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Oh. Ooooh. Yeah, you might wanna clear that up in the intro post, man xD
Act, common dragons are powerful enough to burn entire cities to the ground--Don't you think dragons as big and powerful as stars are a bit overkill?
I suggest developing The Dragon God's introduction a bit more. Take as an example what the rest of us have been doing as intros. You might want to follow suit for a tiny while before creating your dragons.

And yes, Escre's intro was wonderful, I must admit.
wat just happened with the dragons? There ain't even a planet for them to live on xD
Reading that felt like two parents gave their child a punishment. A rather painful punishment for absolutely no evident reason at all, but a punishment nonetheless. I can imagine the WotW slamming her bedroom door's closed and shouting "I hate you! You ruin my life!"
Nice post bruh, though I feel kinda bad for the Woman in the Waters now D:
Literally the first word to ever be spoken. I believe it accurately represents what everyone was thinking when they came into existence xD
xD Well, somebody had to break the ice! Nobody had said anything yet, so let Astarte take the heat for speaking first xD
Thank you :p
Astarte, Goddess of the Ranges
Might: 4


Astarte saw.

For the first time, she saw.

There wasn't much to see other than the shades near her and the far away feeling of familiarity coming from them. Then she registered the next thing--The power emanating from the unknown figures.

"You are become Magic, Mother of the Arcane." Their very auras made her essence shiver and waver, both in fear and in respect. It was exciting to feel. It was exciting to know other beings were nearby, too.

'Rise'

Astarte felt joy. An immense joy which caused her to twist and change numerous times. Then she received colour. She was no longer darkness. She was now a cloud of light violet dust. But even the cloud would not settle and from it, a form came forth. The form of a woman. Young, with long lavender coloured hair that flowed behind her. The dust settled on her, eventually nothing but a thin mist around her contours.

"Wow..." Astarte muttered.
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