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"Small" Alph was only just arriving in town for the first time in months. He hadn't been able to find a place to stop the night before, and was too far to travel the rest of the way in the rain, so he had slept under the cover of trees with his horse hobble nearby with a cloak draped over her. He had woken a few hours before dawn, the rain having stopped, and saddled up to make the rest of the trip. It was midmorning when he made it to town. His first stop was his grandfather's house, walking in like he owned the place after putting his mare up to rest.

"Granddad?" He called into the other rooms, before turning to the stairs that led into the basement where his family brewed their ale. "Auntie?"

It was the old man who came up the stairs, wiping something off his hands on a towel. He was toothless and hairless, but his arms were strong from lifting barrels and casks. "Eeeh, the smaller Alphonse. Though," he stood up straighter to try and get the measure of his grandson, "I'm not sure which of you is the taller after all."

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After changing clothes, and learning that his aunt had married a merchant from a larger town and gone off to live with him, Alphonse stepped back out the door, to see who was still around. He had the same boots(they were his only ones) and they had only dried a little by the fire before he put them back on, but fresh stockings helped. He also still had the battered and chipped sword hung on his belt. He didn't expect to use it, but it made him feel dashing to wear it, whether he'd ever so much as knicked someone with the blade or not.

He found Galen Derricson and Gren the Forest Urchin among a group who were warming after the rains by a large fire. Alph got up behind him and threw his arms around both of their shoulders.

"Gren! Gale! I swear, every time I come back you're more the handsome strapping young man," he turned to Gale, "And you're, uh, more rugged," he turned to Gren, his smile flickering. "So what's going on? Anyone else's family gotten married off?"
Cecil shook his head. "If he were working with them, he wouldn't have, that is, only if the goal were our deaths, he just stopped fighting. Peace came really easily, and he said from the first he didn't want to hurt us." He threw his hands up. "That doesn't add up from any angle. It was manipulation or coincidence.
"Why does everyone have to want so much," Cecil lamented wearily. "All of this overreaching is killing people. Sulfrax has his mystery ambitions, CMAS sends us out to die for land, and the Divers come out to keep us from it." He didn't have the energy to bounce from idea to idea anymore, and his speech actually slowed down to that of a more normal person because of it.

"I feel used."
Oh yeah, I read Brisingr years ago, and only recently finished off the series. But Inheritence I did in audiobook, so there's very likely things I just didn't catch when my attention lapsed.

It's also going to be the reason I may misspell some things.
@Forsythe Wow, a lot of people seemed to have used it, kind of weird that it somehow escaped Galbatorix's knowledge, actually.
No, magic controlled by the ancient language didn't work. We now have possibly a small unit of dragons that could still turn him into diamond if he pissed them off enough, and one could still attempt to use spirits, non-verbal manipulation etc. =P


Yeah, but nonverbal isn't a known form of magic yet. IIRC Eragon discovers it throughout the course of his adventures(which is why Galby didn't know about it before). I suppose we could discover it first, and go about it that way buuuut I've always thought that was a bullshit kind of cop out anyway.

And even if there are ways around it(as there obviously were in the book for Eragon to win, oh, but he didn't even win the fight, he used the power of compassion and shit to make Galbatorix regret his actions), he can still use the name of names to disable our normal magic, and then use his own normal verbal magic to destroy us before we have a chance to use them. He's powerful enough without his god word, including it in forces us to deus ex machina our way to victory. Hell, that's what the author even had to do. He wrote himself into a corner with how unstoppable his villain was. A handful of green riders aren't going to be much more of a threat than a cadre of Elvish sorcerers. Probably less of one, to be honest.

I think the best thing to do is to say that his distraction with our new riders' presence keeps him from his research where he would otherwise eventually discover the name of names.
Gallywix- I mean Galbatorix- is one badass OP SOB, but even he would be overwhelmed by so many new riders if they're allowed to grow.


Eeeeeeh, not really. Galbatorix was ludicrously OP. Like, actual omnipotent god-tier. With the "name of the ancient language" he could literally stop everyone from doing anything with a word. Magic just plain didn't work if he didn't want it to. I kind of think we should just quietly retcon that out. Make him uber powerful on a more normal level.
I'm fine either way.

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