Demon Shinobi

Fairy Tail: Wings & Tails (Rebooted)

@Leslie HallWell it was pretty in depth. I think you just need to add a few key specifications. You know? But overall I got the gist of most of it. But I am still a bit confused. So take your time. There is no rush.

High schol of the devil: now its personal

I think I might wait for Suku before I post again... I can't think of anything to say or do right now because well.. Idk what I OR Shinichi would say or do right now. Anything I would say might upset the lord. Who, sorry for my ignorance, Is kinda being a dick about fixing the old place up. Even if you have your own problems, it should be putting the well being of your family first and looking toward and making memories for the future before anything else. Or find some place better and more proper to train and essentially live for like a week or so. Sorry, I was feeling a bit irritable when I wrote this.

Fairy Tail: Wings & Tails (Rebooted)

So I've been thinking a lot about Marcus, particularly his Rift Magic. At the time when I made him, his Rift Magic I thought it was a pretty neat little concept even though I stole it from a game. Whenever I look at it now though I can't help but feel how little effort I actually put into explaining it or how the magic isn't as versatile as I imagined it to be.

So I spent some time reworking the explanation of Rift Magic and redesigning a few of Marcus' spells and adding new ones that give him more offensive options even when he is not inside the rift, but still reward him for fighting on his own turf so to speak. So I thought I'd add them here and see what the GM's think about the new spells and whether or not I can go with them.

Reworked Rift Magic

Rift Magic
Sometimes referred to as Dimensional Magic, Rift Magic is a rare but not lost form of Magic that allows the wielder complete control over their own personal pocket dimension. Mages who utilize Rift Magic are able to freely enter and exist in their own dimension, leaving their current plane of existence and becoming impervious to attacks on the outside but cannot interfere with anything happening outside of the rift.

The rift is not a never ending space and is a dimension that is defined by physical boundaries. Think of the rift space that the user has control over as a large sphere with the Rift Mage at the center of it. The size and shape of the rift can be altered at the user’s whim to various effects. When outside of the rift, the physical boundaries of the rift have no effect on you. Inside, however, the boundaries are impassable. Additionally, the rift can be weaponized to be used offensively even if the user isn’t inside the rift, although such spells are only a fraction of their power whilst used outside of the rift.

Rift Magic Spells

Dimensional Awareness Passive ability that grants the user complete knowledge of whatever is happening inside of the rift. This is only to the extent of sensory awareness.
Riftwalk The user enters the rift for a moderate duration. The user moves significantly faster whilst inside the rift.
Banish Banishes a target to the rift. Can only be used when the caster is inside the rift themselves and has to be standing within arm’s reach of their target. Banished targets only remain inside the rift for a short duration and Marcus can banish up to 3 people overall.
Banished Prison The user emits a small orb of Rift Magic that travels at a moderate speed and expands to swallow a single person and place them inside the rift. The prison’s boundaries are impassable once inside, successfully trapping someone inside the rift for a longer period of time than Banish. If Banished Prison is cast within the rift, the velocity of the spell is vastly increased. This spell is one of the few instances where the user is able to place someone in the rift without being in it themselves.
Rift Extraction Violently rips all Banished targets from the rift, damaging them and causing an explosion of Rift Magic upon their exit.
Rift Polarity The user is able to alter the dimensional boundaries of the rift in one direction momentarily, pushing or pulling all banished targets in any direction they desire for a brief moment.
Dimensional Blade Shaping the physical boundaries of the rift, the user is able to create an ornately crafted blade of rift magic that they can fire at their target to impale them. When cast within the rift, Dimension Blade can be cast multiple times in quick succession from any angle within the rift.
Dimensional Skewer Creates thin tendrils made from the physical boundaries of the rift, appearing from underneath the caster. These tendrils have a short range but can pierce and slash anything that comes near the caster. The tendrils can be shattered by a strong enough attack. When cast from within the rift plane, Dimensional Skewer can be cast from any surface on the Rift Plane and have significantly increased range and durability.
Dimensional Hammer Creates a large geometric shape from the physical boundaries of the rift with the intent of using it to smash something. The construct shatters after one attack. Inside the rift, Dimensional Hammer is much sturdier and is capable of remaining intact even after several attacks with it.
Invisible Floor The user brings part of the rift plane into their current plane of existence, creating a solid floor for allies to stand on. Can be used to break falls but the floor isn’t quite as sturdy as solid ground and is capable of shattering.
Dimensional Force By altering the size of the rift, the user shrinks the space that encompasses the rift to create a small orb of condensed rift energy around them. Bringing this orb into the user’s current plane creates a temporary barrier around the caster and pushes everything away from them. When cast inside the rift, Dimensional Force pulls all banished targets inside the rift towards the caster, placing them in melee range as the physical boundaries of the rift are decreased. This spell is great for separating targets from their allies or deflecting an attack. Be wary of powerful attacks, as the physical boundaries of the rift are much weaker when brought into another plane of existence and are capable of crumbling: rendering the rift unusable for a brief period of time so it may repair itself.
Worm Hole The user reshapes the rift plane, tightening it and creating a harmless worm hole in which anyone can use for quick travel. Once they enter the event horizon, they travel through the rift instantaneously and appear out at the desired location. This spell can be used to quickly travel through an obstacle or sneak by enemies undetected. The distance travelled by the Worm Hole is significant, but not absurd. As a rule of thumb, it can’t be any longer than the radius of the Rift Plane (about 15 meters at best).
Secret Art of the Rift: Cataclysm One of the powerful Rift Magic’s created by Henryk the Magnificent: Master of the Rift. Cataclysm creates multiple tears in the boundaries of the Rift Plane, causing the rift to lose its form and become raw dimensional energy. A large dome of this energy surrounds the caster, placing any who are near them inside the rift plane temporarily. The boundaries of the rift swirl around uncontrollably, the rift energy desperately trying to reform its shape. This creates razor sharps strands of rift energy that completely surround the dome, eviscerating anything that comes into contact with it. After a few moments, the rift stabilizes and the dome collapses upon itself, violently pushing everyone inside the rift out of it. This is a great defensive spell but comes at the price of a great deal of Magic Power as well as overworking the physical boundaries of the rift. After the spell is over, the Rift Space is significantly smaller than usual and will take a few days to retain its original shape and size.

So far I'm not really liking Dimensional Force as much as I did when I wrote it a day or two ago. It's a neat little defense spell, but I can't help but think why a character who has the ability to phase out of existence to avoid attacks needs a shield spell. Cataclysm is different because that's more for protecting multiple people at once. I liked the aspect of it that pulls whoever is inside the Rift towards Marcus when he uses it, but I feel like the same result could be achieved with Rift Polarity. Idk though.

Any opinions are appreciated because I really just haven't been feeling Marcus' magic. It just feels very lackluster, especially for a B Rank character.

@Leslie Hall

Okay so hi. I'm Demon Shinobi. One of the co-gms. Maybe not labeled here, but I help with decision making. Anyway... I kind of... Don't understand the rift magic too much. One thing I wanna ask it, does Marcus have any upper limits? How big is the rift? Will they still be seen? Can the pocket dimension be seen?

It it like Marcus creates a field around himself and controls everything in that area? If so, like I asked above, how big is it? You can answer here or in PM. Sorry it's taken so long for anyone to comment, I'm partially to blame along with select others. but I can't help make a decision or comment much on it, because I personally read it over and got a little confuzzled. I can be an idiot sometimes. Which is bad for a college student, but whatever. Good talkin to ya regardless though ^.^

Fairy Tail: Wings & Tails (Rebooted)

Belial Roseblood

@Renny@Leslie Hall@chukklehed

Belial sighed, turning his head to look at Vivian before looking back down. She'd gotten a drink. Probably pilfered from another guild member. He couldn't help, but release a small chuckle before lifting his head as he heard somebody take a seat between him and Viv and then speak. "Hm?" He turned to look at the woman, giving her his full attention since he had nothing else to do. In response to the request he smiled. It wasn't training, but it was better than the nothing he was currently doing.

The young boy opened his mouth to agree to helping her when he felt a hand on his head followed by Isshum's all too familiar voice. "Haha I'm sure you'll get there big bro." He spoke cheerfully as he turned around on the bar stool to face Ish. "But um... Taka isn't here, far as I can tell. So you can settle for more fire from me... Oooooooor some regular food." With that he turned again. "Oh and you shouldn't ignore people Ish." He laughed as he smiled at the woman. "And I don't mind helping you. Although I'm not so sure about the other two here with us." He said with a small laugh implying laziness on Vivian and Isshum's parts. "So, what do ya need exactly?" He finally asked calmly, his worry and annoyance from before far from his mind.

KHR! | The Enduring Flame

Far from being my best post. But! A post is better than no activity. Lets try to get up and moving again everyone :)

KHR! | The Enduring Flame

Just as Shi had predicted Asuka would burst through the door she appeared, hearing her name. "Well~ Seems you decided to aid me in making an entrance." She cooed playfully as she took a small bow. "Thank you very much." She smiled as she before giggling at the sight of Yuki trying to feed Luca. It was so cute. Especially given what they'd learned of her background.

Once she scanned the area, making sure she remembered each person who'd showed up, she took a position beside Hideaki before affectionately elbowing him in the side."Where's my key, Mr. Stalker?" She asked in a whisper a bit annoyed after finding that one of her keys was missing from he ring. Of course, she wouldn't be so loud as to make him out to look like a creep before their possible new comrades. Not until more was known about everyone. But she did want her property back.

KHR! | The Enduring Flame

Yeah to be fair our characters wouldn't know what positions they were chosen to be candidates for except Luca.

@Sho Minazuki

Mostly. I think Asuka and Hide would because they likely would have asked Fon and I don't think he would have a problem giving an answer on the subject after implying he would answer just about anything.

I'm gonna post after kitsune's next post and have Asuka rush in like "WHAT DID I MISS?!?!?!"

High schol of the devil: now its personal

@PaulHaynek@Drake Baku
Alright both of you back in here! we are going to keep this baby going! now that demon Is back we can run at full speed once more!

@Jangel13

YEAH!
SORRY GUYS! I APOLOGIZED! AND NOW EVEN THOUGH I AM DOING CLASSES AND NOT THAT QUICK I WILL STILL POST!!!!!!!!

Fairy Tail: Wings & Tails (Rebooted)

Belial Roseblood

Belial had been in a bit of a daze after taking Matt's initial counter strike. He glanced at the small crater in the ground and rubbed his head. He'd even been singed a bit by the attack of his guardian. Luckily he brush most of that attack off by shielding himself with his own flames. He'd been about ready to pick himself up but Vivian had helped him up.

"Ugh... Losing in one hit every time is starting to leave a bad taste in my mouth." He grumbled quietly in a huff as he crossed his arms and glanced around. This guild hall was particularly full. Probably because it was in the original home town of the Fairy Tail guild. He kicked at the ground. All too fast everyone had gone on to other things. Isshum had even challenged and gone off to fight Hana. Then there were the people who'd left and those who'd entered. The weird ominous feeling white haired guy. The someone angelic woman and finally another White haired mage. I don't think Ish is gonna feel too happy about not being the only White haired person around here any more. He thought with a slight chuckled before he began to stretch and move around a bit.

The 13-year-old began to hop, punch and kick the air, almost as if testing his mobility. "All good." He confirmed before walking over to the bar. That's when he noticed Revan. "Ooooo Scary." He said as he noticed Revan. "The old guy is up and down from the upstairs." He snickered quietly to himself. He didn't know much about Revan, but he knew enough not to mess with him. Mostly. Right now, he was thinking that he'd remembered something about Vivian saying she'd wanted a drink. Still, even if he wanted to be nice, he probably couldn't get the drink without having to try and be sneaky about it, and as full as it was he would be caught.

He wasn't even exactly sure what he wanted to do. All he knew for sure was that he was feeling kind of down due to his weakness. He thought he'd been improving too! He sighed and sat at the bar. Who could he train with to get stronger that wouldn't likely knock him out in a single hit. There was Vivian. But with her moodiness, especially after hana essentially brushed her off, he couldn't be so sure. Revan was scary, Isshum didn't really hold back, Matt... No... And wow, was that the limit to who he knew? No, he knew others, but there was something about thinking about people that made him forget when he needed to know them and remember when he wasn't trying to think. Gah! This is so annoying! He thought as he let his head drop onto the top of the bar with a small thump followed by somewhat audible groan.

High schol of the devil: now its personal

Shinich had planned to wait for an answer from Moena, but he received a message from Lorenzo. This was something he couldn't really get used to. It was tough. Oh. Right. I'll be there soon my lord. He replied before turning back to Moena. "Seems times up on my little personal training." He said with a smile before turning away and walking back to the club room. It didn't take longer than a few moments as he was right outside. "My lord. Queen." He said calmly as he entered and approached the two. "What do we need to talk about?"