Ariamis

End of Days RP (EoD - Mass Effect/Evangelion Inspired)

"No, it's fine." Elora suddenly felt heavy, and she suspected that it was her adrenaline stopping. So much has happened in the past ten minutes that she's had trouble keeping up. But now it seemed like things were going back to normal, or as close to normal as one could get in this situation. "Umm, if you ever need someone to talk to, I'll always be here. I know from experience that sharing your worries with someone really helps. Okay, I'll let the others know. See you later, Utano."

As Elora walked back to the changing rooms and changed back to her casual clothes, Elora couldn't help but feel like there was something odd about their XO officer. There was the kind of spark in his eyes you don't see on normal people, like if he viewed the world through a filter of some kind. She also suspected he was actually insane, but she wouldn't admit that. Surely people put into such a position must be clear-headed and wise for them to be effective commanders. The professor's just stressed out due to his secret test of character failing. Still, whether he had any mental illnesses or not, he was their commander, and they would have to obey him, or else they would end up like Ian did. Thankfully Sigma got promoted to squad leader out of all of them. She's keeping an eye out for Ian, I'm sure of it.

Elora felt a bit hungry, and thought about going to the mess hall to get something to eat, but she first wanted to check the briefing room, just in case Sigma had problems with moving Ian. She walked in to find Korie and Zan punching each other. She covered her mouth with her hands in shock. Her face was turning red, and her feet started shaking.

"P-Please...stop fighting...stop...STOP FIGHTING!"

End of Days RP (EoD - Mass Effect/Evangelion Inspired)

DOUBLE EYEPATCHES

End of Days RP (EoD - Mass Effect/Evangelion Inspired)

Looks like Sigma...got an eyeful of him.

End of Days RP (EoD - Mass Effect/Evangelion Inspired)

I like the contrast Antwon brings to the rest of the cast. His way of being jerky isn't overdone, and is actually amusing at a couple of parts.

Elora would have responded a bit more to him if it weren't for him walking away and exploding kneecaps happening.

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Oh man, Serah and Elora have no idea that Sigma's currently ordered to gouge out Ian's eyeball. This is so horrible.

End of Days RP (EoD - Mass Effect/Evangelion Inspired)

I'd like to see a bit more personality from Zan, since up to this point he's not done much besides train and follow orders. It would be interesting to see him try to open up a conversation with the others, or otherwise interact a bit more.

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ON TO A DIFFERENT TOPIC...

So uh, Can I get any feedback on how I'm playing Serah? Am I doing something wrong? Making her annoying? Not giving enough details? Anything's fine.

@Ammokkx

Was Serah's breakdown caused by a trauma triggered by hearing the gunshots? It seemed to come a bit out of backfield in the post itself. Otherwise Serah's stuff has been fun to follow.

The Truth Behind the Project

“I’m glad you two resolved your confrontation. Honestly, I can’t understand why two Magical Girls would ever fight one another. You’re both on the same side, right? I just don’t understand.”

@TheWindel

Elise scoffed at the sight of the furball, and crossed her arms. The creature has been annoying her ever since she contracted, constantly popping out of nowhere and trying to be so goddamn cute all the time. She hated that.

“Hello Elise Augermann. I never expected you to come to Miso City. But I’m glad you did! With your help, the number of Primordials that show up will be greatly reduced.”

@TheWindel

"Hmph. Whatever." Elise eyeballed the thing with contempt. "Don't you have a more constructive use for your time, like recruiting new fighters? Ugh, I stopped caring already."

She then waved to Elise to follow her. She did not wait to see if Elise did follow. She walked away and lead the way to the meeting of magical girls.

After arriving to the school, Rose stepped inside. She made no effort to dry herself off from the rain. She did however pull all the water out of Elise's outfit as a courtesy. She discarded the extra water in a nearby trash bin. She did not say much until she got up to the meeting room. She smiles politely, "Akame, A pleasure to see you once again. Anything new happen since last time?"

@MarsAdept

"Thanks," Elise said once 'Rea' dried her costume, and sneezed due to the loss in her body heat. "This better be worth it."

She followed the other girl into an empty classroom, and met a new girl who looked a lot older than either of them. She went next to the door she came from and leaned against the wall with her arms crossed, keeping her eyes on the girl who seemed to have set this up. The young girl seemed to know this 'Akame', though she wondered at the big age gap between them. She spotted the treats and tea set on a table.

Does this girl really think she's gonna have some kind of lame tea party? Is she five or something?

Elise groaned, and then spoke to Akame. "Yo. Are there more guests coming? Cause so far this ain't much of a gathering. And what's with the tea party? You think it's cute to be wasting my time like this?"

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Honestly, I'm ready for this charade to be over with. After this fiasco, I find both Ian's and Lorenzo's characters to be thoroughly annoying. The phrase "tryhard" comes to mind.

@Dead Cruiser

I agree with this. Lorenzo's revenge could have easily ended with Ian getting shot and beaten.

End of Days RP (EoD - Mass Effect/Evangelion Inspired)

Well, on one hand you gotta think of how a real person would respond to such brutal and inhumane torture, and it would likely devolve into ceaseless screaming: even Solid Snake, a combat veteran with nerves of steel, screams once tortured, and nobody thinks of him as less of a man because of that.

Then on the other hand I'm rooting for Ian, and for story purposes having him deliver a bit of banter to Lorenzo's face is really gratifying for all the shit he goes through. In this case though, I feel like the system's set up so that Lorenzo could hear Ian speak, in the hopes that he would beg for his life and for the torture to stop like the ultimate douchebag he is. Of course, Gnar's got the ultimate authority on the decision of whether or not Ian could say anything during the torture.