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Fairy Tail: We Are Family

reading Cuddle's cs now, I'll post soon, also @slayerofkings mentioned interest through pm, so welcome and throw a cs up. (in the ooc preferably with a hider

@CuddleKitten

cs review

OOOOOOOOkay, here I go!

Well, all in all not bad, though normally we wait to approve it in ooc to post it in the character tab, but thats fine, its nothing to wig out over like I've seen people in other RPs do.

Some main things I'd like to see cleared up though:
Magic description- Just go into a bit of detail what her shadow magic does. doesn't have to be crazy, but it gives us an idea of what she is capable of

Demon things that fly out of her mouth- mmmmmmkay, well, that is different for sure. But I'm not entire sure about it. Mostly because I don't think a living Pandora's box will be good, though if she could for instance summon particular ones for aid. It does seem to match the niphilim guild, but they are some pretty wicked bad guys from what I read. What I guess I am trying to say is that while I'm not a fan of this, I think it would be ok if you could summon one particular demon to fight alongside you to help make up for the physical disabilities.

stitched mouth- So if she has to stitch her mouth shut to keep from summoning a demon, how does she eat, drink, or talk? because if she can do those things fine then she should be fine without having to stitch it shut..... unless she just uses a straw. And then to have to cut the stitches every time to summon would be a pain. although odd, if I were in that position, i would just get a zipper installed honestly. I'd hate trying to restitch my lips every time. ouch. Maybe she could summon through an incantaion or a tattoo of a particular monster. If you do summon a monster, we'll probably want a description of it too, but hey, you get to make you own pet!

the wings and tail- probably not if they are just out in the open. I would say maybe revise this to a form of shadow magic that forms a set of wings and a tail whenever she needs them.

I swear I'm not trying to be nit picky, I'm just trying to alter things to where it would make sense in the setting. My characters would certainly not like someone rolling up in a straitjacket, wings, and a tail who uses shadow magic (no offense to Morgan) and can summon demons from her mouth if its not sewn shut. There are actual guilds in fairy tail named niphilim and shadow demon. Niphilim is a super bad guy guild that is known to summon demon type creatures to fight for them and shadow demon is a bunch of high ranking bookworms so keep that in mind too.

ps: if you want to show the picture instead of a link to it use ["img][/img"] without the quotation marks or click the image icon when making a post and paste the picture url between the two img codes

and dont think i didnt catch the deadman wonderland reference lol. I was thinking that the picture reminded me of another character, especially with that name haha.

Let's B!tch. I feel it's a healthy release for our roleplay annoyances 2.0

Seriously, and if the only complaint they have is how much you typed, bs it like a school paper.

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If i remember right, it was as in new member to the guild, but I'm not sure how the rules still stand because they are pretty old. i am off tomorrow and I really need to renew the rules and run them by Books.

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@CuddleKittencharacter sheet

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@CuddleKittensure thing! I just closed down the interest check is all.

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Lol, i was gonna mention it but i was like, "meh, thats close enoug." Hahaha

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@booksmusicanime@Keyblade87@Misumichan@ShadowVentus

After greeting everyone, Dremmick made his way over to the others close to the bar. He took a seat next to Ris at the bar while Terra nodded in agreement with Ris. "It does seem nice to have everyone back here safe and sound," she started, "That woman creeped me out." In her mind, the woman wasn't the only thing troubling her. She glanced over at Dremmick, remembering his change in personality in the basement when fighting. If it weren't for Morgan, he probably would have killed that the woman without a though, but that was the unusual part. He was never that outright aggressive before. Dremmick noticed her staring and shifted a little.

"Something wrong?" he asked Terra, who jumped as she realized she was staring.
"Oh! Nothing... I was just wondering how your wound was healing was all," she recovered quickly.
"Ah, that? It's fine really. It was just a graze anyway," He said patting his side where he was struck. He had already replaced the bandages there with new ones and it looked as if nothing happened. "Hey Ris, got any plans for the rest of the day?"

Ander now had his eyes on the other two new people, who seemed like brother and sister to him, though they didn't quite look similar. The bookworm was actually what intrigued him. Not him in particular, but his power. He wondered what kind of knowledge the kid had stored in that mind of his. Far a moment, Ander thought over trying to theif his magic at night, but that probably wouldn't do him any good. The kid's magic type would help him log information, but it would be information he knew, not Nate. So it would be pointless. He didn't know what the girl could do, so he didn't have many thoughts for her. Then there was this Aichi character. if he was the son of Erza, no doubt he would be a requip user like his mother. Question is, what kind of gear would he have.

At this point, Ander found a better place to sit and lean back. He pulled his hood over his eyes folded his arms behind his head. To most he would look like he's napping, and truth be told he was pretty relaxed, but he wasn't sleeping. In fact, he was actually running through his mind how he would fight each one of the new people should he have to. There wasn't much of a reason to it, he just did.

Let's B!tch. I feel it's a healthy release for our roleplay annoyances 2.0

Lol, wow I acually sparked up a conversation! Hopefully I can find a good adv rp soon, but I think I'm gonna sit them out for a short while. Don't get me wrong, I love adv Rps, because I can make a character that I can really show out with.

@vancexentan I feel ya, I try not to leave until the GM calls it as well. I haven't had one silently die on me without a word YET, but I feel like one of them are close to it unfortunately. Seems like its not right to jump into someone's rp, get involved, and the drop out leaving a void.

@Stormflyx Ah, its fine, its nothing you have to apologize for. I kinda knew it would be a little like this at the start, just didn't expect it to happen so often.

@POOHEAD189 YOOO, its been a minute. I'll have to check out your rp later if you don't mind another. Actually high casual sounds pretty good.

@PoiThe Fairy Tail rp I'm in is kinda like that at times. it was the first Rp I joined on this site 3 years ago and even though it got a reboot as a new thread, its still mostly the same people with the same characters. We kinda think of it as an alternate reality at this point. Its had its moments where you could have believed it to be dead, but we somehow kept it alive. Now I'm CoGM on it, which is still kinda new to me but good practice for GMing my own stuff later I guess.

@Inkarnate SO I've noticed. Cant say I didn't have fun with the RPs that died though so its not a total loss. Besides, at least I archiced them so I can pull that cs and edit it for other RPs.

phew, op was right... feels good to post about this stuff.

Let's B!tch. I feel it's a healthy release for our roleplay annoyances 2.0

Well, its funny, because the only rp ive been in that has still been kicking for years is the fiary tail rp i joined and am now a co gm for (and i havent even watched the show past the laxus arc). Its gone through its phases of near death but we have refused to let it go completely. The part thats funny is that its a free rp, haha. Its had its quirks, but it still gets by somehow.

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@ShadowVentus*pooooooke*


Alright guys, I've been working on updates to character's and if i could draw better i would have sketched it, maybe I'll try later. But so far here is my updated Dremmick!

Yes I realize I forgot his mask and that makes me sad, and the hand would normally be covered but I wanted to leave it out so ya'll can kinda imagine his body state. plus you can see a little bit of what his skin was like around his eye for comparison.