? I read it over a little. [a little tired from like poor sleep]

@Dnafein

Bad chibi! Bad that's my window.