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4 mos ago
Everybody wants that fire IC but nobody wants to GM it.
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12 mos ago
If you're roleplaying with your only friends, you're roleplaying with your best friends.
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2 yrs ago
I think to sell someone on an interest check, it's really important to seem enthusiastic about your own idea. That means writing more than a single sentence to attract potential players.
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3 yrs ago
The virgin "My post was so bad it killed the RP!" VS the chad "My post was so good it concluded the RP."
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Bio


W I T H R I G H T E O U S H A N D S





Did you know that Dante's inferno is called a divine comedy because things work out for the protagonist? Back in the day, the only two genres were comedy and drama. The only difference was that in a comedy, the protagonist is better off at the end, and a drama is the opposite. So that's why a story about going through hell can still be considered a comedy, even if it's not funny.

Name:
Broken Promise, BP, Boss

Age:
Old enough to know better, too young to care. (that is to say 30's)

Preferred RPs:
I Prefer to make my own, but will occasionally join something if it looks interesting. I'll join just about anything so long as it isn’t overly edgy/sweet, though it's rare for me to do. I don't do 1x1s too often either.

Preferred Roles:
I tend to play adorable characters everyone wants to befriend or proper assholes everyone wants to stay away from. I try not to play moral paragons or prime evils.

RP Conquests:
I've completed quite a few RP's off site, but most of them are on private forums or have simply been lost to the ravages of server crashes. As for stuff here, I'm sure everyone who sees me post in the off topic sections has seen me find an excuse to talk about Danganronpa: Tower of Carnage. It's a project that took over 4 years to complete and I feel pride not only for myself but all the wonderful people who helped make it enjoyable during its run. Re: Zero: The High Council Is technically my first, but it was just something I kind of took over and ended up ending the story after just six months. It finished, but eh...

Last RP I finished was Symphony of Espers which turned out pretty good.

RP's in progress:
For some reason I can't seem to stay away from Ari's magical girl RP, even if I'm not sure why I'm still in it.

As for my own projects, I'm doing Symphony on High to continue the gigachad adventures of the espers in Pax Septimus.

RP Graveyard:
I've been pretty fortunate on this forum. I think I joined one when I first came on the site that didn't really do anything, and there are a few 1x1 things that didn't go anywhere. It's disappointing when an RP ends before it can be finished, but I've come to look at them as learning experiences.

And then there's that london magical girl RP, and that dark magical girl RP. I think I'm done joining magical girl RPs for a while.

Other interests:
Videos
I watch a lot of educational videos on youtube. Usually as research for something I’m writing or purely because a topic interests me. I like channels like Tier Zoo and Daryl Talks Games, and I’ll also watch things like Critical Drinker or Literature Devil to deepen my understanding of story telling. Though I also like memes and jokes, to which I’ll find myself watching stuff like Sseth, but usually find myself surfing through meme videos. I gotta work on that.

Games
I have a rather long history of playing virtually every platformer to come into existence during the indie boom, as well as quite a few other indie games. I’ve played Meatboy, Binding of Issac, Gunvolt, Cuphead, Princess Remedy in a World of Hurt, Classic Metroid, Warcraft 3, Final Fantasy 7,8, and 14, Left 4 Dead, Shantae, Celeste, Danganronpa, God Eater, the list goes on. What I’ve played is kind of all over the place. I don’t play many games these days, I tend to pick things that look interesting and go on a decent steam sale.

Painting Minis
I do this in moderation. Otherwise, it's a pretty expensive hobby to start...

Music
I listen to everything, save most country/rap songs. I have too many favorites to name.

Personality:
Not one to take life or the internet too seriously. Is only serious about writing well and having a good time.

People to Insult:
Dalton is a Dingus.

Most Recent Posts

@Majoras End I think me calling it an open collab is confusing people.

It's not a collab. Everyone is just posting directly to the RP as usual. Just the posts will be shorter.
Noel looked at her pictures with bewilderment. She sifted from one to the other, back and forth only to then look at the actual scene before going back to the pictures. She strained her eyes, reassuring herself at every moment. She was barely listening to the others as she was completely lost in thought.

She was certain that something was off about these pictures.

It was impossible to make out on the crime scene currently, as everyone had shuffled around, but her pictures showed one thing everyone had missed in the dim lighting. The ground here had left some very easily distinguishable footprints. Of course, these footprints had long faded as people shuffled around. But that was exactly why she took pictures in the first place. Only she now had access to the crime scene as it was found, completely untouched.

But it still didn’t add up.

No matter how well she looked, she could only see two pairs of footprints. But how could that be? The murderer definitely couldn’t have erased their own footprints without affecting the other pair, so did that mean only two people had been here? That wasn’t impossible, but that would have very grim implications for a certain musician…

One glance at a picture from Krista, who had long gone to lie down, showed one of these pairs indeed belonged to her. Krista’s shoes were rather unique, and not easily confused with anyone else’s. Noel looked at the other pair, certain to find that the pair would perfectly match Mondatta’s feet.

… But they didn’t?

It was impossible. Even from this picture, Noel could easily tell that the other pair of footprints could possibly belong to Mondatta. The footprints in the picture were significantly smaller than Mondatta’s feet. Did Mondatta’s suit have an option to adjust foot size? The reporter honestly doubted it. But that meant these footprints could only belong to one person! Noel had the scoop in her hands! She could now unveil the murderer in one fell swoop.

”NEWSFLASH!” The reporter exclaimed with pride and joy. ”Listen everyone! I know how to find the murderer, we just have to-“

Before she could finish that sentence, she was rudely interrupted by a very poorly timed announcement.

Monokuma made another appearance on every monitor in the hospital. “Okay, I think that was enough time.” The bear sighed and hung his head. “I'm so sorry about the Monokuma file. Usually I'll do all the forensic stuff for you guys but there just wasn't anything to find. There's no body, no blood. I'm honestly wondering if you guys will be able to pull this off.” Killgood lifted his head up. “I'm just glad I'm not in your shoes!” The monitors all displayed the the gates to the court of carnage. “Head on over here, pronto. Don't force the nurse staff to drag you out. It could be... unsightly.”

“Never fear! Your queen is here!” Alexandria rode in on horseback, trampling all over the crime scene. She nearly hit Mondata's body with her lance. “Alright, time to get your disheveled lot into the court of carnage. Don't dawdle, I haven't seen any blood yet, and I'm looking for an excuse to change that.” No one had any objections, at least not ones that would be headed. Everyone would be escorted outside in front of the gate.




No one could hide from the carnage sisters. Nariko had found Krista and was carrying her over to the gate. The vertigo had mostly gone away, and the bleeding had stopped entirely. Of course the samurai took it upon herself to bandage the violinist up. She used way too many bandages, and even taped over one of her eyelids. Though Krista looked damn near impervious to head injuries now. Even Aleecia, Isaiah, and Calvin couldn't hide in their rooms forever. Eventually Geina ousted them and got them ready.

“But we weren't involved with it!” Aleecia was holding onto Isaiah's arm. “We didn't even hunt for clues, we wouldn't be any help in the court.”

“I don't give a fuck about any of that! Look at your E-handbook!” Geina was as gruff as ever. “Not participating is not an option. Just because you didn't want to help with the investigation doesn't mean shit. Buckle up buttercup, you're all goin' for a ride.”

“This is horrible, I can't even see...”

Isaiah and Calvin were quiet. Perhaps they knew there was no way to argue their way out of it. Though Calvin did pipe up to say one thing. “Let's just get this shit over with.”

And so the gates to the court of carnage swung open, and everyone walked inside.




No doubt all of the infinites had heard about the wild roller coaster ride called tower of carnage. Allegedly it was the “fourth” tower that made up Axis Mundi. It was between the other three towers, and even taller than the rest of the hospital. Originally it was going to be a slower educational ride, but there were difficulties building the hospital in such a way that the ride would have access to all of the noteworthy facilities. So they decided to build an enclosed roller coaster with a lot of extreme dives and climbs. There were debates about the name being too scary and too difficult to say for children. But the wild ride the tower of carnage provided wasn't intended for the young anyway. They even barred people who weren't physically fit from riding the tower of carnage. But the bear didn't seem to think much of the regulations.

The roller coaster had clearly been modified, as evident by the black and white paint job. All of the lights were off, save for the dock lights around the roller coaster train. It was clearly an intense ride, if the large overhead restraints were anything to go by. The track itself couldn't be seen, as it was completely cloaked in shadow. Even the walls were obscured by darkness. The bear was already seated in the front most train.

“Admission is free everyone! Just make sure you've got your restraints on.” The bear giggled. “ Of course your fellow nurses will be hear to ease you into your seats. So just make sure you keep all paws and tails inside the train at all times.”

The infinites were escorted and assisted into the train in this order behind Dr. kill good: Davis, Isaiah, Krista, Felix, Aleecia, Cyrus, Daimyon, Shaun, Mary, Caora, Calvin, Bliss, Lucas, Noel, Marianne, Alice. The infinites could hear the auto-locking systems click as the restraints were lowered into place. Krista's bandaged head almost didn't clear the restraints.

“Alright, court is in session! Try not to lose your lunch!”

That was all the warning anyone got before the roller coaster kicked off at full speed. There was nothing to see. The only thing the infinites could do is brace as the roller coaster took unexpected twists and dives. There were even a few corkscrews tossed in for added vertigo. As intense as it was, the ride was slowing down rather quickly. All of the carts rotated ninety degrees to face inward. The infinites could see that they were in a circle now. The lights kicked on, and the carts appeared to be in a large room. The walls were covered with velvet drapes, and the floor had the bear's favorite black and white checker pattern on it. Everyone's restraints released at the same time, allowing them to stand. Before everyone was a wooden podium, where they could rest their arms or place their E-handbooks. For obvious reasons, everyone was a little shaken. Their lives depended on this court case, and they had just gone on a rough roller coaster ride to get here. Krista had to touch the back of her head to make sure it wasn't bleeding again. (it wasn't) But not Davis. While everyone was dazed and confused like a flock of sheep, Davis was the lion looking for his prey.

“Um, Davis?” Bliss inquired. “What's with the carry look.”

Davis opened his hands and placed them on the podium before him. “You little shit.” He said in a mocking tone. “You stupid little shit...”

Bliss continued to eye Davis, unsure of who he was talking to. “Excuse me?”

Davis stood upright. “I'm not even going to question your motive. I don't really give a shit what you'd want a fuckin' phone call for.” He scoffed and smiled. “Hell, freedom is a good enough reason to get out of here right? All you have to do is kill someone. But why Mondatta?” Davis smile quickly turned into a sneer. “Why kill someone who had faith in you? In everyone? I'll tell you who you should have killed...” Davis slammed his hands down on the podium so hard, everyone could feel the vibration. “You should have killed me! I'm the reason everyone is here! Everyone who dies here is a direct result of something I did. And even if you don't care about justice, you know what my talent is, right?” Davis laughed like a hyaena. His head tipped further to the side as his deranged laugh carried on. “That was a mistake, a BIG fucking mistake I'll add at that! Now you're going to have freedom snatched right out from under your nose...” Davis's voice was getting louder. It was becoming more like a yell. “My talent is infinite conquest. My gift is literally winning. And you've made the serious mistake of stepping into an arena with me.” He threw his hands out to his sides. “You probably see this place as just a court room huh? But it is an arena. This round room is a Colosseum to me. It is only a court room in the sense that I will judge and execute you here.” Davis reached into his cart and drew out the golden gladius Felix made the mistake of giving him several days ago. “It's just you and me now!”






TRIAL IS IN SESSION
ALL RISE







Monokuma cleared his throat. "Alright, let's... go over the basics one more time. If the blackened is exposed during the trial, they alone be punished. But if they aren't exposed, everyone besides the blackened will be punished." The bear laughed devilishly. "So without further ado..." Before the bear could say another word, Davis pulled a lever at his station. "Excuse me, what are you doing."

"I just voted for the blackened." Davis was still holding the gladius in one hand. "That's how this game works right? If everyone votes for the blackened."

"Y-yea but..." Monokuma looked a little worried. "Don't you at least want to hear what everyone found first? Maybe you missed an important detail."

"You've been underestimating my talent since Shona died. Maybe now you'll start taking me more seriously."

"You're just fishing for hints!" Monokuma folded his arms and looked away. "And that's cheating! Also, I'm going to disable everyone else's levers until you've all come to an agreement."

Bliss was the one to talk to Davis again. "Do you really know who did it?"

"Of course." Davis spun his sword in his hand. "Without a shadow of doubt."

"Well, who do you think did it?"

Davis didn't answer right away. He just looked around the room at everyone. "Well, there's a lot of evidence that implicates Krista, isn't there?"

Bliss folded her arms. "Really? You think Krista did it?"

"I'm just saying, she was the only one present at the crime scene." Davis grinned to himself. "Surely I'm not the only one who sees the evidence."
The court post will be going up momentarily, as will the last few clues. I just wanted to make a few things clear.

-Post length is going to be a lot shorter. I'm going to treat the court of carnage as an "open collab." that is to say that your posts can be as short as snippets that you'd typically write during collaborations. Maybe they will be five-hundred words, maybe they will be fifty. I would like to avoid speed posting where we can, as well as inner monologues. Anyone can be the killer, and that illusion is ruined if everyone writes every little thing that's going on in their characters head.

-To assist those that don't have multiple characters, Aleecia, Isaiah, and Calvin are free to use as you desire. Maybe you need someone to react a certain way for a joke, or just need a character to bounce some dialog off of to get to the point. I would prefer it if you made them act as in character as you can manage, but I will not be policing their use much.

-We're here to have fun. Your characters can be as helpful or harmful to the case as you'd like. I encourage both.

-Discussing the hints the clues and such in OOC or the discord is acceptable, so long as it all makes sense IC. No meta-gaming and all that nonsense. I'm sure this doesn't even have to be said.

-I'm willing to change how things are run. If you have any ideas. speak up.

Good? Good. Now let's see if we can figure out who killed Mondatta.
@Crimson Raven No no no wrong wrong wrong!

You need glasses and fantastic hair.

@Crimson Raven I think your sanctus guy would make a good inquisitor, but if you have other ideas, I'm sure they will be just as good.

It's not like I wanted a bishi buddy or anything you i-i-i-idiot!
@Crimson Raven Wanna beat up good guys together?
...though only through writing descriptions- art coloring/tampering is bad, people!!!


This is not the first time I've seen a comment like this, But I still don't understand it. I know some artists would frown upon someone taking their work and editing it. But those same artists are usually rather adamant about having their work posted anywhere by someone that isn't them. I'm genuinely curious where the extra harm comes from.
Updated the E-handbook.

Only two or three clues remain. The court of carnage will begin shortly.
In Mahz's Dev Journal 9 yrs ago Forum: News
I think regardless of how many times someone changes their user name, their ORIGINAL user name should always be on their profile. So if I had my name changed to "Junko Despair" and then "Mayjor Stryker" and then "Magic And Mayhem," My profile would still show my original username, Broken Promise.
Regina typically couldn't read minds very clearly when she was so far away from them. But Umeko was practically broadcasting her thoughts for Regina to find. The message made her wrinkle her nose in disgust.

“Seems Umeko wants us to join the melee.”

Elroy stood up and turned towards the battle. The tower shield on his back almost made him look like a giant turtle. Albeit a skinny one. “She called you darling again, didn't she? You only make that face when someone calls you darling.”

“She also said you'd enjoy the chaos.”

“Well clearly she doesn't know me very well.” Elroy said with a chuckle. “I'm enjoying the battle EMMENSELY right now. I don't volunteer for fights I didn't start.”

“I'm going to create a shadow veil so that they can escape.” Regina stood up and folded the handle and tripod in on her sniper staff. It now looked like a staff with a scope on it. “Then we'll take a closer look at all the twins in the area. There's quite a few of them. Maybe they can answer some of our questions.”

“The ghost ones, I wanna know if they're really gay or just putting on a show.” Elroy looked away from the fight and at Regina. “Do you think you could read their minds for me and figure it out?”

Regina groaned. “Siblings hug each other all the time.”

“We never do!”

The succubus's attention was snatched away by Caroline's mental transformation. She could sense a great shift in the vampire's mind. It was lit up with bestial urges. Regina looked down the scope once more and could see Caroline looking directly back at her. “We've been spotted.”

“Really?” Elroy laughed. “I mean, I'm sure everyone knows we're here, but we've never been spotted before.” He looked out over the balcony again. “They can't possibly see us, I mean, we're cloaked in shadows right now.”

“I can't tell you why, but she sees us.” Regina kept looking through the scope. “Maybe it's smell, keen hearing, I don't know, but we've been spotted. Get ready to escape.”

“Escape from wha-” But then Elroy saw Caroline blasting through the air towards them. He watched with some amusement as she approached his sister. But Regina was able to turn incorporeal just long enough for Caroline to pass through her and impale her spear in the side of the building. Spider line cracks covered the wall as soon as she made impact.

“That.” Was all Regina said, phasing back into the physical plane. The succubus folded her staff in half and holstered it across her back. She was less scared than annoyed. There was still way too much of this magical girl business that Regina didn't understand.

Elroy however was not too keen on running away. Metal was his second magical specialization, and he could manipulate its shape with his mind. The incubus immediately took the rebar from the concrete foundation and beckoned it to curl around the vampire. It almost looked like Caroline was in the belly of some undead giant, with its ribs closing around her shape.

“Your welcome Regina. Now touch this rascal and-” Again, Caroline interrupted. This time by splitting apart her restraints with a single swing of her spear. The metal fragments likely would have pierced Elroy's body had he not caught them with his magic. The fragmented rebar floated around his body, gently spinning in place.
“You know up close, you're kinda cute.” Before the vampire could land her next attack on Elroy, Regina took hold of his shirt collar and pulled him out of the way. She then dove into a shadow on the floor with him. The twins came out on a balcony below and over from their previous vantage point. “I'm pretty sure she was about to give me her phone number.” Elroy commented.

“If you ran your legs like you ran your mouth, we'd have escaped already.”

“You think we can outrun her?” Elroy reached behind his back and drew his tower shield. He held it in front of himself with his gauntlet covered hands. “You clearly don't know my fan base very well.” The chains running across the shield unwound themselves and spread out like a web. All eyes were on the upper balcony, waiting to see what the vampire would do.
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