Galavani

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@Penultimate_Pi awesome! thanks for your very strong profile, but good god man, change his name!

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Gotta post this because @Skepic forgot to....

As you all should of guessed

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@Kurai Assassin no, thatll be tommorow evening

EDIT: and there still might be new submissions until then so i cant make any decisions yet

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@GingerBoi123 would like to see an 'out of gear' picture and a longer more fleshed out backstory, everything else is fine.

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@Xandrya yeah as long as its occasional, sounds cool

Hey

@Rawk I see you lurking in my COPS rp, still time to drop a submission! :)

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@Roosan something like that, yes. I'm open to be a little flexible as well, with newer submissions just coming in, but thats roughly the time window yes.

B!tchfest: a healthy release for our non-roleplay annoyances.

Beta Males

The Reaction

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So I'll give you all some late feedback so you know what to change (if anything) on your profile

@Xandrya Very strong profile, I cant see any changes that need to be made.

@sassy1085 Backstory should be a little more detailed, significant grammar issues need to be adressed

@Savage Strong Profile, but the weapons category wasnt needed, youll get the weapons assigned when the IC starts

@Roosan The Wire references were done tastefully, and I like the backstory, but I wish it was made with a bit more mention to the cyberpunk world and references to the timeline. But overall, strong profile.

@LetMeDoStuff Very strong profile, be sure to add in the parts of Greg's knowledge of Mack to establish that mutual acknowledgement between the two.

@Skepic Very Strong Profile, would have been even stronger if you didn't take out that awesome humming theme tune.

@Kurai Assassin
Good profile, still would like a little bit more of a fleshed out backstory, and very minor spelling and grammar to be addressed.

@LokiLeo789
Very strong profile. No changes need to be made.

@PURRfect93
Good character concept, but many grammatical errors need to be addressed. Backstory could use a bit more detail and fleshing out.

Let me know if you have any more specific questions, feel free to ask me here in the OOC.

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Okay I'm waiting on a couple more submissions via PM, and then I will be deciding the final line up Sometime Tommorow Evening. So make any changes you need to before then.

If your character doesn't make the final cut, you will still be kept around as a reserve if someone else drops out.