Avatar of Digizel

Status

Recent Statuses

2 yrs ago
Current I think I'm Advanced+ level and could do that. But under Adv, I feel compelled to write a certain way and it makes writing feel more like a chore even if it's just in my head. Thus, I prefer Casual
2 yrs ago
Many people equate "Advanced" to "Big, high effort posts with lots of flowery language." It's a habitual thought I struggle to shake as an RPer with 20+ years of writing experience. It's very draining
1 like

Bio

User has no bio, yet

Most Recent Posts

Aaahhh...I'm so sorry for disappearing on you again. But I'm not really sure this can keep my interest. I don't think this'll be going anywhere fast enough for me. So sorry, but I suppose I would not be.

(Besides, with my constant disappearance due to a lack of motivation in posting here, I'm more of a hindrance anyway xD)
@Metal Zeta

Oh yeah, you've definitely got my interest. The main reason I ever got into card games in the first place was because of the awesome card arts and such. I love the monsters more than anything~ And I always loved the games with the 3D monster models the best.

So yeah. I'm all for it. It sounds a bit like Dragon Drive and Bakugan too, which I also rather enjoy.
@TheDookieNutHaha. yeah, I certainly undertand that. xD I wouldn't have ever known either until this semester~

Heheh. Well like I said, really the only reason I bothered making the correction was to show off my knew (albeit limited) knowledge~

Anyway, again, good luck with your search~ =}
Hey there! Unfortunately you don't have anything I'm interested in, but good luck on your search!

I mostly just decide to comment one quick thing. A correction on one of your "hello" messages so I can show off a bit of what I've learned in school this year~ xP

こんにちは is actually translating to "konnichiha." The last character is supposed to be "わ", which is "wa." The reason for the mixup is because when you use "wa" as a participle (such as "kore wa" or "watashi wa",) you use the character for "ha" instead of "wa." For what reason, I dunno. I was surprised when I learned this myself. And if you were using a translator, that's probably what got it mixed up too.

I just figured you might want to make the correction, minor as it is. And I didn't want to send a PM just for that since you can't delete PM's yet. xD
No, dialogue is always its own paragraph. Like, pick up any fiction book and that's how it'll be. Or a book on grammar or whatever that is with a section on that.


Well actually, that's not entirely true. Dialogue of a different person goes on a different line. Stylistically, there's nothing stopping you from putting it mid-paragraph if that paragraph is also about that character. As long as it's clear to the reader who's speaking, it's okay. In fact, imo, it can actually make the dialogue and narrative flow better together than if you punctuated it with a line break.

Now, if you want to publish a work, each publisher has a different house style. They might want you to make dialogue its own line, but it's just their personal styling.

Though Lugia's last post was a bit long. It probably should have been split into two paragraphs anyway. The longer the paragraph, the harder it could be for some people to read. It's not necessary, but I personally don't like writing paragraphs that are /too/ long.

Anyway, yeah sorry for my absence. I've got stuff worked out now I think. I still have a few problems, but they're not nearly as big anymore.
Heheh. Alrighty. It's nothing HUGE...just a lot of stressful stuff regarding school and my potential graduation with my Bachelor's.

As for my character...? Um...I dunno. You could just kind of...pretend he's not there I guess? I don't really want to hinder the RP any. xD
Yeah, sorry about that. I just wanted to say go ahead and keep posting without me for a little bit. I'm going to be a bit busy lately and won't have time to really buckle down and focus on a post for a while. And I don't want to hold the rest of you up. xD
Well, I just hope I didn't cause our guide to get mad. I dunno which digimon that is, but I'm sure it's at least child-level.


It'll make the story more interesting. Well, if I told you, it'd risk all the human characters addressing someone by a name they have no way of knowing, yeah?


Haha. Well, I'm fairly certain I already know what Digimon it is. xD And yep, you would be right, Lugia. If I'm not mistaken, it's a Rookie level.
The two individuals made their way over to where Nadica, Pabumon and this strange, masked creature was also standing. Hide felt almost as if he had accidentally walked into some stranger's conversation and was momentarily tempted to leave. However, he was stopped when the short creature mentioned the term "meatures." He immediately realized what he meant by the portmanteau of "meat" and "creatures." Did that then mean that these strange critters were not made of flesh and bone like humans were? But then, what were they exactly?

Well, the next thing the creature said definitely held some potential answers to that question. "Erm...excuse me, but...what do you mean by 'Digiworld?'" Hide asked, speaking up again. "Surely you don't mean that it's some kind of digital universe or something, do you? Because...I can tell you with one hundred percent certainty that I'm not digital." At this point, he had completely accepted the fact that these weird creatures were even present in the first place and that they could speak in plain English. He still wasn't sure what they were, but if there was any kind of credence to this "Digiworld" thing, then perhaps these strange non-"meatures" were actually made up of some form of physical data? But how could something like that be? He had felt Botamon himself. He was certainly no hologram or anything....

"Huh?" Botamn said, looking back at Hide questioningly. "Pft. Geez, I guess you can be a bit dense. Everything in the Digital World is digital. Why else would we call it that?"

"D-dense...?" Hide repeated, a little surprised that the single-minded creature would call him dense. "And...what do you mean, everything?"

But Botamon wasn't paying attention anymore. He was now looking at the larger, masked creature. "So who are you supposed to be, anyway?"
Ah yeah. sorry I haven't posted yet. I've been extremely busy lately, moving my grandmother's stuff for her and getting it down to our place. And we spent today pretty much cleaning our own house after having been gone for a week. xD

So yeah, I'll try to get that up soon. I'll definitely have it done by tomorrow.
© 2007-2026
BBCode Cheatsheet