lydyn

Legend by Fire

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If Asher's family comes along, so do the rest of the Many Banners. A group of four professional, highly-trained warriors should be enough to maintain relative safety. Of course, they won't be quite good enough to mount a full offensive on any major enemies, but they will be enough to defend the group's assets.

@Earnest Evans

If you're really that determined... work things out with Irisity and then let me know when it's all final - I'll look then. ^.-

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Aww how cute! You got so excited about my character that you even spelled her name wrong! ^.^

@Midori

... ^//^ Not my fault you have an awesome character... *Pouts*

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Oh no, his wife and children are following him.

@Earnest Evans

*Bites lip* ... it's quite possibly they will be in danger and maybe even die. Are you really sure you want to keep this part of his character? Unlike Asher, they are not power houses and not likely masters of anything (since masters are pretty rare as it is, it just made sense legendary characters were also masters of their trade). Of course, the group might try and guard them, but no one really has any idea what is in store for them along this journey. I don't even fully know (I don't plan super specifics but instead a general plot so players can interact and change things freely).

@Midori - The alchemist is approved without any hesitation on my part! I am adoring her!~ Sana is accepted!! She will definitely have uses. ^.-

@Spawnling - Good work. ^.^ Accepted! I'll add the castle churchy thing soon to the characters tab.

@Jerkchicken - Sadly this character seems a bit out of place for this adventure, I'm sorry. I can go into detail, but thanks for applying!

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@Irisity, I hope that I haven't stepped on any toes in setting my character in Ybella. The concept of a land that has a heavy focus on mercantilism and heavy regard for the capital elite is fascinating to me, and so I tried to expand upon that with Asher.

@lydyn, I've added more detail to my character, and altogether made it easier to read. Hopefully, he'll be able to serve as a foil to several characters.

@Earnest Evans

Just a quick note that I want addressed before looking again - I didn't mean his father and mother. The family I was referring to is his wife and children. Why would he leave them behind? Or does he plan on dragging them along for the ride? xD I mean, does he not see his wife and children as important people in his life? Almost seems like... they're just there because it was expected of him vs. actually being in love.

The medieval thing I can kind of accept, even though this is a medieval fantasy and some things are expected to be different, but a lot of people consider 16-18 adults too - so that's cool.

WILL BE LOOKING AT EVERYONE ELSE SHORTLY!~

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Expressing my interest! I'll start working on a character and kingdom sheet if that's alright.

@RyanTadashi

Well, we're approaching the character limit... so it's fine, however I'll only be looking for CSs that really pop and grab my attention. And especially one that can work with the current cast.

Edit: Heading to bed soon, so if you don't see me reply... that's why. ^.-

Edit II: And off to bed I go~

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Haha, alright, if you say so. It's very kind of you! Is there anything else that needs amending for Tylan?

@Mivuli

Surprisingly (for me), that's it!~ He's accepted!

We're about reaching our limit though. I have total of six approved characters, and three that I'm waiting for completed CSs in hopes of approving. That's a total of nine characters... so unless one of those three pull out, or the remaining make exceptional CSs, that's probably it. ^.^

In case you're wondering, I'm waiting on @Raijinslayer, @Spawnling, and @Midori. That totals at 5 females and 4 males.

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I don't mind waiting, though I hope you don't inconvenience yourself in the process. Do you have any suggestions on a middle ground where you don't have to go out of your way? And no, Tylan won't be irrationally sticking a dagger in anyone anytime soon, I think. XD Maybe I should rephrase that part a bit.

@Mivuli

Wouldn't be terribly hard to run the group that way first... though it is going all the way from the north to the south, haha. Meanwhile I can try and keep him preoccupied with the shadows that seem to be spreading everywhere. Yeah, I could work it I think. ^.^

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@Inertia - Not only have you put up with me with all these edits, but you've definitely shown dedication by sticking with it over and over. If you can show that same level with the actual role-play itself, you're accepted!

@Mivuli - Hm, very well done character and I think you're right - nothing done to show a level of resolve like the others, though he did show bravery. The only concern here is namely - you'd have to be on your own until the group made it to the port. I don't him traveling all the way inland to the mountains, given his personality and history. Also, as long as he doesn't actually stab anyone for no reason, his personality is okay, haha. I'm just worried about being away from the group... I can whip some things up, though it might be tricky.

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Updated!

@Inertia

One more edit and it should quick - I'd feel more comfortable if his lightning step was somehow limited to bursts and it wasn't quite so fast as to be like a teleport (like it seems to read). Maybe slow enough for the eye to see, but most people (even trained masters) would have difficulty keeping up? Otherwise he's looking great!~

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I am back from sleeping, and now I'll adjust my CS accordingly.

Also, question, was the kingdom I wrote up fine and accepted?

@Inertia

Oh yeah!~ I was just waiting for your character to be approved first. ^.^

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@Earnest Evans - The question still persists here, Evans... why would a man, let alone making his own order which he's supposed to have a life oath to, ever willingly leave his own family? It simply doesn't make any sense to me. I think the only major thing beyond that is... his children have become adults "long ago?" Was he like fourteen when he had all three? Saying long ago implies 25-30 of age, but he's only 40... haha (which I get is the max age). I'm not entirely sure where you were going with having a wife and children, honestly.

@urukhai - Well, because you threw some new flaws in there, now it has a few errors sadly. ^.^

Riding: I'm not sure I'd really count this as a combat flaw. Characters might end up riding horses, but much like most medieval fantasies, roughly 99% of fights will not be from horseback. So this is hard to take advantage of.

No pain: Hmmm.... not really a flaw in the traditional sense. This would more go as a side-effect of your Deep Magic then an actual combat flaw.