@Jangel13First thing is first. You said you made changes. I don't know if you edited and it didn't save. I don't know if you reposted something. But I'm not seeing the changes you made. So, can you repost, maybe bold the changes? Sorry if I'm being difficult. But for the life of me I'm not noticing any change that stands out.
@SukuYou can move Rin/Elizabeth to the Character tab if you're done with her. Not gonna lie, you might end up a Co-GM. Hmmm Don't have a queen yet, but I'm not sure that would be your character. Regardless, no saying I NEED a queen. Not yet anyway.
@Polaris NorthAlright, a couple of things.
First, his skill set. I believe even as a fast learner, that would likely only apply to basics, and even then, knowing various elements might be a bit much for him right now. I like the dark light, because obviously, its a Fallen Angel thing. I like the ice. It's a bit of a stark contrast in some ways.
Secondly, he is described by unmotivated. Based on his history and his actively seeking revenge, this is a bit of a contradiction.
Overall, just based on his past and his seeking vengeance, he doesn't seem like the type who'd be unmotivated. At least not in the way you described. Regardless, that's more about wording. My point is more so on the elemental magic. Just sticking to ice and the dark light, with his mastery and the weakness he has for using up magic combining them, he probably doesn't need the other elements just for now.
@Rune_AlchemistAlright, on to the fox. So, I like the character, understand just about everything completely. I would accept no problem, however, you did raise the thought of changing her. So, I would probably need to wait for that. However, I can answer some of your questions so you can move forward. I'm going to assume the tails for DxD are power related. Even so, for the RP, It think it's more symbolic. You can gain more tails throughout, whether through training or a character developing moment or whatever. If you want we can plan a few instances that could potentially lead to her being able to utilize another tail. So, get back to me on any changes or whatever, add her tails/how many to the CS and let me know.
@SpannerSo, again, I like the character. It is somewhat interesting to see how he would interact and grow. Would he come to respect the king? But even so, my interest needs to be stomped out and I need to be objective. I think, he's so freaking powerful. Like he could merc an entire rival family. His raw strength without magical aid is up there. I know he's a dragon but there is no way he matured enough to be on such a level. Additionally, he's such a cocky jerk, I don't think he would learn the magic or use anything apart from his inherited dragon power. And even if he did, why would he? He had potential to be a tank with out it. I know this is him nerfed, but he's hardly much worse for wear when he can reach High Class Devil feats w/o his other abilities.
I think you may need to down play his strength a bit. Mid class is even fine. High Class when you're using the upgrade ability of a pawn to enhance the strength. Above High Class, but not quite Ultimate Class devil in outrage mode. I'm all for having a dragon merc, but come on. As he is, save for fighting a god, or a super devil, nothing could stop him. I don't wanna just jump into the huge shit. Sorry if I seem like a douche... Really am. Finally, evil pieces. Even though you are the offspring of a dragon king... I think 4 pawn pieces. One is a Mutation piece, with the potential of the others mutating as well. Thoughts? Do we need to hash things out? Is anything I'm saying outrageous? I'm sorry if it is, but again, he's so freakin powerful. I'm honestly not 100% sure he wouldn't betray us. Dammit Gilgamesh... A dick everywhere.
@TheHangedManPlease don't take this the wrong way.
I'm calling bullshit on the Senjutsu. Yes he can have talent, yes he can probably pick some basic things up. To be as good as you describe, without EVER receiving any formal training... It's too easy. He's already a battle maniac, developing his own style, lived through more shit than a typical 17 year old would. But we gotta be clear. He is still human. I'm sure when he did come into the peerage, and the events leading up to that, he'd probably already be cooler and more willing to listen than the dragon, but still. He's a human. Also, does the sacred gear need to be dragon origin? It that for possible scale mail armor? It's honestly not bad, just a double in power. But the biggest is the senjutsu. Especially when an amateur, someone unskilled or untaught, would begin to be corrupted by the malice and ill will of his/her surroundings. I'm not saying the senjutsu is bad. Not even saying get rid of it. Just saying tone it down. You can learn to use it properly in the story from a teacher if you want. Can be good character development and training. But as it is, it's kind of like Sieg. He's too powerful and too skilled. Gotta be downsized a bit.
Alright, now hopefully I wasn't too much of a dick. I wanted to give each character the time and thought it deserved. I'm going to make a Discord so you can all message me and we don't necessarily need to wait for me to get online and check the guild. Also, app on phone. Sometimes easier. You know.
Additionally... I'm rethinking Tsumiki. Partially because by comparison now he seems pretty weak, not just in some points, but all around. So I might add/edit your king later, of course within reason because my plan is for his primary growth to occur in game. Now questions, statements, proclamations, incantations? Anything you wanna say? Complain about? Discuss? Lemme know.
