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I haven't logged into this for so long so I guess this merits some words of inspiration.... Benis.
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Why are we still here... just to suffer.
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Come from NS, still doing RP's there. So far enjoying myself in this site.

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Urses Mallory


Urses pressed himself tight behind a corner, gut burning with every breath. He refused to lower the rifle, the pain only fed his anger. His knuckles were white around the stock.

“Do not move!” he called to the others. “Carter, you hear me, you idiot! Throw the weapons out first. Then come out slow with your hands up. You do that, you might live long enough to see a cell!”

His eyes flicked toward the others, the Inburian soldier and the lady who carried authority in her voice he had not come to expect and then the old captain trying to make a case for a thief. It was too many opinions, too many questions and too much talking. Urses did not care, he had been ordered to guard this cargo and someone had tried to steal it.

He lifted his chin and barked again, louder, forcing his command through the chaos.

“Carter. Surrender, now!”




James E. Carter


Carter’s vision pulsed with the beat of his heart. He looked down at his arm and did not like what he saw, blood was still flowing down. Maybe it was not fatal, but it was hard to ignore any longer.

He forced himself to breathe, looking around frantically. Then he saw it, the cargo ramp lever near the bulkhead, half-hidden behind a stack of crates and a coil of rope that helped tether the airship to the ground.

He moved quietly, crouched down and reached it and gripped the handle tightly, then he yanked.

The mechanism groaned and the ramp began to lower with a heavy metal whine. Cold air rushed in and daylight with it, the sudden brightness was like a flare being thrown into a dark void.

Carter holstered his pistol and showed one hand out to the open lane of light, still taking cover against the stacks of crates.

“Enough!” he yelled out, still in cover, “I’m not here to steal this damn metal for myself. I’m here because there’s no one else in those meetings who gives a rat’s ass about what we were promised.”

He swallowed, trying to find the right words.

“I want one crate, just one. A finder’s fee for keeping this ship in the sky and getting that gold out of enemy hands, I'm making sure the people who bled for it are not thrown aside once the uniforms start stamping papers. That’s it.”

He paused for a moment, the blood from his arm began to drip down to the metal flooring beneath him.

“I’m not going to shoot my way out and I’m not trying to kill anyone. But I'm not going to stand here and let the whole venture get swallowed by ‘orders from Grendell’ while the crew goes home empty.”

He took a careful glance the ramp’s edge, his good hand was still up. The rope lines were there, tethering and stabilizers the ship to ground. Carter gulped again.

“If you’re set on hanging me for this,” he said, breath tight, “then you can do it after I’m off the ship.”
Urses Mallory


Pain burned intensely through Urses’s gut as he staggered back, his world narrowing into a struggling breath and an guttural rage. He slammed the butt of the rifle against the deck to steady himself, teeth bared as he sucked in air that refused to come easy. Every muscle screamed, but the discipline of a soldier within him helped him up.

He worked the bolt hard.

Clack-chunk. Clack-chik

A fresh round seated into the chamber and Urses raised the rifle again, shouldering it tightly, his eyes scanning between the crates looking for the fugitive.

“You stupid bastard…” he snarled, voice breaking into a rasp as he tried (and failed) to sound composed, “You’ve just signed your own death warrant, Mainer. Should’ve stayed a hero instead of a thief!”

He advanced a step, then another, rifle sweeping low and ready despite the pain surging at him. Then a pair of voices echoed from the entryway.

Aden

“Inburian Army. Everyone freeze!!!!”


Giogoula Giorgios

"Whoever fired that rifle, come out with your hands up!"


Urses halted, chest heaving. Relief flared for half a heartbeat before pride and anger wrestled it down. He backed toward the light, his rifle visible as he revealed himself to Aden and another person, a woman with a revolver.

“Attempted theft,” Urses said sharply, breathing hard, “That mainer tried to steal the imperial gold. He resisted order and attacked me.” He gestured briefly to his abdomen with the rifle barrel. "He's armed and still inside.”




James E. Carter


Carter pressed his back against the crate, jaw clenched as blood ran warm down his arm and soaked into his sleeve. The pain came in waves, an intense burning sensation followed by a cooling off with adrenaline keeping his hand steady around the Harlan’s grip.

He breathed slow through his nose, fighting the cold sweat pouring throughout his body.

Idiot… idiot…

He hadn’t meant for it to go this far. The kid was just a soldier doing his job, same as he once had been.

Then his voice called out.

“You stupid bastard…” Urses' voice echoed through the hold, “You’ve just signed your own death warrant, Mainer. Should’ve stayed a hero instead of a thief!”

Carter’s expression hardened. Death warrant, he repeated to himself in his head. His fingers tightened slightly on the trigger of his gun. If Urses found him again, there wouldn’t be room for restraint, he knew that now. He didn’t want to kill anyone but he would not die here either.

Then new voices cut through the hold. Aden, followed by another voice, female by the sound of it but strangely authoritative, it definitely was not Zoe's.

He managed to hear Urses explaining what had happened.

Carter stayed low, silent, breath shallow. Alright, he thought grimly. Now it’s everyone’s mess.

Itzi Ku


Itzi ran. Her breath shallowed and ragged as cobblestones clapped beneath her boots. The city rushed past in streaks of color and banners, flags of kingdoms she barely cared as all she could think about was Carter’s face when he’d bolted for the ship. The panic in his eyes and the shot that had ranged out soon afterwards.

This was wrong, all of it. All because of that stupid gold. She then skidded to a halt so suddenly she nearly slammed into a lamppost, catching herself with a sharp gasp.

Post Captain Le Marinier


In a new clean uniform, the fit was a little out but better than he could expect on this time line. He saw the sun still shining over the city and the shade cast by the great air ship masts. He had done his duty to pass on what he knew and had seen, the whole battle for the fort, the escape, the valley, the gold. So much had happened in a short time.

He left the embassy feeling lighter with a sea bag, a promise of new clothes and access to contacts and links back home again. He would have to send the young private down to pass on what he could add, what could help them to make the best of what was a growing and ever difficult time.


A man stepped out of a building just ahead, in a seemingly fresh uniform.

“Captain!” she blurted, recognizing him a split second too late. “Le Marinier! Carter’s in trouble. On the ship. They’re going to take the gold and—”

She didn’t wait for an answer as her eyes darted to the one place she hoped to find help, the Embassy of the Commonwealth of Ardell.

Turning on her heel, Itzi sprinted again, straight for the building with the blue-and-gold flag hanging over its doors.

She bursted inside, nearly colliding with two guards in crisp navy blue uniforms who looked up in shock, rifles in hand.

“I need the ambassador,” she said breathlessly, half demand, half plea. “Now! It’s an emergency. One of your citizens is about to get himself killed.”

The room froze, the soldiers glanced to one another before one of them looked back to Itzi.

"Come with me..."

James E. Carter


The meeting wrapped itself up with polite words and softer hands than Carter cared for. Musings of hospitality and awaiting instructions. All of it rang the same in his ears, he’d had his fill of that kind of language.

Pity for Arkadios and the Inburian cause ebbed as he rose from his chair. War or no war, neutral or not, Carter knew exactly where this road led if he let others steer it. Precious resources such as gold had a way of becoming state property the moment it sat still long enough.

He offered a brief nod to the room, then turned and walked out before anyone could think to stop him.

Outside, the breeze hit him with a scent of coal smoke and morning damp. Folks walked around him, carts rolling, soldiers boots marched past, life going on as if a fortune hadn’t just floated in not long ago. Carter set a brisk pace toward the port, his blue coat pulled tight, mind racing ahead.

If the Mittel commanders took custody of the gold there’d be no bargaining after the fact, Arkadios certainly was in no capacity for it. Finder’s fees didn’t survive paperwork, he’d seen that trick pulled before, it didn’t matter how many civilians bled to make it happen. If these slimy officers wanted it, they'd take it no matter what.

A flickering thought of Zoe crossed his thoughts. She was a clever one, always smiling and with a plan rolling on her head by the looks of it. But perhaps it was just that, look… or maybe she had something in mind? She hadn't dragged them all into this on charity alone so whatever she was planning, it wouldn’t involve waiting patiently either. Maybe she’d already made her move. Maybe she was counting on the same confusion he was trying to outrun.

For half a block, he considered the Ardellian embassy. Make his claim for damages and perhaps get protection and a flag to stand behind and enforce his claim, but then he thought of the paperwork involved. Too fucking slow. He thought.

First things first.

The zeppelin mast came into view through the canopy of buildings, the great shape of the ship looming above the docks like a massive stormcloud. Carter didn’t slow down, whatever arguments were coming, he wanted to have them aboard his ship, with the gold still where he could see it.

One way or another, he wasn’t letting his fate get filed away under pending instructions.




Itzi Ku


Itzi had caught herself smiling at nothing for the third time that morning. Nuwa’s laugh still echoed somewhere in the back of her head, the way he’d spun bottles and coins through the air like gravity was a suggestion rather than a rule. The warmth of fancy liqour flowing down her throat, the sway of the deck, the reckless joy of it all. Ridiculous, really, how a stranger who’d quite literally fallen through her roof would stay in her mind so much.

She shook her head and forced her attention back to the present. The ship loomed above her, vast and scarred, like some wounded beast being coaxed back to its feet. Crews moved along the hull and gondola, Mitteland engineers shouting measurements, riggers hauling lines, sparks flashing where plates were being cut and fitted.

Itzi folded her arms, watching it all with awe. She’d flown ships before, smaller nimbler ones, bht nothing like this. At least not only now, and she was also overseeing repairs she barely understood, trusting strangers because there wasn’t much choice.

It was impressive, she had to admit. The Mittel knew their craft. She was mid-thought when hurried footsteps caught her attention.

It was Carter. He approached at a brisk pace, his coat half-buttoned, eyes wide and restless like he’d just seen death in the eyes or something worse.

“Hey,” she greeted, pushing herself off a crate, “You’re back already. How’d the meeti-”

“Has anyone been here for the gold?!” he cut her off.

The question caught her dazzled.

“What? No,” she said, frowning. “Why would they? They’re still inventorying the damage, and-”

“We don’t have time,” Carter said, already glancing past her toward the ship, “We need to move, now!”

Itzi blinked, her face incredulous, “Move? Carter, slow down, we’re docked… it's a friendly port. No one’s shooting at us, what’s got you so wound up?”

He exhaled sharply, scrubbing a hand through his beard, “I should’ve done this earlier, that’s on me. But if we wait then it means we lose out on what's ours.”

She opened her mouth to argue, then noticed movement at the edge of the port. A column of soldiers rounding the corner, Mittel uniforms by the looks of it.

She nodded toward them, “Carter… you seeing that?”

His jaw tightened, “Yeah.”

“They’re probably just here to secure the dock,” she said, though even to her ears it sounded like a bad lie to oneself. “Look, if you’re worried about claims, the Ardellian embassy’s only a few streets aw-”

“No,” he snapped, stepping past her. “That’s a dead end, we do this ourselves.”

He grabbed a crowbar from a nearby crate, "distract them if you can, I'll make sure we get what we deserve!”

Without another word he started for the gangway up the airship.

“Carter!” Itzi called after him, he was already out of sight.

The soldiers were closer now. Close enough that she could see the set of their faces, the way their eyes kept drifting toward the zeppelin.

She stayed where she was, torn between following him and doing the one sensible thing left.

Her gaze shifted toward the city beyond the docks, then back to the ship.

“Idiot,” she muttered, already turning away.




James E. Carter


Carter moved carefully, slipping back aboard the ship with a crouched pose and slow steps. The zeppelin was alive with activity, Mitteland engineers crawling outside, voices echoing down corridors, tools ringing against steel. He timed his steps between them, ducked through the corridors, taking careful turns to avoid being seen.

One gondola, then another. Down a narrow ladder. The deeper he went, the quieter it became.

The cargo section was ahead, dimmer than the rest as always, lamps turned the atmosphere into an orange tint. Carter slowed, hand tight on the crowbar and his other hand resting on his holstered handgun, he hoped not to need it. As he crept in furtjer he heard no voices of steps. There seemed to have been no sentry posted yet. Either they hadn’t gotten that far or they assumed no one would be stupid enough to try this.

He stepped inside. The crates were still there, filling the hold in orderly rows and each carrying the promise of either ruin or salvation. Carter went straight for the nearest one and quickly jammed the tool under the lid and leaned into it until the wood groaned and split.

Gold bars packed tight, their dull yellow glow catching the lamplight and throwing it back at Carter's eyes. For a moment he just stared, breath shallow. One crate, he thought, one out of hundreds. Enough to settle accounts, make things right, more than enough to give the others their share as well.

He shut the lid again and braced himself, muscles straining as he dragged the crate free. It barely budged at first as he grunted, he adjusted his grip and hauled it inch by inch toward a nearby cart. Sweat beaded at his brow. The thing was heavy as sin, but he then managed to get it onto the cart. He let out a tired sigh and readied to move, that’s when he heard it.

A soft, unmistakable click behind him. Metal on metal.

“Put the crowbar down,” a voice said evenly from the shadows.

Carter froze.




Urses Mallory


The party had come and gone in muffled echoes through the bulkheads. Music, laughter, the clink of glass. None of it mattered, Urses had not left his post snd would not do so until he was properly relieved, the cargo was his responsibility. After Inbur, after watching discipline collapse into panic and panic into slaughter, that much still meant something to him.

He stood in the dry provisions alcove, rifle slung, smoking slowly. The cigarette tasted like cheap paper and worse tobacco, but it steadied his hands. His thoughts drifted far from the steel ribs of the airship to the salty air, grey stone streets and the great water ships, back to Favis. A world that still made sense.

At least for now. The war didn’t feel contained anymore, it felt like a tide creeping outward and swallowing borders. He had hoped that the Isles would be spared, that he’d go home with Captain Le Mariner when this was over. But some part of him knew better, a war like this wouldn't stop politely just because he wanted it so.

A noise then cut through his thoughts, it sounded like wood scraping and metal shifting.

Urses frowned, flicked the cigarette away, and crushed it under his boot. He stepped out of the alcove, rifle coming free of his shoulder almost by instinct.

Down the hold, a figure moved between the crates. It didnt seem like one of the Mitten workers. One crate had been dragged out of line, half-mounted onto a small cart. The man held a crowbar in one hand.

Urses worked the bolt. The sharp clack echoed unmistakably through the hold.

The figure froze.

“Put the crowbar down,” Urses said, voice level, rifle already shouldere and aimed at the figure.

The man didn’t turn or run. Just stood there, shoulders tense.

“I’m just taking my share,” the man said calmly, though clearly tense. “That’s all. I am not stealing.”

Urses advanced slowly, rifle never wavering. He got close enough now to recognize the coat and the man's complexion.

It was the Ardellian, Carter.

“Drop it,” Urses said again. “Hands on your head.”

Carter finally turned his head just enough to glance back, crowbar still in hand.

“Come on,” he said, frustration bleeding through his voice, “You know me, you know what we did. This ship didn’t fly itself… You didn't escape Inbur by yourself… I’m not robbing anyone… I’m taking what’s owed.”

“That’s not your call,” Urses replied. His finger rested along the trigger guard. “And it’s not mine either. I was ordered to guard this cargo. That’s what I’m doing.”

“You think the generals are gonna remember the crew, or you?” Carter snapped, “You think widows get paid in gratitude? I’m doing this for all of us.”

Urses didn’t waver, his finger shifted to the trigger at that moment, “Drop the crowbar now. Hands on your head.”

For a moment, it looked like Carter would comply. His shoulders sagged slightly as the crowbar shifted in his grip.

“Alright,” Carter said, “Alright.”

He moved as if to let it fall, but then he hurled it back.

The crowbar spun end over end and struck Urses hard in the abdomen. Pain flared through him as the impact knocked the breath from his lungs.

His rifle went off as he fell. The shot cracked through the hold, deafening in the enclosed space, the round slamming into steel as Carter dove aside. Urses staggered on the ground, boots scraping, fighting to get back upright as pain and adrenaline collided.

The crate cart rattled. Gold bars clanged against one another and in that instant, the quiet order of the hold shattered completely.

This is intriguing. I'll see about making an app when I have free time.
Vitiafa of Endiohon



“Lopez, send some more robots to the passenger boarding corridor as fast as you can. Ease the pressure on the crowd.” she ordered. "And we need more hands to guide those coming aboard."

She paused for a moment, clicking off her own communicator and taking a deep breath. She turned her head to face the quessir at the helm. “Keep that tunnel open until we need to crush a bug with it.”


Mark A. Lopez




“Engineering copies,” Mark muttered into the headset, not even looking up as he shoved another warning window aside. “I’ll push what I can. Just don’t expect miracles.”

He kicked over to the drone panel and dragged three more units into the active queue. The interface lagged, too many manual threads, too much going on at once—but he forced them into sync anyway.

“Alright… single-follow mode,” he grumbled, thumb tapping through configuration menus that should have been automatic.

The lead drone chirped to life and rolled forward, the others clattering along in a loose formation behind it. Their cameras relayed flickering, shaky feeds as they entered the upper corridors. Civilians rushed past them, panicked and disorganized, but the machines carved out a thin bubble of space just by being big, loud, and obviously not human.

“Boarding corridor, follow the person in front of you, go by the side, keep moving!" Mark's voice came through the drones speakers.

The first bug appeared at a junction, mandibles wide, legs scraping metal. Mark forced his focus into the control link and rammed the drone forward. The steel claw caught the creature center-mass, slammed it into the wall, and crushed it in two jerking pumps.

He didn’t breathe until the feed stopped shaking.

He logged onto another drone in the back, chasing motion and into anothed Metacer, shoving its claw straight into the thing’s mouth, and firing its flare. The bug lit up like a bonfire, thrashing out of frame before collapsing in a smoking heap.

“That… works,” Mark muttered, wiping sweat from his jaw.

He forced three more drones to split down different branches, herding civilians toward the ship and creating pockets where people could breathe without getting trampled.

“Vitiafa, you should see them on your end now,” he said, shifting to her channel. “They’re clearing the choke points. I can keep this up as long as the grid holds, but I’ve gotta hop between units manually. One drone at a time. The rest just mimic it. If you need a drone somewhere specific, shout. Otherwise I’m playing whack-a-bug down here.”

James E. Carter



Carter sat stiffly in his chair, his hands clasped loosely before him, the muscle arpund his cheekbones tightened with every new revelation Swaiger delivered.

Fifteen thousand dead. The Quinians cut off. The Imperial Family taken. Only a single princess unaccounted for, likely dead.

He had told himself a hundred times over that this wasn’t his war, that whatever happened east of the Evig wasn’t his to shoulder. But watching Arkadios, the usually unflappable and composed officer, visibly shaken by the news…

It hit him harder than he expected. The old soldier looked like a man who had been told his family had died, for all intends and purposes he had been told just that. Carter felt a heaviness settle in him. Maybe it wad sympathy, maybe the echo of what he had buried back home when the Confederacy’s guns had fallen silent over scorched farmland.

Goddamn mess, he thought. All of it.

He cleared his throat lightly, easing forward in his seat.

“Colonel,” he said, raising hos gloved hand slightly, “any word on the Commonwealth’s stance in all this? Last I heard, they were keeping out of Old Continent affairs, is that still the memorandum of the day?”
Jair son of Rensar



The road to Ealdormuda wound down from the high ridges in long, dust-bitten turns, its path basking with the day’s hot sun. By the time Jair reached the harbor’s edge, the scent of the sea was heavy in the air, the shipyards were visible, he had not been near the sea in many years now. For a moment he remained still as he looked onto the ever expanding and neverending sight of the sea. Soon enough his arrival into town did not go unnoticed, a lone rider of the Prathmava drew eyes wherever he went and the white headband with blue embroidery marked him plain as one of Tridanu’s steppe folk. He met the stares with the same stoic gaze he’d worn half his life.

Yade’s hooves clicked against the cobbles, her breath rising in pale wisps. She tossed her head once and gave a low, impatient snort.

“I know,” Jair murmured, “Too many walls.”

The mare huffed again, Jair answered with a faint smirk, the pair rode on through the town past dozens of curious and perhaps suspicious glares until they arrived to the docks.

Two locals sat on a bench by the roadside, pipes glowing dimly in the dark. Dockmen by the look of them, their rough hands, oil-stained tunics and faces weathered by salt were dead giveaways. Their talk dwindled as the rider approached and Jair halted Yade a few paces off and leaned slightly in his saddle.

“You’ve seen strangers come through lately?” His tone was leveled but courteous, as much as a lone steppe rider could be, “Not sailors... travelers. The kind who don’t linger long.”

The older man took his pipe from his mouth and squinted up at him, “Strangers, aye. Plenty of ’em since the storms eased. You’ll find your sort inside the inn up a-ways round that corner there,” he said, jerking the stem of his pipe toward the harbor inn. His companion exhaled a slow ribbon of smoke and muttered something that drew a crooked grin from the first.

Jair inclined his head in a silent thanks and nudged Yade forward. Behind him, the two resumed their murmured talk.

The rider guided his mare around the corner, stopping where the shadows from the eaves fell deep. He dismounted without tying her. Yade shifted, her tail flicking once as she looked toward the inn door.

“Patience,” he said softly, running a gloved hand down her neck. She whickered and once more he felt the echo of her thought, wordless prod of amusement that made him shake his head.

He stayed there a while, watching the lantern-lit windows, the silhouettes passing inside. The call of treasure and Turakindi ruins had reached far, but it was the draw of something else that held him, the hope, however faint that somewhere in the bones of the past, a man might find absolution. But habit born of years on the road urged caution; walk into a den of unknown blades and tongues and you might not walk out again.

Yade stamped once, as if in agreement.

After a time, two travelers passed him on their way into the inn. One was a tall man in foreign leathers and another cloaked figure whose gait seemed that of someone who was of a commanding stature. They vanished through the door and the hum of voices rose briefly to greet them. Jair exhaled, swung the reins loosely in his hand, and gave Yade one last look.

“Wait here,” he told her. She met his gaze, ears twitching once as she then lowered her head in understanding.

With that, Jair stepped from the street wall into the inn’s light, the scent of salt and smoke following him through the door. The inn was heavy with smoke and the smell of old ale. Jair’s eyes adjusted quickly to the dim lamplight, picking out faces along the rows of chairs and tables as the noise of laughter and talk dulled to a murmur when the door closed behind him.

It wasn’t hard to find the ones he sought. A winged woman with amber hair sat with a Firindorian of striking grace, a pair of men, one foreign and one scarred and, most peculiar of all, a scale-skinned traveler whose voice hissed softly as he finished speaking. The others listened with curiosity rather than fear. That told Jair enough.

He lingered for a moment by the door, brushing rain from his cloak before stepping forward. His boots made little sound on the wood as he crossed the floor and stopped a respectful distance from the table.

“Sounds like you already have one guide,” he said, his voice even as his gaze flicked briefly toward the man who had called himelf Vashra, then to the rest of the company. “I won’t pretend to know all of Morgador… but I’ve ridden near every other corner of this realm once or twice, at least. If you’re heading into mountains or ruins, you’ll want a man who’s done more than follow roads.”

He rested one hand lightly on the back of a vacant chair, the other on his belt where the worn leather met the hilt of a well-traveled blade. “Jair, from the steppe lands,” he added simply, "my mare waits outside.”
James E. Carter & Itzi Ku




Carter stood near the helm beside Itzi, arms loosely crossed as Arkadios’s spoke to the room. He’d stayed quiet through most of the announcement, listening on and weighing the news intentively. There had been no incidents within the crew thus far and he hoped to keep it that way but his lingering suspicions kept at him.

Itzi, by contrast, was all spark again. Eyes bright and chin tilted toward the horizon. She murmured something about the dinner, how “it might be nice to see what nobles eat when they’re not feeding soldiers scraps.”

She then pondered with a grin that she might even drag Nuwa along, just to see him try and juggle in front of royalty.

Meanwhile Carter gave a small huff of amusement at the interaction between Zoe and the officer. His mind kept at the the mention of military commander and the war still raging somewhere beyond the clouds, then on the gold below deck that could decide the fate of everyone aboard.

Once Zoe gave a shrug Carter straightened slightly. “I’ll attend the morning meeting,” he said simply, “Reckon I’d like to know how things stand with Inbur and make sure our agreement still stands, while I’m at it.”

He cast a brief look toward Arkadios, “No offense meant, Captain. Just figure it’s best to be in the room when decisions start being made.”

He left it at that.
@RevNorv
Like the app. What we're wondering about is what, exactly do you want Ardashir to be able to do? We just want to be sure he isn't outside of the broad power level of other characters.

@InfamousGuy101
Overall we like the app but there's a few things we aren't super keen on.

Breath of Eruherion - Eruherion is the deity. Why would they worship its breath? The Prathmava aren't supposed to be a primitive/superstitious people: they've just chosen not to settle. They come across as quite superstitious in some of what you have written, particularly around the curse (which isn't an actual curse?) though I am open to this being a particularly superstitious tribe that Jair comes from.

As for the powers of Jair's horse. It's a bit much. From a mechanical perspective I don't want the healing involved as it diminishes the role of healing characters, such as the @enmuni's character. I'm also not keen on the 'whispering storm' stuff - it looks like a Fomorian power set: those are the baddies. It also takes away from the distinctiveness of magical characters. If you stick to it being a faster, stronger, intelligent horse with a supernatural, psychic bond to Jair, that's cool.


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