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The weight of your actions should soon become clear.
*Tears myself from the gravitational pull through sheer force, rockets off to the side, and induces a massive solar flare from the star to fire off at you*


*The robot's hand becomes much larger and swallows the star*
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*The energy condensed around my hand is absorbed back into me and I stretch my hands out, once again containing my full power within my body, and kicks Data toward the sun while dancing circles around Avis's attack*


*The force takes several seconds to traverse the entire machine, and the gravitational pull of the bot keeps you with me*
*The gravitational pull disrupts light for everything in the solar system*
Oh wait-
You guys don't use it all that much-


Yeah, what @ZAVAZggg said. Just give us a quick overview in the OOC and we'll look it over.
Ya it works! Thank you so much!
I do have a question about adding characters.
Do we put the form in the reply box???


Could you clarify what you mean?
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Oh! Okay!


If that works for you, let me know if you have any questions or ideas.
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Mhm! I've read the rules and guidelines!
There's just one teenie weenie thing-
I write in 3rd person,and I don't know if that's allowed here-
If it isn't, that's totally fine!


Yeah, ours is a bit different in the sense that we only use first person. Everything you write is assumed to be dialogue, and everything in action symbols (asterisks) is supposed to be an action as if viewed from a camera. That can be in either first or third person, but usually the subject is removed, since we all know who the subject is anyway. For example,

*Runs up to the group*
Hey there!

Alternatively,
*I run up to the group*
What's up?
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*The aura retracts almost immediately, condensing into a single point around my hand, and I blast toward you tearing through absolutely everything in my path*


*The hand extends toward you*
That's enough.
*The robot's gravitational stabilizers turn off, crushing everything not protected by the barrier with the gravitational pull created by the mass of the shell condensed into the size of the bot*
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*It reflects off a curved transparent barrier in front of me, and a ripple is sent out through space*


*Barriers form around our allies*
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*Generates a magical mirror of my own in its path, angled toward Avis*

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Grah!
*Looks down at them, then after a moment they shatter like glass, and all the bits are vaporized*


*Another mirror appears in its path, redirecting the beam to another mirror, which directs it toward you*
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