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Generally, people will join others' RPs first, but there's no etiquette rule (that I know of) that prohibits the creation of RPs as soon as you create your own RPG account. So, feel free to design and plan out your RP and put up an Interest Check when you're ready.
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Sure, why not. Although if it makes its energy through photosynthesis, it's gonna need a lot of leaves...


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Okay, okay, quick question: How do you feel about an Alien species which literally is a bunch of humanoid, sentient plants?
I think Nightshade might be overpowered then. If it controls darkness, then it can literally kill you from inside your body, cause light almost never reaches the inside of your body. If Nightshade's only ability is teleporting from shadow to shadow, it can be pretty interesting. I'd hesitate to accept someone who like, creates tendrils of darkness out of shadows.

The others seems fine to me now. With the exception of Tempus. I wouldn't trust anyone, not even myself, with controlling a time-traveler xD If it's just seconds, though... It would be kinda UP, wouldn't it? Most situations you'd find an use for that ability would be situations where you'd already be dead when you realized you needed to go back in time. Like disarming a bomb or moving to a different piece of cover in a shooting.
I have a feeling I saw you around in the OldGuild, Gia. Did you ever GM a RP?
I think Tempus is better off in the idea archives, having a time-traveller in any setting is a mess and effectively turns everything that happens into a discussion on "Why didn't Tempus travel back in time to stop this from happening?"

Slicer's limit on the player knowing how the arm works is unfair, who knows what components one needs to fire a plasma bolt? It makes the character completely undesirable to play to anyone who's not passionate for physics or science. I recommend outlining which abilities she can use.

Nightshade is underpowered. Nobody's going to walk into a dark cave willingly, and even if they do, they'll bring a pretty potent light with themselves. You could give him the ability to use shadows to temporarily turn off any light source, like flashlights, unless you intend to force Nightshade to stay in a dark cave for all of his existence.

Zeitgeist, while an idea with potential, I can't see him being really interesting or important in a RPG. It's already difficult for a writer to devise how such a character would control the attention and feelings of hundreds of people, it's even more difficult for a player to do the same thing. Also, what do you mean by psychic? A telepath? A seer? A mind control kinda guy?

Why not go with the super powers that are known to be fun and have been proven to work?


I have a feeling I could have sugar coated things a lot more. I'm sorry if anything of what I've written is offensive to you, but you asked for criticism. Of course, with more work applied on the ideas, they can become something I'd find fun myself. Keyword being I.
Good luck in your search, bro. I know how difficult planning a plot out can be.
Great to know, you'll soon fall in love with the site, I promise :p I've been here for four years myself.
That would be truly awesome, but I doubt Revan can live for thousands of years xD
The trailers didn't hit any of my sweet spots, so I'm not all that excited, though I do expect to see some good ol' Star Wars goodness.
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