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Mobile Suit Gundam: LIFELINE

@Crusader LordYeah, I think I remember you! Wow, talk about a small world! :D

Mobile Suit Gundam: LIFELINE

@Crusader Lord Well I've roleplayed for years on Fanfiction.net under more or less the same name. Maybe you know me from there?

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@Crusader LordIts been an idea that I've been kicking around for a few years actually. I just never really got the chance to develop it properly or try it out until now. Glad you think its so good :)

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@DostHouBernard is accepted.

@veenknight343Your character sheet is full if misspellings. You get your own character name wrong, its Ayami not Ayame. Some proof reading wouldn't kill you.

Tekada's overall character is fine, a man driven to sorrow by the cruelties he experienced in his life and turned to Toland's writings as a means of dealing with everything.

However I feel how his son died is a bit nonsensical. Venusian habitats aren't located in space, they're located in Venus's upper atmosphere. So they're still under gravity, they're just above the thick corrosive clouds. If he fell off the colony or through a breach in the habitat, he would have likely just dropped miles to the surface below and died. Having the Martians shoot him thinking he was debris is a bit hard to swallow as well, the Martians are callous but not stupid or needlessly spiteful.

You need to rework how his son died into something that makes more sense.

Mobile Suit Gundam: LIFELINE

@Frater JeremiahThe Governor is accepted! Post him in the character section.

And with that we can finally begin the roleplay!

Everyone is free to post in the RP section now :)

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@Caduceus The Tommy Sniper Type and Modified Scroop class are accepted! So is the SPEC-T3r, which I have to say I like a lot. It makes sense an intelligence agency use mobile workers to better blend in with rebellious and criminal elements. I never expected anyone from Zern to apply a mobile worker variant. Very nice!

@Golden Spiral I accidentally sent my feedback to you via PM, so you can look over it there. Once you make the changes to the aesthetics of the Companion then you're free to post it up :)

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@Sakaki ChizuruLooks great! Just a note though, Venusian Habitats don't really have 'parks' in the traditional sense. Empty lots or vacant courtyards between buildings would be more appropriate.

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@DostHouI'm so happy to hear! I suggest you hop on the Discord to brainstorm ideas and get some nice interwoven character backstories going on~

discord.gg/ZbmnMb

@GreenGoatYep! We're just about started, but you have time to throw your hat into things if you wish to join.

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@KaiserElectricJohanna and BUN-e are accepted!

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@YukitamasGyfnewid-00 and Gaia Dyrte are accepted!