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9 yrs ago
Happy Thanksgiving!
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9 yrs ago
When you see that you no longer owe anymore posts and have nothing to write *insanity ensues* Aaaaah!HSkjhaksjhdjf
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10 yrs ago
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10 yrs ago
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Hello all. I am an experienced writer who is writing my own fiction stories on the side. I can role play any genre. What I love most is being able to go-all-out when weaving tales with other writers. It just makes the story more interesting, so I can't wait to write with you. :)

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Character Name: Alexander Salzar
Alias: -None-
Age: 21
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 80kg
Hair Color: Dark brown but there is a hint of white at the roots. It's as if the hair itself darkens the longer it gets.
Eye Color: Normal brown, human eyes. But when he uses magic they turn slightly purple. Most only see it when it either gets pointed out for them or when they focus on his eyes when it happens.
Visual Description:

Written Description: Alexander often appears pretty clean and well shaven and such. Though his clothes aren't particularly flashy, they certainly are practical. Unlike robes. They are also always absolutely spotless. He makes sure of that. Alex himself is by far not strong, nor as lean as thieves or barbarians would be. Though he isn't frail as the common wizard, nor as old. He has a scar on the back of his right hand from a blade. He keeps his body devoided of any gold and keeps his copper orb in a satchel on his hip.
Level: 1
Class: Sorcerer (Sorcerers, unlike wizards, have a natural aptitude for magic. Them harnessing magic is akin to a poet writing a poem.)
Abilities:
1. Mana blast - The sorcerer concentrates mana in front of him and releases the violent energy in an instant. It's a short ranged spell (How far in meters can it reach?) with devastating effect. The size, as well as the power of the blast, depends on how long the Sorcerer has been channeling mana & how capable a sorcerer is at channeling Mana. (You should know how capable your character is at channeling mana. He's level 1. So what do you think?)
2. Mana orb - The sorcerer gathers Mana around his enchanted Orb. Allowing the Mana to remain stable as it clings to the object. It can throw said orb for explosive effect. Again, power depends on how capable the sorcerer is at gathering Mana, as well as how long he/she was channeling. (Same comments as above.)

Skills:
1. Beast knowledge - Alexander knows about the many beasts of Bridgewater, as well as whatever roams the fields & forests around it. This knowledge translates into knowing what beast may drop what resources, as well as where it may be the weakest. This applies to wild creatures (like wolves) and any related creatures (like giant rats). However, it does NOT apply to humans, demons, mystical creatures, etc etc.
2. Alchemy - Give him a cauldron and the required materials and he'll whip you up whatever potion you want. One that enhances the mind, one that makes you stronger or one that knits the flesh together faster. The opposite is possible too. The fastest way to kill a man is by making sure his heart stops without even making a wound. Aside from those serious businesses, it's also pretty profitable when you learn how to make potions that just get someone high as a kite. (He's a level 1 character in a RPG. Therefore, his Alchemy is going to be very basic to just making basic health potions, basic mana potions, and antidote. He will have to RP in-game making these tonics each time and collecting the ingredients for them. Whatever you deem the ingredients to be. This has to be believable. I don't want people pulling any potions, tonic, etc. out of their bum.)

Weapon: Orb - The preferred weapon of the Sorcerer is an orb. From when they were little, most Sorcerers learned how to levitate tiny rocks or objects. Most learned that an orb quickly becomes a sling without a rope attached. Which is how they commonly fight when someone gets too close and they can't gather Mana. Sorcerer's their spells often depend on the Orb so there is often a built in safety making it return after used.

Personality: Alex is by all accounts a bit of a hard-ass. He stands on politeness and seriousness. Though he will laugh at a joke, don't expect him to make any himself. During job, he tries to be the epitome of professionalism. That all lasts until you get him drunk. Becuase then he's as loud as a dwarf and as foul-mouth like a sailor. However, while his is polite and such, he is also pretty greedy and his only loyalty is to money. He ain't an idiot thought. You'll have to pay him a lot if you want him to break any laws. And even then he needs to be sure he won't get caught. All in all, he ain't stupid.
Quirks: Greedy, believes that black cats actually bring luck.
Likes: Wealth, magical power, having a great pub party, influence
Dislikes: Poverty, powerlessness, barfights
Inventory: Empty


I made my comments in yellow and marked the areas in red.
@Legion02The Guild/Party Leader chooses the quests for people to complete. The guild leader still needs to be elected though. I might have to make it an OOC election because the shenanigans in game are distracting everyone from what needs to be discussed. But, yes, you can keep your guy. He'll just be in Third Party, which means he is number 3 in priority for quest dibs. Whatever is left over, and you better hope it's the 1 person quest that is, he'll be able to have whatever is left over. But...stay tuned for my review of your CS. That's coming next.
@CyraniaHe's quite the barbarian isn't he?
@NanjueYou have to get your CS approved all over again before you drop it in the character thread. I don't know if the GMs approved your character behind the scenes, but I'm just letting you know because I made the same mistake by just dropping it in the Character Tab. They want you to drop it in the OOC first to be reviewed.
@Legion02If you make a Mage, then that makes a Third Party because Second Party already has a mage. Second Party needs an Archer and a Tank.
@AshevelendarI hope she's not an alien because she sounds like one and those are not allowed. I also said no Original Races. Please read over the CS and its rules very closely.
Name: No
Level: 1
Race: Dragon
Class: Barbarian
Date/Time: Day 1 / Morning
Location: Post ends behind the bar counter with Jezebel
Tagging: Open, @Fetzen@Vec@Halvtand Mentioned: @Cyrania@JackalopeLove@Ayemdar

No glanced back at the gargoyle who denied having taken his wallet. The two thieves didn’t seem interested in his ordeal and he hadn’t seen them take it from him. He knew thieves were good but he doubted the ones before him were that good. A card magician came out of nowhere, wanting to add more chaos and banter that was already swirling around the guild table. The noise was frustrating him for he was desperately trying to concentrate in order to think about where he had lost it.

A knight came before him, having seen his distress and attempted to comfort him.

Calm down, man, you are making a spectacle of yourself!...Settle yourself, please, I have yet to face a crook so hell-bent on death as to even think of robbing someone who carries around enough metal to supply a smith for a year. Call on your memory and you will surely find your money left beside the bed in which you spent the night.

No listened to the knight’s words of wisdom, and checking his room hadn’t seemed like a bad idea.

Do you really think that whoever stole it – if it was even stolen and you’re not forgetting where you put it – would reveal themselves? Oh yeah! I did it!

No briefly glared over at Kai before he told the knight on a grumble, “I’ll go check my chambers.”

The barbarian glanced over to his great sword, grasped its handle, and raised it to lock it into the harness at his back. He left the rowdiness that surrounded the table and stared up the stairs, starting to feel a little silly for having gotten so riled up. His coin purse could easily still be in the room and perhaps even next to the bed as Seth declared.

When No fished the iron key out of his pouch, he unlocked the door and stepped in the bedroom that was stale and musky with several smells that most would find unpleasant. His golden eyes roamed the room. The scattered sheets, the bear fur covers spilling over the side, the bottles of alcohol all over the floor. Hell, there was even a keg. No blushed a little and ran a hand back through his hair. He had drank a lot.

Stepping further into the room, he saw a large blood spot on the bed with shattered glass around it. The dragon’s hand went to the spot of dried blood on his forehead where Gwendolyn had healed him. Rubbing the spot, while his mind was deep in recollection, he was gradually starting to remember last night. He heard the smash of a bottle echo through his conscience, and then the world spun and his vision sank into darkness. Smashed bottle…the tavern whore…

His nose wrinkled like the snout of an enraged beast. No grasped the feather-stuffed mattress and flipped it. Feathers scattered about the room. There was a chamber pot beneath the bed, but there was nothing else. Not even the chime of coin had struck the floor. He walked over to the night stand and pulled out the drawers to find them bare. Of course they would be, for he hadn’t used them. He had removed his gear right on the floor. It had to have been the whore!

The dragon snarled and stormed out of his room, stomping the mattress on the way out. “YOU THIEVING WITCHES! YOU DARE STEAL FROM A DRAGON?”

Jezebel, who was cooking in the back, sauntered out of the kitchen with a ladle in her hand. She was making a thick breakfast rabbit stew with some hard-boiled eggs thrown in. The guild had gathered early, but she knew the regular crowd would be in soon. The blonde bombshell stepped behind the counter with a hand upon her hip, wearing her wench’s gown that did a mild job hiding the bounty of her bosom. She watched the barbarian ominously descend the stairwell—his eyes were glowing a little or her eyes were playing tricks on her.

“What ye roarin’ about? Ye gave Boo-Boo a good time last night, I ‘eard. She could barely walk outta ‘ere. Were ye not satisfied?” Jezebel asked.

No didn’t even stop and Jezebel’s blue eyes shined with fear when his large hand was suddenly about her thin and delicate throat. He bent the waitress back over the counter. She attempted to swing the ladle damp with soup at him before he snagged her wrist and pinned her arm against the countertop. Knowing that it was hopeless to try and escape the barbarian’s clutches, Jezebel hung her head over the counter. Her golden locks tumbled like a curtain as her eyelids hung with little amusement.

“Don’t **** with me, witch!” No growled. “I know she stole my gold!”

“Yeh? What proof ye got?” she asked.

A sadistic grin cracked on No’s face as he leaned over her and enlightened her about himself: “You know, girl…I used to be a very…very ferocious creature. I killed your heroes, I killed your legends, and I killed your gods. Do you want to know what I did to thieves who stole from my lair?”

The dragon answered his own question by gripping her throat. The sudden vice-like pressure, closing off her pipes caused Jezebel to gasp and panic. She kicked and squirmed, trying to wrench her arm free of his grip. No’s eyes were a sanguine-red as he watched her struggle and gasp. This moment took him back. It took him back to the power he once had before he was reduced to his human shell. No one dare try to make a full of him, insult him, and live to commit such offenses.

“Slowly…” No told her. “I can make you suffer like this for a long time. So you better tell me. Did she steal my gold, and how are you going to pay me back?”

Tears welled in Jezebel’s eyes as she hopelessly clawed at his muscled arm that felt like solid-rock.

“A-A (gasp) AYE!” she cried.
@Bright_OpsJust make it three uses and not "2 to 3" because that's not concrete, and you're golden.
@VecI never suspected he was in werewolf form period lol. He never said he was.
@Bright_OpsStupid things? So me making sure that players like you aren't sending me an over-powered, loopholed profile is stupid? You know I decide if you even RP here right? I wouldn't be calling what the GM has you do "stupid." It's quite childish. I am under no obligation to keep you here if I feel you're not fit or mature to go through this game.

Three uses for humans is fine. Add that in.
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