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4 yrs ago
Current Been 5 years since I posted a status!
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9 yrs ago
It's a Chuck Palahniuk quotes kinda night.
9 yrs ago
... Something new
11 yrs ago
I'm so Fuckin' broken...

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@KoL

Thanks for the advice, I just didn't want it to sound too OP.
I'll find some alternate weaknesses instead :)
Hopefully have a WIP up soon for further critique.
So I just finished watching 'Altered Carbon' and it's got me inspired to make a character with the same concept.

His life and soul have been digitalised and can be put into different synthetic bodies or mechs. Happens automatically when he dies but he might not get all his latest memories depending on his latest upload.

My character is different because his soul/spirit is active like a ghost in these mechanical bodies. They are still stupidly expensive to replace, death is always painful and reawakening can take some time depending on where the next available body is.

This is my concept along with some early demonic intervention during his normal human years that set him on a very vengeful, demon hating path.

Sound ok?

Interested
@Perpenheimer

Still around but don't have discord

So so interested in this!
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Honestly, if it's a strictly physical buff I'm sure you'll be fine. But consider a few weaknesses. Like a weakness to extreme heat, or cold. Something that can cause your body symbiote to retreat. Also, consider explaining how the symbiote works a bit more. At the moment your characters backstory and what not is very bare bones.


I'm liking the idea of extreme cold hindering it as it will probably exist primarily in a liquid state (it's natural form) but I'm not going to put too much more effort into it as he's getting a lot of criticism, especially for a sandbox.
We could of had a really fun rivalry too. I could set of your arc and you could answer a lot of questions my character had. I was just really looking forward to the scenes were he was expected to do something super hero-ish like kicking open a door or leaping from roof but without pressure, danger or urgency he performs hopelessly.
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