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Current I do not "brainrot". I brainferment so my brain will become even smoother and even more potent than before in its smoothness.
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I live. I die. I live again!
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I was gone for a lot longer than I thought >.>"
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Sorry for my absence! A Volunteering position suddenly turned into a Volunteer Leadership position I was not expecting at all so things have been hectic.
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Look at you posers, having to bang dragons or sell your soul for magic when you could just play a lute for some. Anyways, here's Wonderwall. - Bards
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Any suggestions on policy making, writing, and the whatever that related to nrp are much appreciated.

When it comes to writing posts for an NRP, the most common is to have it take the PoV of one or more characters. Typically this is the head of state, getting information and letters from other branches of government. Sometimes depending on the scale of the NRP you might have additional characters filling in for other departments of governments. Like an Economic Minister trying to improve infrastructure or a War Minister worried about the nation's ability to wage war or a Diplomat conducting relations with someone else. Sometimes it might just be a random civilian or soldier if you want to get a feel for the day-to-day, on the ground look at what the big policies are doing to people.

A slightly less common way is to have it be like an After Action Report or history textbook/wiki article where the focus is on the country/state and the names of people isn't as important. This way you can write in broad strokes without worrying about character details of individuals.

"King John Smith received a letter from the notUnited States and decided to support President Bob in the war."
VS
"The Kingdom of notGreat Britain watched the developing war, finally declaring support for the notUnited States in 19XX."

That's probably a pretty terrible example but it gets the vibe across.

how do I make the policies and the subsequent situation to not be an outright nationalist's wetdream?


It comes with exprience and maturation. Just like how people's first OC characters are often overly edgy, mary sues or otherwise of questionable quality when looked back on, people's first OC nations can come off as overly militaristic, some how utopian and otherwise societally implausible; some how having all the resources it needs, a jingoistic and militarized population to make 1930's Germany blush, the world's most advanced military, and a free and uncensored press with no government corruption. I will be the first to admit my early nations in NRPs were basically like this with a heavy coating of weeaboism (I made a lot of notJapans.)

As to how to make policy and navigate situations, realize that no matter what setting, governments always have internal competing interests and that compromise is a common occurrence. A king might want to go to war while his vassals don't. A president or faction might have ties to big business but the population itself is going through a socialist/communist wave. A military command might think that the country is in danger by some external power and demand military build up while the civilian government insists on diplomatic channels and civil spending. This idea of unilateral support for a government's action never really happens with 100% of the pop agreeing to it unless it is some kind of absolute autocracy or dictatorship where this kind of internal politicking about what do can be more easily side stepped with "obey or get shot".

Also realize that even if you are playing this hyper nationalist country, you're ultimately in an RP. Don't stake your personal image and beliefs, this love child of a country you may or may not wish actually existed, on its success in an online post by post roleplay. Its a really small and pretty stupid hill to die on. When you RP you should be working together with the other players to make something fun and interesting; its a collaborative effort. You can play the all consuming notZerg hivemind swarm but how much you'd actually be able to conquer is still up to the GM and other players. Nobody likes getting rolfstomped without recourse so talk to people, discuss plans, collab on posts. We have the luxury of being able to know when and what exactly happens unlike in irl history so use it.
@Jeddaven Feel like Ronto would hate the HFU more the other way around; the HFU is pretty much an embodiment of the American ultra-nationalism they despise taken to a ridiculous and religious level but the HFU doesn't really have all that much interest in Canada. They'd see it as "part of Old America" but otherwise don't really have any ideological claims on it and would rather focus on going west if they ever got that big, taking control of the lower 48 first.

Relations with the Enclave are still up in the air but in a way they see the Enclave as wayward Americanists who became too secular and abandoned the Founders looking at them with a mix of pity and religious contempt.

@TheEvanCat Oh yeah, the Ghouls are not going to like the HFU. The HFU isn't any more anti-mutant than the average wasteland state by nature or intrinsically anti-mutant, their expulsion was purely religious. I'd also like to believe that at least one preacher has wandered up to New York at some point or some merchants have crossed paths in port.

It'd honestly be kind of funny to see a super mutant in a powered wig and oversized laser musket with a roll of the constitution going around asking random New Yorkers if they've heard of the good word of the Founders and of Old America.
@TheEvanCat Want to have any sort of lore overlap with the retcon now that Philly isn't a blank spot on the map? I'd definitely imagine they'd hear about this new religious wave over taking the area early on and especially once they got settled in.


Keystone Union of Philadelphia
Independence Hall




The three cracked bronze bells of the Constitutional Temples of the Founders, each modeled after the holy Liberty Bell with its own famous crack, called Philadelphians to morning prayer. As the sun began to rise above the horizon, the faithful already waiting outside the holiest temple in the Union made their way up the stairs and into its great chamber. President Franklin Abrams could hear the bells from his office in Independence Hall, rebuilt to imitate the great Oval Office of the White House in the holy city of Washington DC. He had been up early that morning, when the sun barely cracked the dawn, busy laboring over his desk about the request for additional funding the Continental Navy wished for.

In the Union's politics, only the Judges and the Holy Courts held more sway than the Army and Navy. As the son of a Deitsch Amish princess and a Philadelphia Shipmaster, it was no secret he was pro-Navy. The Army's "Western Frontier" plan was more than likely to bring war and devastation to the Deitsch lands, some of which the Union only barely held on because of the half-Deitschman Preisdent. Yet Abrams still couldn't move to brazenly against the Army's interests as he had been elected on a promise of compromise between the Army and Navy and was still barely half way through with his decade-long term.

The admiralty where hoping to ply his favor with sweet talk and seafood dinners, but Abrams hadn't become President by being easily swayed with honeyed words and fish. He had approved the yearly budget for both the Army and Navy, giving both an equal amounts. But it had become clear that the money the government was spending on the Army was giving more dividends than the Navy. The Army's base at the Kinoprus (King of Prussia) Mall continued to grow as traders and settlers were attracted to the military base, growing it into a civilian community all of its own. The worry in the Synod Senate by the pro-Navy Senators was that soon the Army would have its own city-state within the Union that the civil administration had no authority to govern as it would still technically be a military base.

The Navy for their part continued to lag behind with the development of their own attempt to match the Kinoprus Mall by developing the Battleship New Jersey into a strategic center from which defense against Jerseyite raiders could be coordinated from. But the act of moving it from one side of the river to the other had already gone over budget originally during the previous presidency, and that was before mirelurks were discovered in parts of the hull. The projects to repair the artillery guns back into a usable state (the reason the entire project was approved in the first place) had already been scaled back all three turrets down to just one. And it was still overbudget. Funds originally set aside for the restoration of the Walt Whitman Bridge across the Delaware River (another one of Abram's campaign promises) had to be funneled into the Navy's Battleship New Jersey plan. The only saving grace was that at least people where still willing to settle nearby, ignoring the fact that most of buildings that were popping up where just bars and brothels for the workers and sailors stationed there that seemed to be stuck in a sluggish hell.

President Abram held the Navy's letter in his hand, sighing and rubbing his forehead, "Founder Franklin, Founder Roosevelt, give me the wisdom and strength for this bullshit." The Navy was wanting more caps for... everything. More sailors, more boats, expanding the officer corps, building the battleship, paying for wages, paying for bounties for the mercenaries they contract to keep the battleship free of mirelurks, expand the young marine corps so they don't need to use mercenaries anymore. By Washington, this would all be so much easier if the Army would just step in and take care of port security but no, they had to "protect the breadbasket of the Union". Which while fair, there hadn't been any major raider incursion in well over a year. The small gangs and tribes that occasionally wandered in front of their laser muskets hardly warranted the equal budget they shared with the Navy, in Abram's mind at least.

He stood up and looked out the window. He could see the whole of Broad Street from his office, all of the carts and carriages going through. He let his mind wander, going from sight to sight. Men and women dressed in as close to 18th century fashion as they could with what the wasteland provided, typically amounting to nothing more than ruffled sleeves or collars for men and an additional piece of short cloth around the waist meant to imply a dress for women. If nothing else, it was proof that Philadelphia itself was safe, now that there was no longer a raider around every corner that the guards and Army had to look for in every alley and abandoned building.

Suddenly, a light bulb went off in the President's head. A spark of inspiration, no doubt from Founder Franklin himself!

"There were a great number of raiders and bandits, the patrols had to be increased to find them all." President Abrams paced in his office, thinking out loud, "The rivers and the bay still have as many dangers and pirates, just that only the seafolk see them on a daily basis. If the Navy finds more sea-brigands on their patrols, then that would be a result they could show to the Senate. And then I could allocate additional caps to 'expand' their patrol efforts. They would be able to use it for new ships or at least funding for the battleship."

Abrams rushed to his desk and began drafting a letter with his ink pen. The Navy was already hesitant about diverting any more of its precious manpower away from the Battleship, but by invoking the name of Founder Roosevelt, a Master of Ships in Old America, and by throwing around some of his own political sway, Franklin Abrams was confident that he could get the admiralty to sign off on additional patrols even if it meant pausing repair efforts on the New Jersey and weathering the ridicule from the Army. The President wrote furiously as the great bells rang to signal the end of morning prayer. He would be staking a good deal of political power on this order, but it was a safe bet. If the Navy caught or killed more pirates then it was proof that they could also get actual results while also looking better than the random bandit the Army sometimes caught. If the ships were destroyed then that was proof of the danger that the pirates and sea raiders poised to the Union's waterways, which Abrams would also be able to sell to the Senate as a need to give additional funding to the Navy.

"And so as the tide turns, I implore you to deliver upon the sea additional sentinel craft in which to persecute the malevolence-upon-waters that claw their savage talons upon our fair peoples. Yours truly, President F. Abrams." And with that, the letter was signed and with the ring of a bell, an aide came with a presidential raven, a black bird with a golden tassel around its neck. It would be the one to deliver the message to the admiralty at the Naval Yards, and be the one that might be the one to turn the balance towards the Navy for once.
Hey man, it's not Nation RP without aggressive gatekeeping and our hazing rituals! It's just tradition!


tfw NRPs are just really, really lame fraternities for nerds who play too much civ and replace copious amounts of booze for copious amounts of time and money spent on paradox games
I'm sure The Economist is going to be plenty weirded out by a cult in Philly like a few days away.


Especially given how they literally didn't know up until this point.

Although in its defense, it probably never had to factor in "religious movements and spiritual awakenings" into stock market calculations.


@FalloutJack I'd imagine the interaction would go something like this:

Philly: "Hey its cool to see another Americanists so far out here."
Enclave: "Yeah, I see that you too also appreciate pre-war America."
P: "Old America was a land built by the Founders and great Presidents, we seek to rebuilt the old dominion to its former glory!"
E: "That's a funny way of saying it, but yeah, we're also seeking the restoration of America. Not sure who the Founders are though."
P: "The holy Founders? Surely you know them. The heavenly Founding Fathers?"
E: "..."
P: "Okay, what about Lady Liberty, their emissary to Earth?"
E: "You mean the statue?"
P: "Do you at least know the gospel of the Founders and the words of the Declaration and Constitution?"
E: "Pretty sure we have both of those documents on holotape but we don't use them as... gospel?"
P: "..."
E: "..."
P: "Guess you traded piety for power armor then."
E: "Who tf are you people?"
Here be my NS. This honestly might be the fastest I've ever completed one


@FalloutJack To the people I'm writing up, the Enclave just look like people who got too enamored with power armor and "forgot" what America is
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