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@ERode: Then you post, realize you have finals the day after, then cry in a corner.

Then chug 5 cups of espresso and skip sleep to study. Somehow ace the final.

Yes. That's how this works, right?
*shakes thread around*

Where is everyone today? It's only Tuesday, after all.
Like, I can understand being dead on Monday. Nobody likes Mondays. But Tuesday? Really?
"Understood, Captain," Tiral stated flatly, slipping the dagger back into its usual hiding spot before following his superior further into the crypt. The walk down was a lot less treacherous than it probably would've been otherwise (mainly thanks to the other Knights that charged ahead like bucks in heat towards the enemy), which gave the mage a change to catch his breath. His heart was still pounding from that last encounter, but at the very least he had more than enough stamina to spare. Was it the excitement that was keeping him strung-up right now?
...
Probably.

Following the Captain onto the bottom floor, Tiral stopped for a moment and looked at the scene with a blank stare. Two Sults (one completely naked), Marianne being assaulted by a weird pile of floating armor, and... What appeared to be the remaining enemies either out cold or in the process of being knocked out cold (or killed; he could care less, honestly).

"...What in the name of the Goddesses am I looking at?!" he cried out amidst all of the chaos, staring at the group with a look of disbelief before sighing. "Honestly, you'd think an order of knights would have a bit more dignity..."

Rolling his eyes, Tiral walked around the edge of the room, quietly chanting under his breath as he moved up the the lightning mage that was lying out cold on the floor. With a wave of his hand, the enemy's body was quickly encased in ice, save for his head. Shattering the body was certainly an option, but... Well, if they could interrogate him, then all the better.

...

But how the hell was he supposed to help handle the mess that the Captain had just thrown herself into?!
@Zombehs: Hm...
Okay, I guess that works, then. Though obviously I'd rather the character not become a master of arms out of nowhere, so as long as that's not going to be an issue... Accepted.
@Zombehs: Only possible problem is the cheat. How long does it take to 'learn' how to use a weapon within the context of the cheat?
@Noodles: I think it's fine now. Accepted.

@ERode: Wow, you weren't kidding about the 'too little fucks' bit there.
@Noodles: I was about to comment on physical age before remembering that anime loves that disjoint between physical and actual age. A height would be nice, though.

Also, I wasn't saying that a Western name is bad, but that the character seemed to be of Western descent. Lack of a family name and all that.
@Noodles: Okay, gonna be a bit snarky here. Forgive me in advance, please.
If I've said it once, I've said it a thousand times.

Train.
Past.
Midnight.
Plus.
Child.
Under.
Age.


Look, I know that cultural and societal norms are a tad different in Japan compared to most Western countries, but I'm still fairly certain that riding a train past midnight is still really dangerous without justification in either country (read: escort home by relatives); either change the age or change the justification for being on the train to something a bit less... I dunno, contrived? The name suggests at least one parent with Western origins, so... Yeah.

Also, I'm not seeing someone wear that sorta outfit coming back from anywhere other than a con in this day and age. I recommend swapping that out if you can't find good enough justification, taking into account everything I've said until this point.

Like, no lie, those are essentially the only issues I have with the form. It's fine otherwise, but those two points need to be addressed.
...

Why do I feel like I'm tiptoeing around a minefield when I'm in this OoC sometimes?

Jokes aside, uh... I think I'll skip this posting rotation since I really don't see anything to write other than "Tiral follows coolly" or something.
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