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9 yrs ago
Current You did good, McGregor. Made us proud.
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9 yrs ago
No offense intended. But there's a sweet spot on the sliding scale of realism, and most of the interest checks I usually see skew too far to the realism end for me.
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9 yrs ago
Can't describe how quickly I go from excited to sad when a mecha premise turns out to be realism wankery.

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Hey, I forgot to express interest in the Int Check but I was planning on doing something with @Crimmy. If that's still permissible.
I actually have something else we'll need to figure out before starting up IC.

Who is living with who?

Rohrbach made arrangements that all participants be moved to the apartment complex just outside his lab for easy access to the students should anything go wrong (he lives at the lab). So... It's co-ed and but males can't room with females, but they can be on the same hallway.



Actually, I'll draw out a map here in a bit. For now, work on getting paired up for rooms. Otherwise, I'll randomize those too. :P


Write and I talked a little, and we'd be perfectly happy having Acheri and Soleil as roommates.

Annoyingly long/technical post ahead...

(Technical details excised for space efficiency)


This sounds a lot like my research for next fall. And it's all completely accurate, but (in my opinion) it might be a dose of realism it might be easier to overlook. If the good doc has moved all our characters into the apartments for ease of access, it's easier to assume that he more or less standardized the rooms. Because otherwise we have to go through the extra little bit of mental gymnastics to figure out why college students who signed up for experiments to help pay the bills might be in an expensive floor plan, and the rest might be in a cheaper one.

Just seems a little simpler to more or less standardize. Just my two cents, I don't feel strongly about it.



So Millade went for the roof. That was Ben's observation, at least, once he could be sure that the body far below the base of the window couldn't be human. The dried blood on the wall said that whoever had climbed out (almost certainly Millade) was injured. Frankly, Bastille's leader wasn't too optimistic about her chances. If she'd been up there long enough for the blood to dry, she would have had minimal cover while the Grimm overran the facility. Still, they might have been too preoccupied with the other staff to check the roof. And, frankly, if this Millade was stubborn enough to shove a Grimm out a window instead of dying, then she might have been stubborn enough to stay alive.

Spite was a hell of an anesthetic.

Either way, he needed to either rescue or confirm her death. No way he was leaving anyone unaccounted for in this mess. He let Caletfwlch split again, just for the moment, while he slipped Artorius and Lawnslot back onto his belt. He'd need both hands free for climbing. He crossed over to the window in a few quick steps, pausing briefly to yell instructions back to Amy before he left. "Amy, get Moss out of her room and over to the cafeteria. I'm heading to the roof for Millade. Tell Lauren where I went, she'll tell you what to do from there."

"Back in a sec." Satisfied that the Hawk Faunus had heard him, he deftly swung his legs out of the window and braced his feet against the sill. His upper half followed a second later, hands reaching up to close around the top edge of the window and begin the process of pulling himself up. He was moving as quickly as he could to minimize the time he spent outside, using just a small Deinamig boost to give his arms the edge they needed to pull him up quickly and easily.

He'd reach the roof in just a few moments.
"Great work, Kimiko-chan!" Daisuke crowed victoriously, flashing the other student a quick thumbs-up before he refocused on the DRUs in front of him. With the way he grinned, you'd think he'd already one. Maybe in his eyes he already had. Maybe in his eyes the presence of Miyamoto Daisuke and Kimiko Saitou and the embodiment of their spirits, allied with a mechanical fiend turned to their side by sheer force of will, was already proof of victory. Not that the DRUs were very eager to allow him his defiant attitude. The pizza bot he was previously fighting had taken it personally and started to charge him, while two of its brethren moved to flank.

But things were different now. Now, he had Benkei.

The samurai pushed Daisuke back with a forceful shove to the chest, one that the teen didn't fight even the slightest. To the contrary he took another step back himself to let his Persona move in front of him, effectively tagging the much more qualified entity into the fight. The two flanking DRUs were doomed to be outright disappointed, as their fireballs struck the Persona standing where his master had previously been and the flames were simply absorbed into his being. Not that the warrior was paying them any mind.

It, instead, was drawing back its naginata and swinging the haft directly towards the oncoming DRU while Daisuke shouted "Bash!". The collision of the two forces would be interesting to say the least, but the eldest Miyamoto didn't plan on being up close to see it. In a rare showing of better judgement he had elected to start withdrawing a few paces towards Kimiko, Kaguya, and the newly-flipped DRU to let Benkei be the new point of their formation.

He was much, much better equipped for it.
Angel Ferrara - QT-800 Model 101


Angel mulled over Cyare's offer carefully. It wasn't like he'd never cooked for strangers before (though he used the term strangers, he tried to get to know them first, he wasn't a floozy like Kaia said [and she had no room to talk, given all the times she'd tried to profit off of her unsuspecting best friend's acquired traits] he was, and he wouldn't cook for just anybody) it had just been a while! He needed a minute to shake off the rust! It didn't reflect on him as a chef, and once he got into the swing of it he'd be fine!

...

Oh no, where was that metaphor headed?

He blushed faintly and "hmmmphed," subtly biting his bottom lip.

"I'm gonna need to know your favorite fruit. Smoothies are a good pre-mission staple and should be consumed when possible."


Cyare Staunton


"Uh, apples?" The Tactical Mage answered, a little noncommittally, after a few moments of thought. She had never really considered what her favorite fruit was, given that she only really ate what was present and affordable. So having to pick was certainly new. She took a seat quite quickly, since her offer of help was unnecessary, and leaned her sword against the chair to watch the proceedings. "But anything is fine."
Oh, don't get me wrong. I'm not trying to force you to change up everything. I'm just saying that for people who've watched the UC (and people like me, who have watched it waaaaaay too comprehensively) you're going to start running into some issues with the timeline placement. Which is why I'm just trying to point some things out now, before you have to deal with them later.

I don't necessarily mean you'd need to dip into series that are completely different from the UC, but you might want to consider branching off from the canon UC route after CCA. Because like I said, almost nothing happens between CCA and Unicorn, and then after Unicorn nothing really happens with the early UC anymore. All the stuff after that is Late UC, which is a whoooole different can of worms.
Honestly, setting it after CCA is... Problematic. The Sleeves weren't a major military force, more a terrorist group. They had minimal manufacturing base, and only really began as a group nearly two years after CCA, just in time for the Laplace Conflict. And they basically dissolved to rejoin the Federation following the Laplace Conflict, which really only took place between the Nahel Argama and Frontal's crews. There's just almost nothing between the end of CCA and the start of Unicorn.

So, to be perfectly honest, you'd really need to either dedicate yourself to going mostly AU following CCA or set things during a time where the greater conflict isn't so defined. The Gryps Conflict and First Neo Zeon War were both pretty small scale in terms of what we saw; the Argama (and later Nahel Argama) were only parts of the overall conflict. We, for example, didn't see much of Karaba versus the Titans on Earth or any Federation forces versus Haman's Neo Zeon. That era could work pretty well.

If you do go AU, I'd advise carefully thinking out who you use for a villain. Delaz was never really a follower of Zeon Zum Deikun's philosophy, he was really just a revenge obsessed ass with a grudge to settle. That's why he had basically no plan past "We're gonna colony drop the Feddies again".

I'd also probably advise looking over the general state of mobile suits in the UC; while I can see why you would restrict Gundams for the most part, a lot of them actually have mass produced counterparts. And most of the Gundams, unlike in AU Gundam series, aren't inherently all-powerful mobile suits. The pilots are the OP ones. The Zeta and Double Zeta both had true mass produced counterparts made by Anaheim, and even grandaddy RX-78 had some derivations produced in limited numbers. And almost all of those Gundams (RX-0 not included because the Unicorn really is ungodly OP in a Newtype's hands) were either matched or completely outmatched by mobile suits in their same series. The O was a beast of a mobile suit, for example, that Kamille could only beat due to Newtype hax.

Long story short, you might want to consider carefully what era you set it in, and who you use for your antagonists.
Well, frankly, a Gelgoog was actually a better suit than the original RX-78-2 by the end of the OYW. The RX only continued kicking ass because Amuro was Amuro, and the only truly powerful Newtype we saw during the OYW. Char was a bit of one, but he never really had much power. By the time he got his Gelgood (and certainly by the time he got his Zeong) Char had better mobile suits than Amuro did. Amuro was just the better pilot.

I'm not saying OYW suits will be able to take on all of the CCA era's mobile suits, especially not with a halfway decent pilot, but standard Gelgoogs were a decent threat as far along as ZZ. And the Earth Zeon remnants in Unicorn almost completely overran Torrington base using mobile suits that couldn't be any newer than 0083. Long story short, something at least as recent as Zeta or ZZ should be able to hold up in the CCA era just fine. I mean, the Sleeves in Unicorn used a lot of Z and ZZ era suits.

Have you considered who the villains would be? Char's gone by this point, so Full Frontal?
Aaaand barring some minor tweaks, this should do it. Happy to answer any questions about anything that might seem unclear, and looking forward to feedback.


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