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Marianne's Seven Deadly Lovely Maids


The maids then stood straight, curtsying politely before bidding their adieus. "As you wish, Captain Fanily. Thank you." they all said in unison. Reforming into their single file column, they then set about in locating this...Sir Garrett. Whomever he was and why Lady Marianne needed to thank him was beyond their knowledge, and of course they couldn't help but whisper amongst themselves as they set about to finding him. In a way, disobeying Lady Marianne's orders. But what she didn't know, couldn't hurt her right? As long as they remained on their best behavior.

"Who is this Sir Garrett?" One asked to the rest.
"There is no telling. We know none of the other Iron Roses."
"How many Iron Roses are there?"
"No telling that, either."
"What do you think he did for Lady Marianne?"
"Maybe he saved her life?"
"Whatever it was, surely it was of grave import to our Lady."
"Especially to have us invite him to dinner with her."

As they whispered to one another at a volume so that only they and those in close proximity could hear, they passed by the half-naked Sir Gillian and Doctor Teller. A few of them lingered about to eye the two men and stifled giggles amongst themselves, while the rest were too off-put by Doctor Teller's mask and hurried the group along.

"What do you think he looks like?"
"Probably a face only an Ogre or Troll could find attractive."
Some more stifled giggles, the one who made the statement got smacked on her arm.
"Did you hear how Lady Marianne spoke his name?"
"I doubt he's as ugly as you made him out to be."
"He's possibly some bear or brute of a man."
"He can't be that bad!"
"He better not have been rude to our lady or was inappropriate to her."
"What could you do if he had?"
"Watch, he's probably some prim and frilly flower of a man."
"Do you think that's Lady Marianne's type?"
"Honestly, with that woman, there's no telling."
"She did turn down many a suitor.."

Their search for Sir Garrett dragged on a bit too long for their lack of patience. So, they each inquired other servants working about. Having gathered enough information, soon they found themselves standing in front of his door. Lining up in their horizontal flank formation, they each cast nervous glances at the door until finally the senior maid shushed them all and gently rapped her knuckle against his door.

"Be quiet!"
"Do you think he's even in his room?"
"He might already be eating or something else!"
"Will you hush?"

Like the many heads of a hydra, some of them bickered and squabbled amongst themselves while the others attempted to quiet them. Speaking in soft tones, the senior maid grew impatient and knocked a second time.

Knock-knock.
The solid sound of a white-gloved knuckle against a wooden door.
@harinezumikouken


I see you. I'm moving along .xD
Marianne's Seven Deadly Lovely Maids


As the seven maids found Captain Fanily, they lined up in a horizontal flank by order of seniority. The youngest and least experienced servants on the outer edges while the oldest and senior most maid stood in the center. Though they didn't realize that they basically blocked Captain Fanily and her guest's direct path, they all then in unison bowed their heads low to them. Practically at a 90 degree angle.

Speaking to the ground, the senior maid spoke up first.
"Dearest Captain Fanily, we have recently all come to the conclusion that we may have caused you undue stress."
The following dialogue then alternated between each different maid.
"For causing you such embarrassment, we have come before to you apologize profusely on behalf of the Delacroix name."
"Please, accept our apology."
"If there's anything we can do for you and the Iron Roses in the future, do not hesitate to ask."
"Although ultimately we are charged with serving directly under Lady Marianne, as her superior officer our services will be extended to you also."
"As such, by proxy, we serve the Iron Roses as a whole."
In unison, they pleaded.
"Do forgive us for our trespasses!"
There, they stayed until Captain Fanily responded to them.
Marianne Delacroix

(*And her Seven Deadly Lovely Maids)



That was enough. Seeing her Captain running off in what could only be assumed to be utter embarrassment was enough to incite Marianne's anger. Just as her maids started to step off and give chase after the little Captain, a crackling cascade of electricity once again wreathed Marianne's body. Her hair floating, raising like the bristling like hackles of a threatened cat, Marianne stomped her foot against the ground. The maids instantly knew they had overstepped their boundaries, acting as unbecoming and rude as they had been. Discrediting the Delacroix from their behavior. Pointing a sharp finger at the ground in front of her, the seven maids hurriedly stood in a line and bowed their heads solemnly as they braced themselves for the tongue lashing Marianne was about to give them all.

And tongue lash them she did.

Her voice echoed and boomed much louder than one would expect to come from the generally soft-spoken and kind woman. Like a rapid and non-stop volley of flaming arrows, Marianne shot off at the mouth as she viciously cursed at them in their native language. One could only imagine what was being said as with each rise in her voice, the seven maids visibly flinched as if her reprimanding of them physically wounded them. Marianne's face red with unbelievable rage as sparks and arcs of electrical power snapped and popped off of her, she appeared absolutely fearsome. Shouting and yelling at them with animated hand motions and gestures as she continued to berate them for a few solid minutes, attracting the attention of countless others. Further deepening the maids' embarrassment as they were scolded like little children.

Once Marianne had vented her frustration on them, standing there in what was essentially her bathrobe, she panted heavily. Her chest rising and falling as her lungs fought to replenish its stores of oxygen. Running a hand through her hair to push stray strands out of her face, she let out a disgruntled growl.

"Zut alors!" Marianne tossed her long black hair dramatically over her shoulder.
The maids all stood silently still.
The ass-chewing had a sobering effect on them, their feverish moods tamed.
"You are all to stand in front of my superior officer and Captain and apologize to her on behalf of the Delacroix name! You are all to say not a word otherwise from this moment on, for the rest of the day! This type of behavior is unacceptable and I will not allow this to become a trend! Me comprenez-vous?"
The maids all bowed their heads lower to Marianne.
In unison, "Yes, Lady Marianne."
Marianne turned away from them and walked towards the bathhouses.
As she walked away, the maids asked.
"Will that be all, Lady Marianne?"
She stopped in her tracks, thinking for a moment.
Turning to look over her shoulder, she quietly uttered.
"Find Sir Garrett and invite him to dinner. I wish to thank him."
The maids all curtsied, "As you wish, Lady Marianne."

In a single file column, the maids then shuffled away to find Captain Fanily.




In the bathhouse, Marianne looked about her to ensure that no one was actively watching her. Not that she was ashamed of her body, but she was just extremely shy. The coast clear, she disrobed and carefully slipped into the warm waters of the bath. By that point, she had calmed down. The electrical side effects of what many called 'mana fissuring' had discharged and dissipated naturally over time, making it safe for her and anyone joining her in the baths. As she completely submerged herself up to her neck, she laid back as best she could and let herself soak. The stresses of the day slowly easing out of her body as her muscles relaxed.

Content, she let out a sigh and closed her eyes. Her long black hair spreading out on the surface of the waters like an inky curtain as she contemplated going to sleep right then and there.

@VitaVitaAR
I'll reply after @harinezumikouken does again.


Which will be shortly after dinner. So within the next hour and a half or so.
@Lucius Cypher

Emerald will wave pompoms around and make silly faces to show her support.


Likewise.
That reminds me. @Write - Everything okay boss?
Oh shit, hey @chukklehed and @Suku! o3o

@Raineh Daze - You made me hungry with your post, damn you.

Also, keep Marianne away from alcohol.
Alright I'm gonna go ahead and have Garrett answer is door in about 4 hours if no one feels like knocking.


I can work my way into having Marianne's maids knock. But, I have class until 1630 PST appx. So, another couple hours or so before I can post.
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