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Current Ah yes an advertisement of an RP from three years ago perfect status quality right there. Back from the dead
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Mahz been on vacation for half a year, I wonder if he'll come back from his Mahzquest - youtube.com/watch?v=ygI-2F8… - where could be Mahz be now? Find out next time on Mahzquest.
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All I ask is that people communicate these things.

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In Hellpact 8 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay

@shylarah

Yep, I am. As a writer I feel that a successful one, a successful author is one who takes the time to analyze other work and just as much their own work as well. Anyone not willing to see where their flaws lie or not willing to acknowledge them, is not necessarily to me a successful writer. I feel part of writing is part editing. People should be self critical. That's nothing against you, fyi. Simply when people give me criticism I look into my writing and assess the criticism to see if it is fair or not.
Hey Everyone!

We just lost a member of this RP and a slot is open! Please read everything from the first post and make sure to communicate with the GM if interested! :)


Tis is true. I will be only accepting male characters though. We have a lot of vagina ladies and gentleman. We need to even this out with a little man in the pants.

Her voice is so soothing.

Little bird?

But she

Little bird


He continued to rock for a second. He looked at Anya. He’d forgive her this time. Getting up from hugging his knees he fixed his hair.

“The smallest bird is the bee hummingbird,” he told Liv, “But even still. My name is the one that holds the the sun and the moon. But I am not holding anything because I am on the ground. Because that’s where they put me.”

His attention is disrupted when another walks in. She scares him. She is scary. Her words are sweet. A venus flytrap. He looks at Liv and Anya, and sort of slides behind them in hopes she won’t see him.

“Another comes - voice as sweet as poison,” he whispers to himself.

She

Uh huh

Don’t let her see us


“There’s so many little webs now, “ Skye mutters again to no one in the room.
The Hermit



Was he implying to his traveler companions he was mad? He was merely acting with some caution, especially since this fellow was armed. What if the rest of them were armed? Except the implication that he was crazy was enough for him to come out of the bush beside his cautious nature. He looks at the individual for a second.

Some scars and his physique made this individual look like a bruiser.

"F-f-irst, I'd like you to kno I am nott mad just because I was hiding in a bush," he stammers, he was feeling uncomfortable and anxious in this situation, and he felt embarrassed that some might doubt his skill when he wasn't a good conversationalist, "I was..merely being pre-cautious. With that out of the way. I was..going..the the opposite direction to-to perform. For I am The Hermit."

He rarely dropped his name, but he had hoped by doing so that it would give him some credit. Or some kind of mercy kill he supposed.
@Eklispe

The Hermit



He had expected them to walk off. Who would want to deal with a wanderer in a bush? Yet, someone was politely speaking with him. Scheisse, think of something. He was just cautious about strangers on the road that weren’t audience.

“There’s plenty of people in this bush,” he says, “I’m not the only one.”

He clears his throat. And begins to put on a mock female voice, “Yes, I find bushes a wonderful place to stay when I need time away from the farmhouse.”

“Hrrmm yes I agree bushes are a wonderful place to stay,” he says imitating an older grufferman.

“See it’s absolutely a community thing,” Favian tells him, “Nothing to worry about at all.”


"I think that is a great idea! We don’t need to be strangers and do any of this alone. My name is Olivia Cole but everyone can just call me Liv. I prefer it that way as Olivia just sounds a little old fashioned. It is nice to meet you guys though I wish it could have been under better circumstances. What are your names?”

She’s friendly

She seems wise

Olivia like Olive Garden

Is there any relationship?


“Sssssssh,” Skye said to no one, but himself.

"Magdalene Camiron, or rather just Mags. My dad gave me that nickname a while ago. I-I..."

Poor dear.

She seems sad.

Let’s be her friend.


“We do have the same affliction,” Skye mentions, again to no one in the room could see.

He’s finally arrived.

He looks greasy.

I don’t like him.

He looks dirty.


“That’s not nice,” Skye says to himself, “You’re suppose to give people the benefit of the doubt.”

Were these people worth it though? He wondered. They all wondered. Listening to the electric hum that he began to repeat, rocking back and forth. It was soothing. The whine and moan of electropathy. A mechanical physiology.

Two things happened. The slamming of the chair took away the trance. The electric security had fizzled. White noise now shattered with discord of the sound of the chair. He tried to focus back on the thing he liked the most about this place.

Then a hand. Sensations of touch. An unfamiliar. Unwanted thing. Violating. A chill running through his body. He squirmed and flung her hand off him.

“DON’T!” - “YOU CAN’T!"


He began to rock back and forth, slowly groaning to himself.

“Mmmmmm, No!” he muttered to himself, “No! No! No!”
@Spiffy

I mean it sounds like some people don't want me to be a part of this RP. So I am waiting for all of that to be decided.
@shylarah

Autism party. Then I would suggest those things need to be better addressed because I did not get those from both characters introduction. To me to make the story work then, one of them had to give up emotional vulnerability. Either Edric of Leia. Because readers cannot read between those established lines, one of those character should have given into the emotional window. It is not a bad piece. I just don't think it really is what this contest is about because you have too emotionally reserved characters in the first scene and that makes it harder for the readers to connect.

I feel like the relationship should have established, maybe not of unease. Maybe Edric is mocking her inside. Etc. You have a nice piece, but forgot the human element and to get deep down into the emotional levels of the relationship.
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>whispers secretly, because you can totally do that via text. "Don't worry, you're in good company." ;P


Officially diagnosed in Autism for 2 years. But have had it my whole life. So I realize I am like Master Literal sometimes.
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