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Accidental post.

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@Alfhedil I was iffy about the trivial things, like saber color, but if Mace Windu can have a purple lightsaber I guess you could have a pink or purple one.

The only feedback I will give is to make sure that neither character ends up in over powered god modding territory with their force abilities, since they appear pretty vast. Other than that, both characters look strong. Keep them reigned in and unique and you're accepted ;)

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@Alfhedil I'm headed to bed but I will review it now.

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Also, I feel the need to point this out, and make it a first and last warning. If anyone needs their posts checked over for grammar errors, or inconsistencies with the story, please PM me. I'm always willing to help. However, everyone will get one chance. I'm normally not that kind of GM, but the old days of the guild are kinda dead. The one liner days, and filler days are over. I don't want that kind of RP, where we get five paragraphs of unrelated drivel, bad grammar, and things that are completely non-compatible with the rest of the posts.

So, without seeming like a bitch, this is how I would like things to go.

1) Message me to beta things. I am willing to fix the monumental errors. I, myself, will have errors with commas, and sometimes even spelling, but the basic punctuation, that's easily fixable.

2) I will PM you if I have an issue with something you post. No hostility, and I expect the same respect in return. If things become hostile then it creates a hostile environment, and I will be forced to decide whether that kind of atmosphere needs to exist here.

3) If the issues I PM you about aren't addressed in the next post, I will have to discuss with you whether you would like to remain in the RP, in which case, I may have to start asking that you run your post by me, just to keep other players from being miserable, attempting to keep up with what you're talking about.

4) Finally, keep up with what is going on in the story. If there is a hole in your knowledge, ask questions. For example, currently the Empire is in Jedha. It's their largest supply source of kyber, which they need for the Death Star in the future. Jedha hasn't been blown up yet, and even when it is, the target was simply Jedha city, in an attempt to kill the rebel cell that infiltrated the area. Other places in the galaxy are starting to buzz with rumors of a big plan for the Empire. Just...know what's going on. If needed, at least attempt to watch Rogue One (since Rebels hasn't QUITE gotten to where we are in the RP, yet). I started it here, because at this point, we are months up to possibly a year away from Cassian setting foot on Jedha.

I'm not a bitch. I'm not a tyrant. I just don't want frustrated players, and a dead RP in response. If anyone has an issue with this, please say something here, but do it civilly. Don't question my intelligence...and this is a please.

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Kit leaned her head down, attempting to catch her breath from the sudden adrenaline rush that worked its way through her body as the Troopers retreated. Yomi seemed concerned but satisfied that she settled, placing his cane back against the wall. He smiled warmly at the question being asked of Kit, knowing that she hadn't had much contact with other beings, humans or otherwise, outside of this temple.

Kit looked back up at Yomi, and sighed, the painful reminders of her past being brought up, "I don't normally talk about it."

As the broken whisper left her throat, Yomi grunted, taking a long drink of his tea. Kit's eyes met his and she sighed deeply, "Um...Not by choice. My-ah...my family were killed during the Jedi Purge. Mandalore was under control of some...some horrible people. The Duchess was murdered. My family. My mother died to try and save her, during the small rebellion. My father..."

Kit broke off, a tear threatening to sting the corner of her eye, before she gritted her teeth and stared down at her once bright blue armor, "My father died during the seige. If not for Barron, I would be dead. But, he abandoned me, here."

Yomi grunted once more, "Barron was a Clone Trooper. Cut his chip right from his head, and saved this one. She was lucky, and brought to us by the force. The force wanted you to survive."

"Yeah. The force...", Kit whispered once more, "I couldn't tell you why..."

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With Jedha, currently the Empire is in the process of harvesting the crystals. Getting into the temple is all but impossible. However, as was mentioned above, smugglers hitting convoys wouldn't be that out of the question. Stormtooper armor is pretty weak...obviously (their helmets don't protect them from being knocked out by a staff). So, by all means, rob them :)

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Also I will go over CS in a bit. I'm currently getting ready for work.

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If anyone was curious, Jedha looks like this now.

Jedha

If I remember right, the Imperials reported it as an it a mining accident.
I wonder if Scarif looks like that now, it was a really pretty place.

@Skyrte

I think Scarif might have been a total loss. They fired on her pretty hard. But maybe not, because Scarif still didn't explode like Alderaan

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@Burning Kitty Yeah. I guess I should have been more specific. Jedha City is going to be blown to smithereens lol

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@Ghost Shadow I went ahead and made a follow up post :) I'm enjoying setting this up.