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I'll see about posting as Diana s soon s I'm able and have her return the plug to the core. She'll deal with the bomb Killa Kans on the way there.
@The 42nd Gecko

My next post is pretty much done, I just didn't posted it yet because I have to add a couple more lines to deal with Axon. It will be up today, either way.
Actually, I think I'll wait. It's sort of a clusterfuck right now, I'll wait for KoL to post before I drop Aeolia in there.


Don't worry, I'll be posting again yet today and most likely move things forward a but.
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You did write it extremely well, I've got to applaud you on that, 'cause frankly I'm jealous ha. I did notice a couple of typos, though, but that's just me being nitpicky haha.

I generally use colour to make it easy to skim-read what's going on, and to make it pretty.


Thanks. The odd typos escape me sometimes. Nevertheless it's good to know that my writing is on a decent level.
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Perhaps give each sister a different colour when they're speaking so we know which one is speaking? :D


Well, I can color the text, yes. But I always think that it's more of a matter of writing skill than visual effects that helps make characters distinct.

At least for me, I just put color on character speech because I find it pretty, nothing else
That turned out a bit bigger than I though, but intros are always the hardest. I really hope I did it in a way that properly portrayed the twins as they are supposed to be. Two and at the same time one.

If there's any confusion regarding them, do tell me. I have some experience with twins (it's one of my favorite tropes) but it can get get confusing to others if not done well. Please, tell me if you need me to make it more clear.

Either way, I'm going to sleep now.

See ya!
ReinhardtTwins

The day was beautiful and shining when the Reinhardt twins arrived Saint Lilium's gates, in a very nondescript taxi that they have boarded about an hour ago as they left their room at one the annex city's best hotels. The breeze carried the sweet scent of cherry blossoms inside the black sedan as one of the sisters lowered her window, prompting a sigh from the other, who went to lightly rub her temples, as if she wished to dispel a migraine.

The twins had arrived back on Nipponese lands yesterday, after spending half a day on board of an airliner in a Berlim - Tokyo flight and then a few hours by train and car until they finally reached their hotel with like fourteen hours left before current time. Needless to say, such a long, nearly non-stop, trip tends to take a toll on anyone's body and, at least one of the exquisite looking twins made that quite apparent.

"Argh... can't we go back to the hotel and come here tomorrow, Eins? I'm dead." Eris complained as she took their bags from the car's trunk while Eins paid the driver, leaving quite a large tip that was unusual for a Japanese. In fact, it was Eins' fault that Eris couldn't rest anything in the few hours that they had.

"How can you say something like this, Sis? You was the one who wanted to stay up until late. Either way, we will have plenty of time to rest later, is we don't rush we will lose the opening ceremony."

"Sigh..." Eris refused to go through the bother of recollecting what they did. Her head hurt too much for that, but the fact is that Eins was the only one to get any real sleep, leaving her sister like a grumpy, old bear. "Do they even do things like that here? I don't remember it from last year."

"Well, you know how the Japanese value pomp and circumstance. We should drop our things by our room and see where we should be headed to, now. I just hope they put us in the same class again. In truth, there should be a law against separating twins."

"Fine, let's just go, I think I'll go to the Nurse and get an aspirin, or tea, that should help it. Anyway, I think others will get annoyed if we stand in the way like that."

"Right, Sis. Is it my impression or this place is more packed than last ye-ouch!" As Eins and Eris began to walk, the older of them lost her attention momentarily as she gazed at the courtyard full of blooming flowers, both literal and figuratively, and kind of ran, face first, into another girl that had just got out of a black Japanese sedan and exchanged brief parting words with an older man, presumably her father, given the intimate tone of their behavior.

A fierce, redheaded beauty and, if any of the twins could place it, of heavy Frankish descent, though traces of oriental people could be seen on her face, especially the eyes, and silhouette. A half-Japanese, or haafu, as some of the locals so obnoxiously insisted to say.

As Eins struggled to recompose herself for a moment, Eris stepped in, to avoid any misunderstandings that might happen. "Please, accept our apologies. My sister and I arrived from Berlim less than a day ago and jet lag is still taking a toll on us. By the way, I'm Eris and this is my older sister, Enyo, but you can call her Eins. Even if the circumstances are a bit mixed up, it's a pleasure making your acquaintance on this first school day of the year, miss..." Eris made a brief pause to allow the other girl to introduce herself, in case she wanted to, of course, as she extended her hand in a very clearly Western greeting.

"By the way, I'm sorry for the bumping. If I broke anything, please, let me repay you in whatever way you think is best." Eins said, joining her sister in the greeting proposal.


@Crooked Vixen
Yuuno
Name:
Yuuno Kurogami
Height:
157 cm
Weight:
50 kg
Hair Color:
Black
Eye Color:
Slate Blue
Age:
16
History: [indent]Yuuno had lived most of her life as a sheltered girl, growing up in the house of her remarried father's wife's parents without really having any connection with the conservative elderly couple, even though she doesn't hate them by any means. ... Yuuno got flabbergasted upon hearing that her cousin plays no video games, even DGO, and fearing for Yoshino's future (who at this pace, might as well become a bum, once she graduates), Yuuno tries her best not only to make her cousin play DGO and join the Bruisers, but also reveal what she knows about the Black King, who Yuuno has a bit of a secret crush for.... Not the brightest gem on the crown, but far from being the dullest, that's what Yuuno is.
Yeah, I have way too much time today. Should I just, get rid of it?


You don't need to. I was just remind you, nothing else. Don't worry.
@CelticSoldier

You may not have seen the notification early because you weren't here at the time, but to avoid speed posting, wait at least 2 posts after your last post before you reply again. This is to make the life of those with less free time (like this who speak) easier.

I don't want anyone dropping the story because they can't follow it.
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