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An Age of Empires [Low Fantasy - Advanced]

@Sini
Well first off, looking back two pages someone requested a roll and I don't think you replied. Maybe it's not too late.

And secondly I think just a few more people would be enough. There are about 8 of us, so if half of us can find just one other person I'd think that we'd be good for sure. I don't know too many people on RPGuild, but I'll go mention this thread to those in the other RP that I'm in.

An Age of Empires [Low Fantasy - Advanced]

Should I try to explain the various levels of nobility and their responsibilities in Terus? If anybody thinks that it would be interesting I suppose I will, but I'm getting to the point where my sections are beginning to overlap and I'm not sure if I would put this information under government, economy, or even institutions.

An Age of Empires [Low Fantasy - Advanced]

We are given two and we can then choose two.

An Age of Empires [Low Fantasy - Advanced]

Well, if your nation's stated interest is to expand and you have a pretty powerful military to do so, can you really blame people for not wanting to put themselves in position to be quickly conquered?

In any case, through plotting, secret deals, and alliances I think the weaker nations like my own have plenty of ways to stat afloat, and maybe even rise higher.

Dungeon Keepers (This one's done. Go to The Horde of Evil instead)

Well we've earlier said that our Keepers can be native to Cyprus. The humans probably wouldn't understand the Keepers terribly well but then again they don't have to; having a bunch of entities suddenly appear and pillage the land would probably scare people.

As in for how the timelines seem to be off a bit with his sheet mentioning Keepers yet all our characters still relatively unknown, I for one don't see it as a big issue. Weeks have passed by for Moggotheddon with him basically just sleeping all underground and occasionally waking up to throw a tantrum. Meanwhile Emily and Naota have probably only had a few days pass by.

I think our timelines will come together eventually, but until this progresses a bit and we start making contact it shouldn't be too much of a problem if some of us have more time pass by.

Dungeon Keepers (This one's done. Go to The Horde of Evil instead)

@Nthitho12

Your sheet looks good!

Don't get me wrong; I like the creativity with conveying information via the use of diary entries, but if you could condense that into a single paragraph to put into the Compendium I'd appreciate it. It would make BBeast's job that much easier and keep the information less spaced out.

An Age of Empires [Low Fantasy - Advanced]

Oh boy. Maybe I should edit my army to be even bigger while I have the chance.

...just kidding. The Azracs will be more than happy to cower behind the massive mountains between them and everyone else.

An Age of Empires [Low Fantasy - Advanced]

What do you guys think of my empire? I think it looks pretty good for what i can tell. This is my first fully functioning nation rp so i don't exactly know.

@Song Book

I personally think you have a pretty solid start right now. Some interesting ideas about what industries you want and so on. You don't have that many details and sections aren't done though, so I can't really give my opinion on whether I like it as a whole.

An Age of Empires [Low Fantasy - Advanced]

Thanks Terminal, I'll actually go and take a look at your new map. Yeah, it was actually the talk about your Sunken City was that prompted me to make a detailed regional map like I did. I just figured it'd be nice for others to know where all the forts I mention are located and such, and that having a detailed map would make my land all the more real in the Tolkien way.

An Age of Empires [Low Fantasy - Advanced]

Shame about only EU3 working. From what I hear Victoria has a ridicululously complicated and difficult economy system, though.