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So...
Has anyone started thinking about their character's Special Place, yet? You all saw it in the OP and now it's time to start talking about it!
I've made Sawaru's Special Place. What's yours?
@Hillan
Great post, you've given me a lot to think about and quite frankly I have to say that I agree on multiple accounts after my first reading.
Why he didn't stay in Konoha.
I buy this reasoning. This is exactly the kind of reasoning I was after when I started to poke you about it. It's great to see what the plan behind this was.
The Hat has made me aware of one thing though, and I think that the best way to deal with it is to simply be honest.
Whenever I get an Uchiha/Sharingan-user in my games I get suspicious.
That's the long and the short of it. It's not personal on any level, I've just seen the Sharingan being misused/powergamed too much, and as a GM who wants to be serious and tell a story it's quite frankly depressing to have a player go for ultimate power and not giving a crap about the story. It has happened too many times. This is why I've been poking you about stuff, I want to see if you're really serious with your choice of character(and the stuff that comes with it).
The thing that made Hat's radar go off is two lines in your reply to this.
"However, I am a fan of liking to at least imagine we, as fans can create more 3dimensional characters than the Shounin source" and "I'm looking to produce a very shounen character in Aro."
They do seem to contradict each other, which sucks because I believe that the level of insight you've provided means that you are a serious player and want to make this work. This might all be a wording-thing. I get it, I'm a second language English-user and words are hard sometimes even for natives.
Telling a different story.
I get the different perspective. It's original and a great concept. I think it's very creative and all that.
I'm just afraid that since the character is not on the same page as the others he might get alienated for it. I think I've stated all the arguments I can and if you still think it's a good idea then I can only wish you good luck with it.
It's great to get more insight into the inner workings of the character, small details like that makes a big difference. Still, I can't really see it. No, it's not that I don't see it, I just think that this needs more weight.
I mean, the character was born in a time of chaos, only the other clansmen could be trusted. Then he witnessed the biggest change in recent history (forming the villages) and went to war with his new allies to defend their new home.
Frozen, waiting... Thawed, comes back, sees that everyone he once knew is dead... And leaves?
I mean, he fought for this, he saw the negotiations with the Senju for it, he helped build it, he went to an organized war with an old enemy as an ally to defend it.
It is the one place that he would be connected to the strongest, despite the change of time, and yet he decides to go live in a dump up north where he was nursed for a while? I mean, why? Why would Gobi feel more alike a home than the village he risked his life for? This should be a huge thing!
Leaving stuff behind.
Yes, this character did that, and that is actually part of the problem. He has already cut all the ties with his old world. Everyone is dead, new people live in his house, he's gone up north. He's not tied to Gobi, he wasn't born there, he has no fond childhood memories of the place. The house he stays in might be a hotel, not the house his parents built.
When he leaves he might think "Yeah, that was that village, time to go." He won't be scared, he was/is a proven warrior.
What I'm trying to say is that this isn't you average Naruto-game where it's all about kicking ass in the most spectacular way possible. We want some real drama here, and having characters that are connected in the trauma of leaving everything behind means that they will have things to talk, cry and laugh about that everyone knows about. This character is on a whole other level. When the others are talking about life back in the village he'll have very little to add because he didn't live there. When he talks about his trauma the others won't be able to comprehend it because they've never been close to anything like it. Even after leaving the village they are still connected to each other. It's apples and oranges.
He has to unlearn everything he ever learned.
I'm not sure what you meant to say with this, but I'll try to sort it out.
Just to be clear, after the villages were formed the world hasn't changed a whole lot.
Sure, specifics have changed. Specific people, alliances, techniques, events, buildings, training practices, rituals... Yeah, it was a while ago, things change. But the core principles does not.
He has seen real ninja v ninja battle. He knows what it is like to have an enemy for a neighbour that you need to befriend and keep secrets from. He knows what kind of a place a real hidden village is. Just the fact that he has spent that kind of time out in the world has given him a kind of confidence and resolve that the rest of the cast lacks.
Chakra control.
Yes the world was a different place back then with other priorities. I just thought it was strange that he'd learned B-rank techniques (let's face it, B-rank is starting to get pretty advanced) before he'd learned to utilize proper chakra control. It seemed like he was doing it the wrong way around. Me and hat talked about this one for a while and eventually agreed to disagree because we both had valid points from different perspectives. Mine would be that this is "backwards", but hey, if it works...
Thawed out more recently.
Yeah, that would actually make it worse. That would mean that you're even less connected to Gobi.
Being frozen earlier (in life).
That would actually be at least a step in the right direction as it would remove some of his experience fighting and interacting with the world. But I would actually like to see him thawed earlier as well to give him the chance to really connect to and feel at home in Gobi so that he can feel the same thing that the others will when they leave.
Sharingan.
Yeah, it's the elephant in the room. Might as well go through with it.
I see that you realise what kind of hassle the Sharingan can be in RPs. It's simply a bag of great stuff that you can get for free, and with a little work and a lot of talent you can basically become the Highlander. I mean, just look at the wiki page.
But in order to asses the situation properly I have to ask... What is your intention with the sharingan? I mean, you have a pretty great character concept even without it.
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Renegeedo is the Japanese way of saying the English word Renegade.
They basically just ad "o" to the end of a word when speaking an English word in the middle of a Japanese sentence.
The Japanese word for renegade is Haikyou. Even Ronin is more appropriate for the setting.
Renendo is a Spanish last name. And a town, I believe.
Halvtand is refining the rest of our discussion about your character, so he'll post that when he's ready.
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Not late at all. Jump as much as you want.
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