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@ClocktowerEchos, I am now done with both sheets. Can you please check them out?
I am just waiting for the IC..
Here is my finished company/country while I start on the CEO/President. Tell me if there are any issues. I will add my character onto this post as well, so keep an eye out.



@LazyEgg & @smarty0114, I like your guys characters and format. I especially like Andy's backstory and Wells's personality. They are both accepted.

@Trooper, I am not sure how I should feel about Patrick. I can understand him being apart of a gang that's slowly disappearing because of the police, but I don't think that the town would have an Irish mob. Your personality is fine; however, the backstory doesn't reveals much about his life. Where was he born? How did he join the local gang? Why? Why did he come to Baltham? You should share that kind of stuff in your background. Fix those things and mention me so I can re-read it.

Also, don't post on the character tab unless you are accepted.
I am also working on my sheet.
@ClocktowerEchos, could you mind to look at the history to see if it sounds reasonable? Just avoid the grammar mistakes for now...

Finales are over.
Kevin Wilson....
Alright, I am now officially free from school until January! I have started on taking look at the sheets already posted and so far they are good. Give me time to finish reading it and posting my opinion on it.
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