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Supernova: Humanity's Extinction

That sounds great, Boom xD

On another note, my IC final post is up. I'd appreciate it if the Foreas were kept out of the RP from now on. Pretend as if they didn't exist, or at least don't use them. See ya guys, thanks for the opportunity to develop my species a lil bit more.

Supernova: Humanity's Extinction

Teige

Teige put her index finger on her cheek as she looked into her locker. These were all of her possessions. A handgun, a necklace, a portable comms unit and a Garden brand dress. She took her rucksack and put all the items but the handgun, which she strapped to her hip, and the comms unit, which she put on her wrist, in it. She slung the light rucksack over her shoulder and walked out of the room. She exchanged a few greetings with a few members of the crew, then finally arrived at the airlock. She waited there for a long while, she chatted with a crew member stationed nearby, drank some water and practiced meditation.

Then the airlock's intercom came to life, and a familiar voice came through. "Hello, Exploronaut 367, Roi, here. I'm here for Exploronaut 360, Teige."

Teige smiled, "Here I am, Roi. I'll let you into the airlock, give me a moment." Teige fished out her ID card from her uniform and passed it over the panel controlling the airlock. Its outer door opened, let Roi in and then closed. Pressurization came into effect and then the inner door opened.

Roi was wearing a green and black space, sleek space suit. It looked more like a loose Exploronaut uniform with a helmet than a space suit, though. Her face was obscured behind the dark visor of her helmet but from the body language, Teige could tell Roi was glad to see her. Roi was also carrying a second suit on her left arm. "This is yours." Roi said, voice distorted by the helmet's microphone, and extended her arm towards Teige.

Teige grabbed the suit and quickly put it on, over her uniform. She locked the helmet in place and stretched her limbs. "Will it be a space walk to the ship?"

"More like a space jump, we're only a few meters out. Also, Teige-" Roi hesitated, "There was a terrorist attempt at the Tree."

Teige could feel her heart skip a beat. The heat drained from her face and she turned to Roi. "A terrorist attempt?"

"Some alien sneaked into the Tree's perimeter, avoided all guards and priests and blew himself up right beside the Tree."

Teige was at a loss of words, and after she failed to form any after a few attempts, she simply pressed the button to close the airlock and depressurize. The airlock did its work and soon they were facing the void of space. Excitement filled Teige, yet she showed none of it now. Getting physically excited right now would be detrimental to their objective. A moment passed, and Roi bought her fingers to the side of her helmet. She mumbled something into her personal comms.

Then, Teige saw a large shadow. It descended and descended, up until it was leveled with them--That was Roi's ship.

Roi linked her arm with Teige's and nodded. "On three we jump, you know the drill." Teige nodded in response.

"One," They got into position.

"Two," Roi's ship's airlock opened, brightly lit with an orange light.

"Three!" They jumped. Roi grunted and Teige bit her lip. As they exited the human ship's airlock, gravity became non existent. They flailed their legs in synchronization two times, then stopped. They drifted toward the ship ever so gently. Once they got closer though, it was clear they were off course. They'd hit the ship's hull at that rate.

"Move us to the right, Roi. I'll stabilize the acceleration once we're correctly aligned." And so Roi activated her personal thruster at mid potency. A moment later and Teige activated her own, which aligned them in front of the airlock. They deactivated the thrusters and prepared for landing.

They both felt the sudden tug of gravity as they entered the airlock. They did not fall, though. They separated their arms and each arrived with a somersault.

Teige was the first to stand and she grinned. "That was exciting."

"Tell me about it." Roi said and chuckled, then the airlock closed and they took off the space suits. "We can't stay in human space, Teige. You understand, right? The Priests requested the Exploronauts and Navy to provide higher security for the Tree and to look for possible ties to a bigger organization."

"I understand. The Tree's more important than this." Teige nodded in agreement, then the airlock let them into the ship. Roi brought her wrist up and spoke into her comms bracelet.

"Take us back to the Homeplanet, Koi. Let's get there as fast as possible, we'll refuel once we get there."

The ship whirred into action. It aligned itself with the correct Faster Than Light(FTL) route, and then it jumped into the void.

Supernova: Humanity's Extinction

Thank you for being understanding, Amaterasu. The interest check said nothing. It just mentioned a mix between two games that all had their share of action, mystery, suspense and good storytelling.

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It wasn't the speed that did it for me. It was the setting. I was expecting something more... Suspenseful and mysterious ,I suppose. With a nice dash of action and violence, but mainly seeking to unveil the mystery of humanity's extinction. It's the reason my character was an explorer. Starting the RP with a kill fest did it for me. I don't care if it was to introduce new characters--Those characters could have woken up from the pods and you know it well. Not to mention the fact that the military had a high value target bound in an open area, on the floor and with apparently the worst soldiers possible guarding it.

I also knew absolutely nothing about the ship my character awoke in. Why was Teige there? What was the ship's original mission? Without knowing such things, I was at an absolute loss on how my character should interact with the others.

Wanna know why I wrote this post? Cause I'm frickin salty after I Am X's post criticizing our decision to leave.

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Then I'll announce my leave. Once the Foreas ship picks Teige up and resupplies, they'll jump away from the system and human space.
Had high hopes for the setting but it turned out too different from what I had expected.

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I am X, boomlover is new to this. RP Etiquette is somewhat complex and unintuitive sometimes, so please try to be patient. He'll learn eventually. We all were new to this once and made his same mistakes.

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It's a chatroom. I use one in mibbit for another RP I'm in, it's really useful for keeping an RP alive through slow times.

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If someone could make a chatzy or the like, it'd be perfect.

And actually Boom, this RP is a lot faster than the norm at the moment. If you're looking for quick fixes of writing, the Free section might be your jam. Last time I participated in a Free RP, there were about 50 IC posts per day.

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Where does this OOC plot discussion happen? I really want to have a part in that.

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It depends really, you can post three lines and have it be perfect in quality just like you can post four paragraphs and make it perfect in quality too. I go for a concrete writing style. I write what's happening as seen from Teige's eyes with minimal interruption from her thoughts. Imagine if I were to write each thing that comes to her mind when she sees a human. My posts would then triple in size and capture 1/3rd of the current interest they gather.

Boom, writing an interesting character takes a lot of practice. It's taken me 4 years to get to where I am and I still have a long way to go. Some of us take things more seriously because they are super passionate about writing, which is a good thing. Others are more relaxed because it's only a hobby, which is also a good thing.