KatherinWinter

On the Streets

@Always It isn't that I am afraid to write too much. I am afraid to give too much away too soon. I worry that my descriptions make no sense where I put them. I hold myself back because I don't have confidence. And with ever RP that fails I feel less confident.

On the Streets

@Always That's the problem. My descriptions never feel like there in the right place. I describe a room before the characters enter and then they decide not to enter. I wait to describe a room after the characters enter then someone else describes the room.

On the Streets

I didn't lose interest! There's just not much happening with my character.

@Framing A Moose

Which is a problem. It's the streets. There is always things to do.

On the Streets

Descriptions are my biggest problem. I never know where to put them. I also dont want to give away too much too soon. I also don't like to assume things. A lot of the longer posts I've seen make alot of assumptions. I have been writing since 5th grade. Which was a LONG time ago.

On the Streets

@LiegeLord It's my fault when people lose interest.

On the Streets

@Always@LiegeLord@Carlsberg
You all make me look like an beginner. I am proud if I can do 400 characters. I have done more but I need a partner to push me. I had the idea of building a group into a mini gang. Not necessary law breaking violent kind. But unfortunately.....

Soul Eater

@Evangaline Then you will have to wait for someone else to post in between your characters. It's too confusing if you do it back to back.

Academy of Tomorrow for Godlings.

@Overlord24 That will work. Your approved.

Soul Eater

@Evangaline You don't have to double post. Something simply like

Katherin went outside
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Bob ducked under the blow

or

Katherin went outside

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bob ducked under the table.

Lords of the underworld

@Framing A Moose

1. No one seemed interest so we are going to wing it.

2. Most have without knowing it. Secrets knows every persons secret within like half a mile. Some have more control then other.

3. Umm.....sure...I don't think it would be that easy though.