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17 days ago
Current First writing contest after my hiatus went well. Now to start planning the next. Keep an eye on the sidebar!
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3 mos ago
*blinks* how long did I sleep?
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12 mos ago
Away from home until the end of July.
2 yrs ago
Away from home between October 26th and November 10th. Contests will return when I'm back home!
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2 yrs ago
Don't forget to vote in the writing contest! The link is in the sidebar <3
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Hello everyone. I'm Dutch, a mother of a 12-year old boy and I love both rp-ing and writing.

I've been writing and roleplaying in Dutch and English since 2002. I joined the RolePlayer Guild in 2014 and since May 2020 I'm one of the contests mods.

There are times I don't have much creative energy and will be silent for a while, but in the very least I will try to keep the writing contests going.

If I haven't replied in a while, feel free to poke me. Genuinly, I sometimes need reminders that you are waiting for a reply. I don't ghost on purpose, I promise. Time is just a weird thing sometimes, and if something happened 3 days ago, 3 weeks ago or 3 months ago can feel pretty much the same and I often don't realize how much time passed since my last reply. And if I read your reply and accidentally closed the tab there is a good chance I might forget I was supposed to reply because I lost the visual reminder T_T

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"Of course," the nurse said and she handed her some paper and pencils. "There you go, sweety. I'll return shortly to see how you are feeling. You can tell me about everything you feel, even if it sounds mundane. It's not complaining when you tell me you have a headache or experience dizziness, okay?" She flashed a smile and then left Ray on the bed with the drawing utensils.




Marc watched Sara leave, feeling confused about the whole exchange. After a moment of hesitation, he walked away but the things both Benjamin and she had said kept circling through his mind. Why was Benjamin afraid? What did Sara want him to believe? Maybe... maybe he could look into Simon. Sara and Benjamin, something was going on between them, why else would Sara react so emotionally to when Benjamin was dragged away. Oh god, they weren't a couple, were they?
He stopped himself from thinking that. Focus, he told himself. Simon first, it should be easy to confirm he had gone home. With that information he could tell Benjamin there was nothing to worry about and maybe Benjamin would stop being this defiant. He nodded to himself. Since Benjamin believed Simon was dead, all he needed was to prove he wasn't and things would get better.
Benny flew towards Arceus and when they reached him he sat down on the table. "Thank you for hosting this party! It was great and the nectar amazing, I've never had better!" Benny began, deciding to go first. "Can I perhaps have some for on the way?" It was perhaps bold to ask something like that, but he didn't want to take any without permission. It seemed like a bad idea to steal from the most important and powerful Pokémon in existence.

"Me too," Michael said as he watched his Cyndaquil return Eros's greeting. "If his father agrees. We were close to Darkrai before and... that may happen again." He clenched his fist when he spoke those words, he had been taken captive by Darkrai before and he'd rather not be in that position again, but that was a real possibility.

"A friend he grew up with," Kim explained, glanced to where Benny was going. "He is a gym leader now and one of the co-founders of the Rorie League. Benny knows him better than I do, I only met him when Andy returned home from the Kanto and Johto regions, Benny was with him before he left the islands"
She felt nervous in Benny's place for approaching Arceus like that. How did Benny do that?
Fenna was about to retire for the night in her room when James found her and asked her to come for a moment. She took a sip from the ale but left it in her room before going to where James wanted everyone to meet. Maybe she'd have a moment to herself after this meeting. Hopefully it wouldn't take long, she needed some rest after the long day of walking and fighting and more walking.

Once everyone was together and James explained the situation, Fenna pondered his words. MacKensie was the first to share her thoughts and she found herself nodding to what she said.

"If he understands the risks and wants to join us, I have no objections," she said. "We have a gold contract waiting for us and we can probably use the help, especially if he is from here. We know too little about this world, I'd feel better having a native with us." She paused for a moment. "And I'm not in the contracts for the fame and glory, I'd be happy to share that with anyone who can help us, I just want to know what the message is that is waiting for us."

She sat back after that, she had given her thoughts and now she'd wait and see how the others felt about it. In the end, the decision wasn't hers to make, but she appreciated James had brought it up for discussion first. A sign of good leadership.

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The contest is over and we ended with 4 entries!

I'll be putting up the voting and feedback thread up today, keep an eye on the sidebar!
We are at 2 entries and it's the 29th. 22 hours and 27 minutes before the deadline, so if you have written something, now is the time to submit it.
After MacKensie left, Lilliana gestured to Fenna to wait a second. She didn't mind, so she went to the nearest bench to sit and wait for Lilliana or both Lilliana and Mackensie to return. It would have given her a moment to think, but at this moment she just felt tired. Exhausted. And hungry. She nibbled on some rations as she waited for companions to return, taking away the worst of the hunger. Today had been a long day and she was feeling it; she wanted a meal, a drink and a soft and warm bed.

Fenna would wait for the mage before going to the inn the others had gone to, listening to anything she wanted to share with her.

Now that the cube was no longer in their care, she felt a bit better about their situation. The need to constantly look over her shoulder and scan the crowds was gone - the water ninja didn't have a reason to go after them anymore. If he wanted the cube, he had to take on the academy now. Still, being as tired as she was she didn't spend a lot of time sightseeing, she went in a straight line to the inn.

"Still no Heineken?" she asked Zell, before turning to the bar and requesting some ale to take to her room. A drink before going to bed, but she didn't feel like staying in the busy tavern room.
Benny turned to examine Sparky going towards Arceus and then flew off as fast as he could. If he was going to complement Arceus he might as well do so right now, especially since the others were worried about Sparky. He caught up with Sparky just before reaching Arceus and had a happy smile for her. "Let's go talk to him together," he said to her.

Michael watched Sparky wander over towards Arceus, the very thing he didn't dare do. At least Eros understood. He grabbed his backpack to look for a Pokémon treat and handed one to Eros when he found it. Since they were waiting he might as well make the wait enjoyable. He smiled when he saw Lytse extend his paws and gave him a treat as well.

Kim watched it from where she was; it was admirable that Benny didn't hesitate to assist Sparky, and that he dared causally fly up to god of all Pokémon. "He's always been brave," she muttered and then turned to Frosiien. "Benny was Andy's first Pokémon, they met because Benny approached him. Or, well, approached Andy's honey sandwich to eat it, the fact there were two humans near that sandwich and him being a small Caterpie didn't stop him."
"Is there anything you would like?" the nurse asked. "Something to read, or some TV perhaps, maybe some drawing paper? Or you can rest if you are tired. Just let me know if you need anything. And, of course, let me know if you experience any side effects, okay?"
She smiled at Ray as she waited to see what would happen, or if Ray needed anything.




Marc stared at Sara. That... was true, she was a patient here, but he still felt the need to defend himself. "I did speak to the patient I treated," he said. "Although, well, Carol was catatonic and couldn't reply. Rebecca screamed at me every time I said anything, no words, just screams, and Tim is muttering to himself all day long and doesn't reply to anything I say. Rose is actually kind and thanks me every time I give her something to eat or drink or hand her her pills and Simon was always up for a chat, but got distracted by the voices in his head a lot."

He paused, Simon was brought up by Benjamin, for some reason Benjamin was adamant he hadn't gone home. "I don't know what you want me to talk about with the patients, but during the time I worked here I heard nothing out of the ordinary."

Again, except for what Benjamin had said, who sounded a lot more level-headed than most patients. Then again, even Simon could have moments of being seemingly normal, right until he replied to someone who wasn't there. "I don't know what you want from me..." he said at the end of his explanation.
Okay, when I posted it was actually a little over a week. Now it's 4 days, 12 hours and 38 minutes before the deadline.

Time to wrap up the writing, read it through a final time and submit it!
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