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3 yrs ago
Current Goddamn commies... They ruined communism!
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3 yrs ago
Fun fact: up close, all burning candles smell of singed nose hair.
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3 yrs ago
Just say no to the Corona virus, it cant legally enter your body without consent.
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3 yrs ago
The problem with common sense is that its not all that common.
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3 yrs ago
I once played Hell March to a cow, now its Moscow.
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GET OUT OF MY PROFILE! I'VE GOT A GUN AND I'M NOT AFRAID TO SHOOT MYSELF!

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@ShwiggityShwahShe's gonna get stuck in all the doorways!

@IgaFlanQuestion though! Is this going to be an open world RP, or are you planning on running us through a structured story?
@Gelatinous CubeI hadnt actually! But I see he made the soundtracks to Bombshell and Dusk. I'll check him out.


God I miss these 90's soundtracks, they were the absolute best.
I'm keeping myself subscribed for that very reason 👍
So, bad news... Turns out my free time is going to be very limited the next few weeks. So I'm sadly going to have to dip out of this for now. I'd rather not turn into the lynchpin that grinds the RP to a screeching halt, simply because I cant get a post in.

@datadogieMeaning the AI slot is open again!
Still pining for that AI role!

How exactly would I even write up a sheet for that though?
Gotta admit, I like the look of this! If possible, I'd like to reserve the AI spot! I'm gonna love every single one of you to death! c:

The setting reminds me a lot of Space Station 13, which if you're familiar with, you're a weird, weird person.
I've been craving some mecha action as of late... Are we aiming more towards real mecha (think Battletech), or anime mecha (Gundam)?
So I'm gonna sound like a bit of an asshole here... But you realize Terra is the Latin word for Earth, right? Calling an inter-stellar species Terrans makes no sense. It would be the humans that should be called Terrans.

I also had difficulties following the outlined plot, since you bombard us with names in the first few sentences without really setting up who or what they are. Might be a good idea to make a small section before the plot outlining who the factions are and what their goals are. Unless this is base on a franchise or something and I just missed that, in which case it probably makes sense to the fans.

And one final note, coming from a graphic designer, your signature text could really use some contrasting outline. Yellow on a white background isnt the easiest on the eyes.

No personal offense meant of course, just some constructive criticism!
How powerful are we allowed to make our characters? Are we all supposed to play rookies, or are we allowed to make veterans or perhaps even famous characters?
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