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Don't take it personally Jangel, we just like our immersion and atmosphere to make sense, y'know? You'll catch onto it with time. I'm positively surprised at how you've managed our questions and suggestions, keep it up and we'll all have an amazingly fun time here :)
Maiden Inn
"Hey hey hey, people!"
Standing upon the Inn's small stage was a tall, lanky blonde man. An angular jawline and blue eyes quickly gathered the attention of most of the players at the inn, even though his face was coated in a thick layer of white makeup, with black lipstick and eyeliner to go with. A smile rocked his face before he flexed his thin muscles, arms and legs moving in numerous ways. Comically tight black leggings and white-striped black sweatshirt snugly gripped his flexed, nearly non-existent muscles.
A single, feminine giggle was heard from the crowd, and then a young boy stood up. "Boooo! Get down!" He said as he reared his hand back and threw a piece of stone-hard bread at him, which the man avoided with a duck.
"Booooom...!" Said a voice that came from backstage, simulating a explosion.
"S-shut up Casc--"
The man onstage coughed and scratched his hair, "Anyway, enough of me showing off my clearly amazing physique," He said, smile turning into a grin, "we've got a whole show for you guys to enjoy, so you better like it or we'll haunt your dreams!" And then he snapped his fingers.
The dim lighting turned off, and the windows shut closed, blinds preventing any light from entering.
Then a spotlight, emitting the brightest yellow shed concentrated light onto a single form on the stage--A girl, wearing the same makeup and clothes as the man was standing there. But her clothes were loose, and she had stuffed what seemed like twenty pillows into her shirt, making her look like a gargantuan goof. Some giggling could be heard from the crowd, but soon everything fell silent, and the girl, Cascabel, was still standing stoically. All until suddenly, a scratchy violin began playing.
Its tune resembled an american country song, its notes were crazy dynamic and seemed to give the quaint inn an aura of mirth, aided only by the fact that the girl started dancing around the stage with a goofy grin on her face. Her pillow-stuffed shirt jiggled happily with each step, and with every up and down of the violin, she'd spin around and somehow manage to throw one of the pillows towards the audience, laughing and snorting all the while.
The moment she got rid of her last pillow was the moment that another man jumped out from the shadows, pushing her away from the spotlight. He was dressed as a farmer with undersized pants and oversized shoes. He began dancing to the tune, singing a tacky country song to match.
This went on for a few minutes, until at last the lighting went back to normal and the four performers showed themselves. The three dancers walked down towards the public and dragged willing people to dance with them, the violinist keeping the cheery tunes and the dancers now dressed with their black leggings and white-striped long-sleeved sweaters.
The public was happy and distracted now, distracted enough that two of the dancers could actually step off the stage and sit down on one of the tables to take a break. But quickly their eyes were set on other targets, mischievous smiles forming on their faces.
"Hey hey hey, people!"
Standing upon the Inn's small stage was a tall, lanky blonde man. An angular jawline and blue eyes quickly gathered the attention of most of the players at the inn, even though his face was coated in a thick layer of white makeup, with black lipstick and eyeliner to go with. A smile rocked his face before he flexed his thin muscles, arms and legs moving in numerous ways. Comically tight black leggings and white-striped black sweatshirt snugly gripped his flexed, nearly non-existent muscles.
A single, feminine giggle was heard from the crowd, and then a young boy stood up. "Boooo! Get down!" He said as he reared his hand back and threw a piece of stone-hard bread at him, which the man avoided with a duck.
"Booooom...!" Said a voice that came from backstage, simulating a explosion.
"S-shut up Casc--"
The man onstage coughed and scratched his hair, "Anyway, enough of me showing off my clearly amazing physique," He said, smile turning into a grin, "we've got a whole show for you guys to enjoy, so you better like it or we'll haunt your dreams!" And then he snapped his fingers.
The dim lighting turned off, and the windows shut closed, blinds preventing any light from entering.
Then a spotlight, emitting the brightest yellow shed concentrated light onto a single form on the stage--A girl, wearing the same makeup and clothes as the man was standing there. But her clothes were loose, and she had stuffed what seemed like twenty pillows into her shirt, making her look like a gargantuan goof. Some giggling could be heard from the crowd, but soon everything fell silent, and the girl, Cascabel, was still standing stoically. All until suddenly, a scratchy violin began playing.
Its tune resembled an american country song, its notes were crazy dynamic and seemed to give the quaint inn an aura of mirth, aided only by the fact that the girl started dancing around the stage with a goofy grin on her face. Her pillow-stuffed shirt jiggled happily with each step, and with every up and down of the violin, she'd spin around and somehow manage to throw one of the pillows towards the audience, laughing and snorting all the while.
The moment she got rid of her last pillow was the moment that another man jumped out from the shadows, pushing her away from the spotlight. He was dressed as a farmer with undersized pants and oversized shoes. He began dancing to the tune, singing a tacky country song to match.
This went on for a few minutes, until at last the lighting went back to normal and the four performers showed themselves. The three dancers walked down towards the public and dragged willing people to dance with them, the violinist keeping the cheery tunes and the dancers now dressed with their black leggings and white-striped long-sleeved sweaters.
The public was happy and distracted now, distracted enough that two of the dancers could actually step off the stage and sit down on one of the tables to take a break. But quickly their eyes were set on other targets, mischievous smiles forming on their faces.
It just teaches some rules for comedy. Trying to incorporate them and stuff. Just about to say screw it and post what I have xD The group is not supposed to be that good--After all, they usually hunt monsters after working as performers for the day.
Edit: There we go, the show goes on for about 5-7 minutes before the dancers invite people onto the stage. Who Cascabel and the other guy take an interest in, though, will be left up to someone who needs the interaction. All I ask is for that peep to let me know that they want the interaction, and we'll set up a collab pad :p
Edit: There we go, the show goes on for about 5-7 minutes before the dancers invite people onto the stage. Who Cascabel and the other guy take an interest in, though, will be left up to someone who needs the interaction. All I ask is for that peep to let me know that they want the interaction, and we'll set up a collab pad :p
xD Just wait for a while, I'm tweaking it up a lot, and I still got about 1/3 of it to write.
First time actually trying to write something funny, and writing while looking at a tutorial isn't exactly the quickest thing to do xD
First time actually trying to write something funny, and writing while looking at a tutorial isn't exactly the quickest thing to do xD
Do I have to ask for permission to interrupt your IC hate-session with Angelo with a nice dose of funny? xD
Beginning to work on a post xd
Jangel, what I recommend is for you to try and structure your posts a little more clearly--What I mean by that is that you could try to separate your posts into two paragraphs. Right now it's kinda hard for me to read the blocks of text you write, and I believe that an ideal paragraph should be 5 sentences/lines in length. Also another tip for concise writing- A paragraph is an idea, and the next paragraph is the continuation of that idea.
Imagine you're walking into a bakery; the first paragraph would be the description of the place and its customers, and the second would be the things you decide to do at the place.
Otherwise, if you feel like this is too much to ask, just format your posts a little better. Put your dialogues in bold and avoid run-on sentences.
Imagine you're walking into a bakery; the first paragraph would be the description of the place and its customers, and the second would be the things you decide to do at the place.
Otherwise, if you feel like this is too much to ask, just format your posts a little better. Put your dialogues in bold and avoid run-on sentences.
I guess my peeps will work at the inn for the time being.
On another note, I'm leaving on a two-week trip on the 14th of this month, and I won't return until the 2nd of September. I'll probably post before then, but even so, I'm VERY busy with College projects.
On another note, I'm leaving on a two-week trip on the 14th of this month, and I won't return until the 2nd of September. I'll probably post before then, but even so, I'm VERY busy with College projects.
Where is Tomoko atm, Caits? Like, around Tolbana or in Tolbana? Carla's bond to be in some of the woods around the town, spending time with her performer friends.
What kind of characters does the group need to become whole? I'm about to continue with the Vetzu CS, so I might as well ask!
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