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Audrey’s bike gave a low rumble as it rolled down the highway. She was going slower than usually, trying to make the most of the dollar-and-thirty-nine-cents worth of gasoline she had put in miles and hours ago. It was making her regret everything she loved about her bike, because for all of its power, it drank fuel greedily. She put on a final burst just after taking the exit ramp, and flew across the Greenbriar city limits.

With a few hours before high tide, Audrey procrastinated the inevitable return to her grandpa’s house by hitting Beach street, and parking just past the cafe. Rather than patronizing the coffee shop(with what money?), she walked past it toward the cliff, where there was a series of switchback stairs carved right out of the stone. She marched down them, hands in her pockets, and across the beach to lean against a mussel covered rock and stare out at the ocean until the tide hit her boots.

As she looked, she caught sight of a figure out on the waves that were crashing against the rocks. She didn't have to look too hard, there were only a few people crazy enough to surf in these waters at all, let alone at night. She waved Sol over, and he turned his board toward her.

A glow reflected on the water made her turn around to witness something that was striking fear into the hearts of parents all across town. A spread of lights across the only sky, outshining the moon and in shades of red, mingled with yellow and orange. They enveloped most of the sky directly over the town, with some tendrils spreading out even as far as where Audrey stood.

She turns back to Sol, her mouth open in surprise, just in time to see him lose control of his surfboard and strike one of the jagged rocks that dotted the shore. Audrey made to rush into the water to help, but the dark figure never reached the water. Indeed, the figure didn't stay dark. A white hot glow emanated from him, and rather than flailing into the water, he suddenly shot off like a glowing rocket into the sky.

“Fucking shit!”

~~~

Two Harleys roared down Beach Street, carrying tall men in matching denim vests. One pointed, as they came up on the Cliffside Cafe, to the the bank of vehicles parked on the street. The other looked, and suddenly both veered across the the street to park among them.

“Look at this piece of shit!” Thomas Morhaime said as he came upon the other motorcycle that was already parked there.

“Yup,” Michael, who matched him in more ways than clothing, replied. “Don't think anyone else rides a Honda, let alone this sparkly eyesore. Think she's inside?”

“Good bet.” He snatched the helmet that Audrey had left on the handlebar and the twins marched into the Cliffside Cafe.

They were a year ahead of the current graduating class, but were still among what everyone called the “Greenbriar Miracles,” who had survived the mysterious rash of infant deaths some eighteen or nineteen years ago. They were even more miraculous than some, as those two years had brought an unusual amount of twins, and they were one of only two pairs that had both survived. They were tall, lean and swaggering, with brown hair, blue eyes, and square features.

When they came in, Michael approached the counter, ignoring that Maren was already there, and slapped a twenty on the counter.

“Two coffees, leave a little room,” he patted the pocket of his vest that had a flask in it. Then, in a magnanimous voice as if this was a great deal of money to throw around, he added “Keep the change.”

Thomas, meanwhile, had already made a round of the few patrons in the shop, and peered out the window. He shrugged back at his twin when their eyes met, and Michael looked back between Zoey and Maren.

“Where’s Aud?” His voice was just barely on the right side of casual, with a hint of ill intent behind it.

Thomas was peering out onto the balcony seating when the windows were all lit up by a warm glow from the sky. He called his brother over, and he looked out just in time to see something blindingly bright soar up and out of sight, close enough to rattle the windows.

~~~

I'm a windowless basement, where the sky couldn't be seen, even as miraculous lights filled it, another graduate sat alone. Anthony Finch, sickly and frail as ever, was still wearing his graduation gown and cap. He had a blank look on his face, and his mouth was somewhat slack.

This passage into adulthood meant nothing to someone who could never travel far from home, who needed his dialysis every other day. Who became tired and had to sit and rest twice and hour.

What could someone like him accomplish? What sort of life was he doomed to?

He didn't mean to find out.

He twiddled the razor blade in his hand for a moment longer, but no matter how he twisted his mind, he couldn't talk himself out of it.

He put the blade to work.
@Ellion Actually, you'll see in my post there's a set of stairs right by the cafe, set into the cliff.

You can say that she saw Audrey pass by on her way down if you like. It might be useful for her to know where she is.
Healing: 2

Anti Machine: 1

Time stop: 0

Wound Transfer: 0

I'm nearly done with my post, it also kicks events off pretty quickly and introduces a couple of NPCs.
@Ellion slight geography issue in the first post. The entire town is elevated, the cafe and all of Beach Street aren't on the beach at all, but rather on a cliff overlooking it.

@Eyeris You can't vote twice you cheater :P

Anyway, I'm gonna post soon(as long as no customers come in), so if those of you at the cafe could hold off for just a sec-aroo.
I don't even know what to call that power.

It double sucks because how the fuck do you travel when cars break down when you ride in them?

Both are great suggestions.

So our candidates are

1) Healing(while taking a portion of the injury to herself)

2) Aggro-tied time stopping

3) Wound transfer(I'm going to classify it as a different power)

4) Machine breaking

The "limit" to how many wounds she can "store" can just be that she transfers them to herself until she has somewhere(read: someone else) to put them.

Is there a poll function on the site? Whatever, copy/paste with an updated count to vote.

Healing: 0

Time stop: 0

Wound Transfer: 0

Anti-Machine: 0

I'm not counting coming up with the power as a vote, so even if you suggested it, go ahead and cast yours(because you may have changed your mind after seeing the other options).
Coolio, I'm actually working on mine, I might have to integrate your characters into it.

As far as relationships go, Zoey and her probably would have been friends, but Audrey's been gone for almost two years and is only just returning as of my first post.

Kiera maybe too, you guys can let me know what you think.

So, we do need a power for my character. I was being pretty hands off about it before, but not many people have chimed in, and I need it decided on so I'm going to go ahead and try to nudge this into action, even if it means influencing the decision a little bit.
Here's what we have so far:

Time Stopper: She can stop time at certain moments. This means that either herself or everything around her doesn't move

The Catch: When trying to protect someone else, time stops around her. However, when trying to hurt someone else, time stops for her, meaning she just stands still and becomes a big target. This lasts untill she is hit by something. (no matter the force of impact. This means something like a leaf falling on top of her is enough to make her move again, but so is a bullet) If she has frozen time around her because she wants to protect someone and then changed her mind and wants to hurt someone, her time will stop and time around her will start flowing again. (just so there isn't a paradox of time being stopped for everyone.)


Thoughts from me: It doesn't bother me that it's another time related power, especially when Kiera's functions more as super speed than anything else.
I think it works with(or rather, against) her personality by playing counter to her aggression.
I'm not sure what I think about how balanced it is. It has the potential to be either a huge asset or a huge liability, depending on the situation. And even after she figures her power out, she's suddenly forced not to act under certain situations, lest she freeze herself. This also works counter to her personality, though, so it's kind of nice.

Edit Edit: My idea for Audrey Springer is....it has a specific name, but I can't remember what it is.

Any way the jist is that she can feel scenes and emotions through the clothing of others (I'm tempted to expand this to other objects as well)

Pro: Can see into the past and read the emotions someone was feeling when wearing a particular outfit.

Pro/Con: She takes on the emotion if the article is worn for extended periods of time. If someone was very happy when wearing a shirt, Audrey would feel very happy when wearing that shirt, even if she was miserable. That means she also gets the sad/angry emotions. ALSO, if the clothing was worn when someone was in extreme pain/pleasure Audrey will feel that pain/pleasure.

Edit Edit Edit: Also, if she wants to feel like herself, her clothing has to be new.


Postcognition, is sort of similar to what is being described, though some limitation is added in. I think that limitation makes it kind of weak. Obviously I'm biased, since whatever is chosen gets slapped onto my character, but the power doesn't seem like it will be useful ever.

A more general postcogntion would be more appropriate, but either way I don't see the connection to the character( @Ellion can let me know what they were thinking, though, you might see something I don't).

I was thinking a peaceful power for Audrey, like healing? Possibly something to clash with her tough-girl nature.


I assume you mean healing others. Once again, it works well to counter her nature, being an inherently passive ability in a character who is very action oriented, and aggressive.

I also think that her powers being applied to other people is a pretty solid choice, because it counters her independence. So healing/buffs/even that protective time stopping one above all work well for that purpose.

I believe Eyeris is thinking on one as well, so we'll see what she comes up with too.

@GiskAre we doing a post order (i.e. everyone responds before everyone else replies) or is it more free for all?


I don't want to have to implement an order, because I think they can choke RPs up if you're not careful. So for now, just don't have two players posting back to back for four turns or anything, you know?

If they get into dialogue that you want to have back and forth, just do a collab post(and don't put in too much filler text if you do this).


Thanks for the heads up, it is done.

I've expounded slightly on my character. If everyone could take a look and suggest a power if you haven't already. Or else endorse one that's already been mentioned.
@Gisk I forget how strict you were with one vs two characters and I am super in love with Maren. But if you'd like I could make a second male character so we have another boy. But if you don't care, I an fine with just Mars


I actually don't care about gender ratios. I'm going to have some NPCs who will all be male, too. I think it's okay, really.

If your characters die, you can come up with a new one and change genders if you like.

I also think I'm going to close this for new characters. If we lose players I'll open it again, but for now we are officially full up.
@Eyeris Bae is bae, and she does this:

Telepathy: She can invade the minds of others, and with a great deal of concentration can alter the course of their thoughts.

The Catch: A mind isn't a book to be read. She doesn't hear her victim's thoughts, she thinks them as well. In a very real way, other people are invading her mind just as much as she is theirs.

She cannot control another persons actions, she can only put thoughts in their head. When she does this, she is also still susceptible to any thoughts that they have, and rather than taking control of their mind, she is thinking in tandem with them.

The further away someone is, the weaker this connection. About five meters away, her ability becomes difficult to employ.

((Reasoning: As with Ocean, I gave her a power that would cause intrusive thoughts which she will not like. But also, as someone concerned with social justice and liberties, she now has the ability to make people think like her. Will she be a hypocrite if she uses her power? Is it okay if it's for the greater good?))
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