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Do tell me if you see anything on mine.
I see nothing wrong with your species or anything else. other than the fact that they are not enslaved by the X'Cor
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Do tell me if you see anything on mine.
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I'll admit, I hadn't looked over Mardox's C.S. yet. I've only been focusing on those who had finished their C.S.'s, or were mostly done. You'll notice I didn't really comment or criticize you until you were mostly finished, and I always waited for others to make some progress as well.
I find it's a good excuse for laziness.
But thankyou for bringing it to my attention. I'm going to look over it now, so I can decide if it's OP or not xD
The average, non-military Mabronnan can lift up to two thousand pounds.
gives the Berserker rapid healing while in a rampage and also serves as an anesthesia for the purpose of eliminating pain.
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You know what I just realized?
The X'Cor could get away with SO much more evil and slavery if they were just a little diplomatic.
Consider this: other than the Namilee, most groups they've enslaved were primitive, unadvanced races. So, when the X'Cor enslaved them, they took them from a primitive environment to a much more technologically, medically, and scientifically advanced one. So instead of calling them slaves, they should call them "the Uplifted" or something else nice like that. The X'Cor could claim that they are only enslaving the primitive races as a way of making a place for them in modern times, and allowing them to live with far more advanced medicine and such than they ever would have at home. They could try and play it off like this was a good thing.
Now, obviously, the X'Cor are still horrible slavers, but if they manage to advertise it right, they could make it seem like they're actually being charitable.
"We're not enslaving the primitives, we're providing them with shelter and a modernized lifestyle, in exchange for simple labor!"
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xD It's okay.
Maybe you can get involved in that upcoming human-Xim war. You need slaves, afterall!
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So you basically just followed my example and wrote a bunch of world-building, mood-setting fluff?

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No sweat, dude. I just went through Finals week myself.
Take your time. I'm looking at extending this turn anyway.