Ezekiel

Primary: Corellia In Flames

Greetings and welcome to the first main plot thread of the PW!

This is a thread to collate any and all actions revolving around the building Civil Disaster on Corellia, a political and civilian rejection of the Republic and its rule of the planet that is widespread across Corellia and its Orbital stations.

Any and all Characters accepted to the PW are able to become involved (Certain characters such as those hailing from the Sith Empire will need to be covert or face reprisal from their own political systems), but jump ins and temporary characters are also possible. Jump In characters cannot be force users and are generally of low influence, but if you feel like simply playing someone caught up in the conflict nothing is stopping you jumping in. To take part as an accepted PW character simply repost your sheet to the character tab.

The other option for getting involved is to create a character specific to Corellia In Flames using the sheet below. These can be Characters involved in Corellian politics, Cor-Sec, the Correllian Independence movement or other such groups specific to the conflict. If you are playing a Corellia In Flames specific character and wish to carry on using them after this RP Plotline concludes, you are welcome to then fill them out as a full PW character.

Taking part in Corellia In Flames provides you the opportunity to have GM driven content, whether that be interacting with GM NPCs or having events thrown at you by the GMs. Most importantly, it gives you, as players, a very real way to influence the fate of the Persistent Galaxy as we move through the Galactic Cold War.

Corellia In Flames Character Sheet

Name:
Species:
Role on Corellia:
Personality:
Skills:
Assets:
Biography:

[Abandoned] Astra Mink - Runaway

I've checked through it. Nothing 'wrong' that I've caught so I'm happy to accept it myself :)

Just have to wait for one more GM to approve.

[Approved] Nimm Deenia, Sith Apprentice

I see the things.

I like

I approve.

[Approved] Jaslyn Dayne Jedi Padawan

Bing Bing.
Stamp of Approval.

[Approved] Jaslyn Dayne Jedi Padawan

Zapped

[Approved] T'a Tarinai - Zelosian Mechanical Savant

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I tried to write it so that they were just Imperial sympathizers rather than having the Empire's support. If they had the Empire's support, I doubt Miss Tarinai could make it off-planet in one piece after a full-on Empire raid (imagining the raid at the start of Force Awakens as an example of a raid from which one does not simply run away).

Thanks for the approval!

@Mistiel

Yup I did see that clarification, just wanted to clear up that point.

[Approved] Jedi Padawan Bryethe Farlance

I'd probably like a few more details in their bio, after all, they're an 18 year old padawan during a galactic war, they'd likely have been in a few battles worth writing home about.

Secondly, Tutaminis is a restricted force ability, meaning I'd like a few more details on the extent of their ability in this field, how they've come to learn it and how they implement it.

Other then that, it's a really nice sheet with a lot of detail, I do get a very good feel for the character, I'd just like a bit more clarity on those points. Those GMs dedicated to the Jedi may have more specific thoughts.

[Denied] Torzas Mallom- Runaway Nerf Herder

Just reading through the sheet, at the end, I'm not entirely sure who Haler is, is that the name of the uncle?

My main point would simply be that when the Sith 'recruit' force sensitives, they do so somewhat forcefully (pun intended), if they were on the planet to recruit the Uncle, they would have certainly picked up Issiro at the same time.

Other then that, I just don't see how the character could connect with any other, and is more built around the supporting cast than the main character itself.

[Abandoned] Padawan San Anin

The only thing for me is;

San has essentially abandoned her studies in lightsaber combat, making her dueling skills rather lackluster compared to most of her peers.

That might be the case, but for a Padawan, she has lightsaber skills that would suggest that's been her main focus. To play the character that you seem to want to play, I'd tone down the number of forms and her ability in them. Other than that I have no further complaints.

[Approved] Khulbe Desilijic the Hutt - Crime Lord

I think a life of 352 years probably requires a bit more embellishment then that, if you want to play them with the wealth of assets and influence you're after. Other then that, there's nothing 'wrong' I'd just like to have a few more details about his rise to power and such.