Ashevelendar

Tribal Survival

@Mae K. Sorry for that. :( I forgot that not everyone starts college next week xD

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@Thecrash20 What @Gareth speaks it's true.

So I looked over your CS. There are some problems in it.

• All Dark Humans are born in the Dark Human lands. They are not "allowed" to go to other places due to people being afraid they'll get sick.
• The spells. You have a basic spell and two complex ones. The first one ( the blade ) I can overlook but the second one is too powerful and if any Templar would see those markings he would kill your character when he was a child.
• All Magi are sent to the Citadel as soon as they are born. There are devices that find magical energy in newborns so as soon as they are born Templar are sent either to kill or take the child from their parents. If the parents don't want to give the child they are killed. If they hide him , he is found ( the same way the Empire finds out that a Magi kid is born ) and killed.
• All Magi are raised in the Citadel so they are all "strong" due to living in a prison all their lives.

I hope I don't sound too harsh but...edit in and tag ( @Mention ) me and I'll look it over again :)

@Venku Your turn to post and then I can continue.

@Shadow Daedalus Yep. Everyone has a bomb inside them. A way to make sure they don't kill each other or run away. Also a way to kill them all by killing only one of them if they disobeyed.
Thinking about it , this could be used in real life too. In prisons I mean. That way you can quell any idea of rebellion or killing between the inmates. A "cure" would be given to the ones that were on the death bed or those that had the idea to suicide. Like it would be a...time bomb ? 2 hours after the person dies , if the bomb is not defused everyone dies. This only could be used at Maximum security prisons where people don't go because they've stolen a car.

@gareth Thanks for the kind words about the map :) I'll try to update it as the RP progresses. Maybe even make a new one each time our party explores a location. Maybe make maps for each location ? Something like a map for let's say...one of the Magi towers.

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@Wick True. True. My mind is not working. Somehow my mind thought that OP came from Opening Post xD

Let's make a story !

So. Here is a game which I don't know how it's called in other countries. From what I heard it has more than 5 names outside my country so...I'll explain the "rules" and such and let's see if we can do something nice here.

The purpose of the game is to make a story based on one word by a person.

Example :

Me - I
You - will
Next Guy/Gal - dance
etc.

The 20th person will connect the words and make a sentence. So let's say 19 players said this " John is going to the market and he will buy aliens with who he will drink liquefied food and " the 20'th person will write another word and he/she/hir will connect the words and see what sentence will be.

You can write anything at all as long it somehow connects to the word that is above you. ( You cannot do something like this :
Me - John
You - will
Next Guy/Gal - Alien )

So. My first word will be....

Lady

Tribal Survival

@Mae Still into this , right ? :D

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@Venku@Gareth@dabombjk@Caits@Shadow Daedalus@Wick I've added some things to the first OCC post.

Map Legend and the most important thing. The Timeline !

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@Wick I've added a thing to make sure no one misunderstands what I meant. Sorry Miss / Mrs. Wicked :)

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@Wick I also mentioned that Non-Magi characters ( the reason for two different CSs ) have no magic powers. Only Magi are allowed to cast spells.

They were the masters of nature spells in the past ( 100+ years ago before the Magi war ).
The Magi gathered too much power and wanted to become Gods. Reason why people rebelled against them and since then hated and killed them.

Also.

Life Magic : Life magic spells are used to heal any wound and condition that someone may had. Complex spells allow the control of unintelligent beings. Cost : A small fraction of the user's life force every time a spell is cast. A complex spell may even kill a person

Pokemon Gijinka [Always Accepting!]

As they were moving towards Pewter City , Alexis looked at Shadow and started to talk with him. It was time for her to get to know her Pokemon.

" So...Shadow. I want to know a few things about you. If I am allowed my friend. I'll tell you something about me and you continue about something about you , ok ? *she smiled at him* I was abandoned in the cemetery when I was born and I was raised by some old folk 'till they died when I was 10. Since then I returned to the cemetery and lived there until now. I lived most of my life in the cemetery. Even when I stayed with the old folk , I kept returning to the cemetery to play with the other Ghosts. " said with a sad smile on her face because she remembered about the man and woman that raised her.

@Shadow Daedalus

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@Wick Your character is not a Mage. So...no magic for her. Only the Life Magi are the ones who can heal using spells. Sorry. I think I've already mentioned that every mage was locked in the Citadel and those that weren't were either dead or soon to be.
And...Magi don't receive any kind of medical treatment or such.
If your character had the smallest magic in her she would've been imprisoned.

I wanted to wait for everyone to write before I continued with the information about the mission. Things like where they must go first , how to get there , how will they travel etc.